MANAN FF : JUST YOU AND ME chapter 10 page 68 (10/2/2016)

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Sakshi_maheta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Awesome update
loved it very much
next part update soon
cant wait for the next part
take care dear😊

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anshika garg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

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Chapter : 6 Stealing Some Happy Moments
Part : B

When everyone left for food court , Manik and Nandini also left for beach. Throughout the journey to beach Manik didn't left Nandini's hand. Nandini also observed the tenseness his body language. He was holding her hand more possessively. Back at mall also he held her more close to himself.
Nandini thought this was all due to the morning incident. She knew he was afraid that he can loose her and she wanted to make him feel secure about her presence and calm. She also wanted to be happy now as after 5 days its their marriage. So Nandini initiated the talk and said ...
Nandini : Manik please tum meri ek wish puri karoge ? Hmmm...
Manik who was concentrating on driving looked confused at her sudden question... He also knew that something was going on in her khurafati dimag ... So playing safe he said...
Manik : Angel have I ever said no to you ...? Hmm ... Bolo maine kabhi bhi tumhari koi baat taali hai kya...
At which Nandini nodded in no and said...
Nandini : Manik phir bhi promise me tum meri yeh baat manoge ... Haan promise me ...
Left with no options he nodded and said ...
Manik : okay baba.. Thik hai bolo kya wish hai meri Angel ki...
Listening this Nandini like a small 4 year kid start clapping and said...
Nandini : yaay Mani... My wish aaj hum dono nange paon beach per ghoomenge aur phir hum pani mein bhi aise Hi walk karenge ... Pata hai Mani bahut maza aayega ... Yyiiipeee...
Listening this Manik was shocked... He decided to say no to her but seeing happiness on her face he decided otherwise. He said ...
Manik : okay baba ... Jo karna hai kar Lena ... But let me drive so that we can reach there ...
Listening this she poured and kept finger on her lips and kept quiet. Seeing her cute antiques he chuckled and smiled widely and start driving. Seeing Manik smiling she was now calm and decided to transit him at beach.

As Nandini had strong medicines in morning she dozed off after 2 mints on Manik's shoulder only. Seeing her head on his shoulder Manik again smiled widely.
After some time they reached juhu beach. Manik looked at Nandini who was still asleep on his shoulder. Seeing her sleeping peacefully he didn't have heart to wake her up. So he sat there admiring her. After few minutes Nandini wake up. She noticed that she was in so deep sleep that her saliva has come out of the mouth and his stick to his shirt. Seeing this she was so embarrassed se rubbed his shirt with her hand where saliva was and looking down said...
Nandini : am sorry Mani ... woh mujhe pata hi nahi chala intni gehri neend kab aagayi... Maine toh tumhari shirt bhi kharab kar di...I am really sorry Mani...
Seeing her innocene he smiled and said sarcastically...
Manik : main bahut naraz hun tumse Angel... You spoiled my shirt ... So bad of you...
Listening this Nandini who was already in guilt was now verge of crying as she thought he was serious... Seeing her Manik slapped him self mentally for making her cry... He said...
Manik : arey Angel ... Nandini... It's okay ...don't worry main toh mazak kar raha tha ...yaar aisi toh aur shirt bhi aa jaaegi ... Don't waste these precious pearls of yours ...please don't cry... Yaar tum mujhe batao except you has right to spoil my shirt ... No one ..it's only you ... Tumhare paas saare rights hai meri shirt aise kharab karne ke liye... So please don't cry ...please...
Listening this Nandini smiled and hug him and said...
Nandini : I love you Mani
Manik : I love you too Angel ... accha ab hurry up mujhe apni Angel ki wishes bhi toh puri karni hai...
Listening this Nandini remembered her wishes which she made some time back... She became excited ... She removed her shoes in car and run towards beach without wasting any further moment also she was so excited that she didn't wait for Manik too ... Seeing her expressions Manik also removed his shoes and and went towards Nandini. In hurry nothing forget to take there mobile phones with them.
While at hospital
At hospital Aman found out the problem with Nandini and was thinking to tell Manik as soon as possible. He was trying Manik and Nandini's phone numbers but none of them was picking up the call. He was thinking Nandini's case is so serious that they need to take action for it as soon as possible. He decided to go to Manik's home and then tell him directly.
But to his dismay Manik and his parents or rather no one was at home. He asked Butler about everyone's whereabouts he told that Manik's parents went to farmhouse for there wedding preparations and Manik was out with Nandini and his friends. Listening to this he decided to wait until Manik come back. He told Butler that to tell Manik he need to talk to him when he comes back while he's waiting for him in guest room.
While at juhu beach...
Nandini reached there as soon as she stepped inside she felt cool sand under her feet and when cool breeze hit her she felt so peaceful. She closed her eyes opened he hands felt the cool breeze. Just then Manik came from behind hugged her from behind in same position. They were standing there in Titanic position feeling each other's presence... They stood for several minutes in same position in each other arms...
After some time Nandini came out of trance and observed many people staring at them. She then blushed and dragged Manik to an isolated corner and hugged him. Manik who was observing her actions smiled at her innocene... He thought how cute she was looking while blushing... Be chuckled and said ...
Manik : Nandini tum bhi na... Hum husband wife hai naa... Tum mujhe kahin bhi hug kar sakti hoo... Why you are blushing so much... Haan... Are you not comfortable with me...
Listening this Nandini was shocked and Manik smriked seeing her shocked state... Nandini said...
Nandini : Manik tum aise kya keh rahe hoo... Obviously I am comfortable with you and only you and no one else except you ... I love you Manik... And no one can decline this fact...
Listening this Manik can't control himself and burst out laughing and said ...
Manik : Nandini tum na kitni innocent ho yaar... I love you too... And I know that you aren't uncomfortable with me ...I was just joking baba... I love you Angel... You are the best...
Nandini listening start giving fake angry glare to him ... To which Manik said...
Manik : Angel stop giving those fake glares I know you aren't angry with me
Nandini : haww Mani ... You know you are so bad ... You always do this to me ... Jao katti I will not talk to you...
Saying this Nandini pouted and to Manik pecked her pout and said...
Manik : but I toe love you woh bhi bahut saare ... And Angel lying is bad manners I know you also love me and this universal fact you can't remain without talking to me... At the end of the day you always start talking to me... So please sorry and I love you...
To this Nandini smiled and said ...
Nandini : I love you to infinity ...
For some time they sat there talking... And after some time it was time for sunset to which Nandini stand and run towards the sea... To which Manik also ran towards the sea with her and stand there. Water was reaching Manik's chest and Nandini's neck to which Manik hold her from waist and bring upwards and then both saw sunset together...

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After sunset when Manik started leaving but Nandini hold his hand and said...
Manik : Angel kya hua ...?
Nandini : Mani I am fine ... Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe... Listen Agar tum mere saath hoge naa toh mujhe kabhi kuch nahi hoga ... Please don't be sad ... You know I can't handle myself when you are sad... I also become sad ...please
To which Manik can't control himself and hugged her tightly as he can't her what is the exact matter why he is so tensed. He let flow few lone tears from his eyes ... Which seemed to be eternity they broke hug when he felt Nandini sneezing ... To which Manik panicked and took her to car in his arms ... And Nandini smiled seeing how possessive Manik was for her...
He bring her to car and made Nandini sit inside the car and give some clothes which they just bought from mall... Then he covered car with car cover so that she can change...
After changing Nandini knocked on the car window and said...
Nandini : Manik you can come in...
After this he came in and on the heater and started going to Nandini's home... But Nandini stopped him and said
Nandini : Manik please you also change na ... Tumhe thand lag jayegi...
And after he handed some clothes to him to change and went outside the car covered the car so that he can change...
After some time when Manik changed they headed towards Nandini home ...
After dropping Nandini to her home he headed to his home...
When he reached home he saw that there was no one around. Manik called the Butler and asked him...
Manik : Kaka sab kahan hai ...?
Kaka : Manik baba sab farmhouse par chale gaye hai aapki shaadi ki tayaari ke liye... Apka phone nahi lag raha tha isleyi aapko nahi bata paye... Aur Manik baba aapke dost Aman baba aye hue hai.. Kuch bahut important baat karni thi isliye guest room wait kar rahe hai...
Listening that Aman is here and need to talk something important he rushed to guest room without listening full thing of Butler...
When he reached guest room he saw Aman roaming in the room... Tension was clearly visible on his face... Seeing Manik Aman came to him and took him inside the room locked it and sat in front of him. Then Manik stammeringly said...
Manik : Aman w..woh Nan..Nandini ko kya hua hai... Pl..please tell clearly ...
Aman : Manik ... Buddy look you have to be strong for her.. You need to take care of her..okay ..
And then Aman took a deep breath and said..
Aman : Manik it's that Nandini have a big clot around her memory nerve ... Due to which there is heavy internal bleeding in her brain ... This bleeding has started one day back that's why she fainted... For its cure we need to operate her ...
Listening this Manik was beyond shocked... For him shock would be an understatement... After listening this he didn't said anything just sat on the floor with a thud... Seeing his childhood best friend like this Aman also started crying because on one hand it was Manik and on other it was Nandini...
He hugged Manik and tried to calm him down... He said...
Aman : Manik buddy please be strong for her ...please you need to decide what you want at this point... We need to operate her after 3 days buddy as more delay will lead to increase in internal bleeding...
Listening this Manik calmed himself a bit and said...
Manik : Buddy Nan..Nandini theek toh ho jayegi na...
Saying this he started crying uncontrollably he hugged Aman and in his each sob he was saying only one name that was of his Angel his Nandini... Aman calming him said...
Aman : haan buddy after her surgery she will be fine ... Buddy after 4 days is your marriage and before that is surgery of Nandini... You need to decide... Also buddy please please be strong for Nandini as the procedure is very very painful ... You need to be strong and give her confidence she can handle it ...please Buddy handle yourself... Please...
Aman stand up and made Manik sit on the bed gave him water to drink... Manik drank water and tried to calm him self... More he tried more he started feeling terrible...
While at murthy mansion
After having shower Nandini packed her bags but again after few minutes only she started feeling dizzy and she was alone at home she can't decide what to do... So she called Manik to help her...
In MALHOTRA mansion
Manik was now calmed a bit and was discussing about Nandini's case. Just then only his phone rang ... And seeing the caller id he again started crying... Aman said
Aman : Manik call pick karlo nahi toh may be she get tensed and this would not be good...
Manik calmed himself and answered the call...
Manik : hey Angel ... What happened everything alright is waqt call q kiya...
Nandini : Manik please come ... I am again feeling dizzy... Manik please...
And the call hung up...

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Hey guys I am back
I have updated this chapter...
I guess this is the longest one ...
Sorry for not able to reply to your comments
And
Sorry for updating late ... It was so because my exams got postponed and it finished today only ...

So sorry...
So guys please like and comment ...
For pms buddy me...
And yes I will now update on alternative days...
Thanks for your wishes for my exams...
Take care...
Keep smiling ...
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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

res

unres

so am finally here to unres...

update was hell amazing and shocking too...

the way manik was tensed for her..and she sensed it...and released his tension...

it was way too beautiful to be expressed in words...

aww...they hugged each other...and she got all blushy blushy...hehe...choo chweet...

sh*t...aisa kyun hue nandu ke saath...oh my gawd...

manik is hell broken

and y was she feeling dizzy

hawww...shaadi se pehle operation

uff...it would be painful...'

waiting for nandu to know bout this

omg..how will she react...

plz.update soon

waiting for nxt

LOVE

SANJANA

Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Wow... nyc update. . I hope nandini ko kuch na ho. .

Beach date was too cute..

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Nandini has a clot in the brain..

Useko kuch bhi nahi hoga na?

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Awesome update. Loved manan's bond to core.the way manik protected her and full filled her wish was fab.omg nandini is having blood clot in brain nerve and she must be operated asap.that was shocking. Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.keep writing.

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Diksha8011
Nandini has a clot in the brain..
Useko kuch bhi nahi hoga na?

I promise Nandini ko kuch nahi hoga
After all this they will have more strong bond...
Thanks for liking it
Take care
:)

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Tiara115
Wow... nyc update. . I hope nandini ko kuch na ho. .
Beach date was too cute..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

Nandini ko kuch nahi hoga
I promise
Thanks for liking it
Take care
:)

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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: anshikagarg126

Unres soon
:)

hehe...i will try to unres by tomorrow...no commitment

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: archu_asok
Awesome update. Loved manan's bond to core.the way manik protected her and full filled her wish was fab.omg nandini is having blood clot in brain nerve and she must be operated asap.that was shocking. Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.keep writing.

Thanks for liking it
Stay tuned
Take care
:)

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