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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww Amazing part

Congratulations for this new story of urs

Already a fan of yours and ur work

Soo no need to say much

As ur a born talent package babes

He he

Eagerly waiting for next part dear
Do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Love you sissy
Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Will be egarly waiting for tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

Wowww Amazing part

Congratulations for this new story of urs

Already a fan of yours and ur work

Soo no need to say much

As ur a born talent package babes

He he

Eagerly waiting for next part dear
Do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Love you sissy
Vidhi

Thank You very Much dear😃
i m boy so call me rahul okay
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveIsManan

Will be egarly waiting for tonight

in next 5 min update come
wait😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank You Guys for so many likes and comments

i know its very late but i don't know because i already tell u that i lost my 6 pages work and i have to write again but this time it is not long enough like before because i can't write that much big again

sorry for late phir bhe

enjoy this update and tell me did u like it

i will be waiting for your response


Part 3


Manik went in hall and sleep on the couch and nandini start cleaning the room.


Nandini saw that room is very dirty bears can, packets of chips and namkin is spread around the room, room is complete full of smell of alcohol, nandini feel like vomiting so she cover her face with her shawl.


Suddenly nandini saw that manik is again come inside the room but she didn't bother his presence and start doing her work.


Manik Pov


Manik is sleeping on the couch suddenly he notice that he forgot his phone inside the room so he went inside the room and saw that nandini is covering her face because of smell of the alcohol, he don't know y but he said


Manik: Nandini if u wants u can use my body spray deodorant in room like room freshener so that alcoholic smells not come.


Nandini: no its okay I can manage


Manik: I didn't said it because u covering your face, it just that in night when I will sleep in the room, I don't like to take this alcoholic air inside me otherwise I will be high and you can take advantage of me so spray it around I don't want to take any risk and he wink at her and take his phone and leaves again.


Pov End


Nandini hears him and got angry but she is afraid of him that if she will not agree then he will again come near her and touch her and she don't feel like these new sense nation her body. She didn't answer him and when manik winks at her she open her mouth in a o shape and thinks y he will always wink at me.


Then she again start doing her work, she collect all the packets of chips and namkin and put them inside the dustbin,


Nandini notice that the dustbin is not used from last few days and it is stinking very bad, nandini feel like vomiting their itself and she run inside the washroom and clean her face by water and take good air for sometime,


Then she thinks about manik said and said


Nandini: I think I use deo other wise I will die without reason.


She went inside the room after covering her face completely.


She went direct to the almira of manik and open it she is searching of deo, she saw that all his cloths are so messy and only 2 3 dresses are putting aside neat and clean, she thought to teach him a lesson.


She took these dresses and start doing cleaning the room with his shirts and pants and then put them again inside the almira. Suddenly she notice that there is a small portion inside that almira nandini open it and found maniks wallets, watches , some diaries , coins and some money Is inside it, she is trying to find deo inside it and she take her hand further inside she notice that there is some small small packets inside the drawer at the end of drawer and we can't see them without taking them out,


Nandini pulled out that packets and saw that they are looks like packets of supari and all


Then she read the name of packets all the packets are having different name


She read 1st name


Masti, 2nd Manforce, 3rd Skore Blues, 4th Dhoom , Pure Passion washable, Crystal sparkling, Trojan, Durex, Lifestyles, Beyond Seven, Trustex, inspiral, Kimono, Pleasure Plus, Crown, Ria, Impulse, and all have different flowers, like chocolate, strawberry, mango hot etc.


She thought these are eating stuff so take one packet of chocolate flower and open it. Because she likes eating chocolate.


She takes this one packet and put all back,


When she open that packet she found a transparent bloon type thing inside which is smell like chocolate and looks like very wet because of the stuff which is spreading on that bloon, in real thing that is lubricant used to make it wet stink and fertile so that when we use it it will not feel more friction. But she thought it is bloon and she put the mouth of that bloon on her lips and start blowing air inside the bloon , and as much as she pass air inside it, it will start speading and taking a shape of pipe , after pressing as much as air inside that it will become a size of one hand, she become happy after seeing it and start playing with it, she is trying to press more air but her breath is come to end and she can't blow more,


She is playing with it and suddenly she notice that what she is doing and start playing and she thinks that she will play later after she clean the room, so she put that bloon inside her almira and start cleaning room.


She went again inside manik almira and saw his deo putting inside him messy cloths and she take out, she is spraying it inside the room and forgot that how much she can spay and suddenly air stop to come out, and when she notice that she finish all the deo inside the room, she dot afraid and put back that bottle in his almira and start cleaning room,


She thought that if she will clean the room then manik will not say anything.


Then she take a broom and clean all the room, then she saw maniks double bed and found all wet and dirty in alcohol because bear can is empty on it, she took all the cans and put them in the dustbin, she found one can of bear half empty and thought what I should do with it, then she notice the prize of it and her eyes open with shock due to high prize and think if I will through it out then he will got angry on me and she put it inside manik almira very carefully at the front so that when manik open his amlira he will see and use it later,


Then she change the bedsit of his bad and put this bedsit in water inside washroom for clean,


But can't find other replacement and now the wet bed easily shown more from far,


Nandini thought in her mind, it will be good with her, if she will take this big bed then she has to sleep on this wet bed and notice that her small single bed also cover with bear cans all not empty she carefully take out all the cans and put them in aside and notice that her bed is not wet and she take out new bedsit from her bag and put on her small bed and then smiles herself after seeing so much clean room.


Then she notice the time and saw that its 7 o clock of evening and she don't have anything to eat


She went outside the room in hall and notice that manik is sleeping like a child who has his mouth open, she think something went inside the kitchen and take a bottle cold water from freezer and come out, then she went near manik and open that bottle and put some water inside the mouth of manik and notice that there is no effect of cold water infect he has drank all the water and open his mouth again, she again fill his mouth and he again drink, and like this she make him drink all the cold water.


She got irrupted and found that manik is not sleeping and he wake up very early and trying to sleep, she went inside and mix some red chilly in the water and come back


She saw that ,manik has open his eyes and he notice her coming out side so he again close them,


Nanidni saw and and smirks and said


Ab aayega maza


She went near him and saw that he again has his mouth open and more bigger than before,


She full his mouth with full of chilly water and then she saw that manik drank that also and she is shocked to find no reaction till also


And then she notice that this time manik again open his mouth like before but also open eyes as well and notice that nandni Is again coming closer to his mouth to full fill again and he shouts


Pani, Pani, Mirchi mirchi, pani pani and run side the kitchen and took out a cold water bottle and drank in one go


But that chilly effect not comes down


He is searching something sweet to eat but found nothing and tears start coming out of his eyes and he again went near wass besin and take out his jeeb under water and start clening her jeeb so that fire of chilly come down


Nandini notice that manik is running inside the kitchen like mad she start laughing and also wnt behind him


She notice that he is drinking water and she is watching him from the get


Suddenly she notice that he is searching all the dibba of the kitchen but not found anything and he again come to the freez to found something to eat


Suddenly nandini notice that manik eyes have tears in them and her smile vanish at that second and she is regretting her decision of doing this prank on him


She saw that he went near besin and put his head under the water


She is feeling very guilty for him and went inside their room, she take out a dairy milk from her bag and come back to kitchen and found that still manik has his head inside the water


She went near him and put her hand on his solder


Manik feel like someone standing behind him but he don't want to take risk to take out his head from water suddenly he feel a hand on his solder and he saw that nandini is standing there with guilty eyes his eyes are red and his jeeb is outside and water coming out of his nose


He again tries to turn but nandini hold his hand and take him outside and


Make him sit on coach


She pass him chocolate but didn't said anything


Manik didn't take chocolate and looks towards other side


Nandini make him look towards her and take out chocolate from riper and again pass him, but he again don't take it


Nandini smiles on his antics but didn't said anything and take that chocolate near his mouth because his mouth is already open due to burning


She put that chocolate on his jeeb and saw that he closed his eyes


Manik saw that nandini is trying to make him eat chocolate but he don't want to eat anything from her because he is angry on her but when she put chocolate on his mouth he feels like he is sitting in heaven


And nandini take out that chocolate from his mouth and think something


And went inside the kitchen


Manik notice that she take out that chocolate back and he is cursing himself for not eating it because how much that chocolate give relief him no one knows better than him


He is looking towards kitchen like a small kid who is wishing that his chocolate come back to him


He is looking towards kitchen with hopefully eyes and saw that nandini is come out with two big cups in her hand


A small smile come over his face saw nandini coming back


Nandini also noticethis smile and give smile back


She come near him and sits beside him


She put both the cups on the table in front of them


Manik is looking towards cups then towards nandini and again towards cup he is not knowing what is happing


Nandini take one cup and start drinking


Manik notice that other cup is still putting on table


He notice that the cup nandini is drinking have hot air coming out of it and saw that the cup on table is not hot and small small water droplets are made around it means it is cold like ice


Manik didn't said anything and took that cup and start drinking


And when the liquid inside the cup come in the contact of his mouth he feels like heaven and drink all in one go and said


Manik: can I have cold coffee?


Nandini laugh on his question because he is looks like kid who is asking one more chocolate after eating one already


Nandini stop laughing and said


Nandini: yeah inside the kitchen there is more cold coffee I have made for your friends also if u want u can use it


Manik listen it and run inside the kitchen not hear later what she said


He saw that a full jug of cold coffee is placing inside the frees


He take out jug from the freeze and drank all coffee in one go and fill the jug with water and put back inside the freeze and come out thinking something and smiling like a fool


Nandini notice his smile but didn't say anything and she notice that her hot coffee also finished so she went inside the kitchen to put cup back.


Suddenly nandini notice that manik come outside without coffee cup she found it weird and thought to check inside the jug


She open freeze and saw that the jug is fill with water and no cold coffee inside it


She is shocked after seeing and shouts


Manikkk


Her voice is so loud that her voice reaches in the room of fab4 also


They also listen it and come running inside the maniks flat


Manik also come inside and stand near door and start laughing


Fab4 come inside and saw that nandini is shocked standing in kitchen with a jug full of water and manik is laughing like a mad person


Fab4 is happy and shocked because they today saw him laughing like a child who don't have any problems in his life at all


But suddenly they notice that manik smile turned into shocked face because nandini throw all the water on manik from jug and went away from their outside the flat after taking her purse and banging door behind.


Fab4 also shocked with nandinis this act but didn't say anything and looks towards manik and thinking what will manik do now?


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tell me guys how is it
i know i know that promo part didn't come in this update sorry for that
i have given you guys that promo on page 29 on the besis of my previous work of 60 pages which i lost because of my careless
so i promise in next part promo part will surely come
till have fun and enjoy

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so please give me response

its upto u ki u comment or not i will not force u but don't said me for pm if u can't comment okay


i will be waiting for your response




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MyGuitarVina
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Edited by MyGuitarVina - 9 years ago
LoveIsManan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was good..
I'll give you a proper comment when I free...
Right now I am in rush...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha awesome update
Actually very funny
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ha...ha...ha...😆...🤣.
Update was really fun to read...😆...
Our nandu is so innocent...she thought that it was balloon...🤣.
Nandu ne to achha maja cakhaya hain Manik baba ko...😆.
Cont soon.
Thanks for PM...😃.
Take care...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey nice update full fun n nandu made him drink chilly water and his mouth burnt and ste choclate but manik ne kya kiys nandu left angrly
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Posted: 9 years ago
funny update..

ballon
😆

Hohoh poor manik
aacha acting kar raha tah..
nandu Gud job 😆

glad to see seeing manik laughter
all fab4 are happy

thanx for pm

keep smiling n take care

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