BAS ITNA HAIN TUMSE KEHNA- MaNan OS UPDATED PART 1/2/3 ON PG 6&7

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Now that was indeed a cute start...😆

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Chitra John

@chitzjohn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

heard d song.. nd its awsm...
he wsnt evn abl to confess his love..
vl manan story b lyk ds..
lukn out fr ur frst part soon..

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome awesome and very sweet story.

This was a beautiful feeling too reading this.

You wrote very beautifully.

Keep it up. .👍🏼.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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Chitra John

@chitzjohn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

did it srsly gt ovr?????
it ws so nyc ..
while readn, wen i rchd d part whr she tls i am engaged..i flt.. oh no.. ab toh sab kuch khatm ho gya... wt vl hppn etc etc...
i lovd d climx f ur story... ur an exclnt writr dr.. :-) :-) :-*

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aishaph

@aishaph

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

It was beautiful
End part was amazing
Manik's confesion was awsome
Love it

Edited by aishaph - 9 years ago

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Apoorva Rath

@angelsparkling1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome

loved it

loved the ending

such a cute story
Hehehehe

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Simply beautiful...marvellous and a tale that would elate your heart with joy...fantastic...😊

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

looking ur excitement i was already so excited nd my expectations had gone really high...bt it was not like what i expected... 😕
it was literally beyond my expectations... 😉 hehe .. 👏
i seriously loved it..
that first meet of manan was so cute...nd then that car section when nandu pulls his cheek..manik was bowled over her nd i was completely bowled over both of them... 😳
those cute moments of bike riding...baarish...ice.creams...i jst loved it..!!.that jealousy..even it reflected his immense love..!!

nd when manik was going to propose her i was feeling as if i m going to propose someone...i was feeling so nervous..i know i sound childish bt i was praying ki nandu should say yes..!! 😆
bt when she said she is engaged i was beyond shocked..i though shit a sad ending..!! bt then she said she loves him..nd i was like yeey ...i m so happy..!!
as if i hve won as oscar...hehe!! bt really i loved it...loved the ending as well as the beginning..loved the family..manan nd their cute little one!!! once again a great job!!
lots of love nd admiration fr this beautiful story!!!