ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake(new ff) [ON HOLD]

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ThakarMegha

@ThakarMegha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Awesome update...
Nandini ne manik ko mirchi vala pani pila diya...
N she cares for him...
Waiting for next update...
Update soon...

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Nice funny update.
Balloon part was hillarious. 🤣
Can't control I'm laughing like a mad.
Innocent Nandu.
Will wait for next part.

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acromantla

@acromantla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Hi... Jus came across ur stry n i mus say that s a vry new stryline and n awesm one at dat... Luvd t.. It had al d emotions n abv al funny too... Wud luv to read further n ya thnk you fr d awesme plot...

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Hilarious chapter

Loved reading it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Princeraj1425

@Princeraj1425

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Wow Amazing. I was laughing like hell while reading the whole update. It was too funny.
That deo joke. And then nandu playing with that box thing hahahhaha...
And at the end that chocolate and chilly water scene yar.. ... Awesome.
It's something different that I'm liking in the story.
Waiting for nxt. plz update soon.

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Wowww Amazing part

Sooo Enjyd

Something different in this story is
there

Plzzz post asap yr

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Hey that was nice..👍🏼.

First of all welcome back as you have been updating it after a long time...🤗

Now back to the story bichari Nandini has to do the clean up and Manik has to come up with such a bad excuse asking her to spray his deo so that she doesn't take his advantage, like really?

Dude and she really cleaned the whole room..

And the water thing was hilarious...🤣

God chilly water, good for Manik...

But she also helped him..

But notorious Manik had to replace all the coffee with water..

And God she really had thrown water on him..

God knows what trouble has she called on for herself with this bravery act of hers...

I request you this time please don't take long to update..

Will be egarly waiting...😳

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Awesome... Just amazing.. Really liked it...

That sleeping water thing was sooo good...

N cold coffee wala part was also amazing

Loving the story...

Thanxx for the update n the pm

Stay blessed

😊

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blue__berry

@blue__berry

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Hey Guiter !!
Blue berry here 😆
It was awesome!! Sacchi mucchi !!
I loved it!! Poor Manik...tuch..tuch..tuch..
Feeling bad for him...seriously.. nandu ne mirchi khiladi.. :p
But trust me it was really fun to read!!
Continue soon..
Take care

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#320

Thanks for the pm
Loved it
Lol that condom part was too funny can't wait for nandus reaction when she find out lol
She was happily playing with it ahaha
N loved her prank m also how she helped him
Update this story more often
It's good n fun reading it!

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