ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake(new ff) [ON HOLD]

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shruti_gupta

@shruti_gupta

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Amazing update...
Manbir and their bromance...it was so funny...
Loved the way manik was concercerned for nandini...and the way he replied to Alia...
Eagerly waiting to see what will he do next to send nandini...
Update soon...

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Hi dude you have written it very nice...
it's good to see a guy because mostly girls are only there in this forum..
keep going..

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Noor

@CROCKOMICHI

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Wow this roomate concept seems intresting. Cabir loved to innoy manik broromance heheheh. Manik b bht chalo hai per miss murthy b kam nahi. I hate mukaliya. Poor nandini have to clean whole house.

Update soon.

And pm me next time

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za90

@za90

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

hmm nice

nd manbir rocks

waiting for the next update

continue soon

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lavanya

@Lovelylav7

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Lovely update..Lovely story line...but one suggestion I'm unable understand bad means bedroom or bed ?...Please b specific

Thanks for pm me..

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Amazing story yaar..
Manik thought that he can trap her...but she was way too smart..
Lets see how they will pass this amazing journey..
Cont soon.

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SHYPN

@SHYPN

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

majja aa gya . .nandani bhi smart hai.. I like dat beauty wid brain... jealous alaya, baba cabir, monster +majnu Manik... great mixture.. 😳
Excited for next part... Update soon

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Aleena

@cute-aly

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Hi Rahul

Great Update dear

Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Thanks for pm dear

Very very interesting going on. .story.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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Princeraj1425

@Princeraj1425

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Wow the update was awesome.
Loved laughing like hell during the convo of manbir. That was so funny. Hahahhaha... . .. .
It reminds me of manbir of the show.
Eagerly waiting to see how manik gonna fail in his every attempt to send nandu out of his house and more manbir hilarious convo.
Update soon and plz PM me.

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