Manan ff||Unnatural Disaster|| chapter 6 page 95 (16/3)

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Amaziing update. ..loved it. ..too good...

Dear I really love yur story line...!!

Grt wrk...keep it up...

N the update was shocking. ...

So nw...married. ..😲

Eagerly waiting for your next update. ..

Bye tc stay blessed. ..!!

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nara26

@nara26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Nice update
Haha manik we are married 😆
Tnx for pm cont soon

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urvxshi

@urvxshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

OMG manan fight..it wld b fun to watch them under one roof...pls update soon

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Awesome update

And manan nok-jok was cute and superb

Poor pandit he was stuck between manan

But the last part when manik said that they are married nandini was so shocked

Amazing update

Superb update

Fab update

Cute update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Omg ... I totally loved this update seriously ... Matlb it was jst awesome awesome awesome ... Manik nd Nandini's constant sarcastic verbal fights were ... Idk what to say ... Jst mind blowing ... Too gud ...

They were fighting lyk cats nd dogs ... Ha ha ha. Nd tht pandit was a scilent spectator ... Hw was only observing their constant comments on each other ...

U know I loved the last one most ...

"Do i look like a fool to you!" Manik screamed

"See there isnt any doubt on that!" Said nandini to manik 🤣🤣🤣

I was imagining the look on Manik's face after tht ... Hahahahaha ... They did all tht verbal fights fr nt staying in the apartment together nd the solution pandit gave them, didn't left any option fr them bt to stay together ... 30,000 is a very big amount to pay ... Not at all easy fr them fr now I think ...!

So finally they were ready to stay together nd tolerate each other bt everything got screwed up ... Tht pandit messed up everything fr them... Bt Manik Malhotra aisa thodi hone de sakta hai ... So he came up with a brilliant plan ... Nd shouted ... "Wait WE ARE MARRIED "

This was a shocker fr everyone present there ... Especially fr Nandini ... It was a 1000 volts ka jhatka ...

U know I'm super duper excited fr the nxt update ... Nd thank u fr this amazingly awesmmm update ... Hats off to both of u fr this update seriously ... Kya likha hai !!! Lajawab !!!

Waiting fr the nxt update ... Plz plz plz plz post sooonnniishh ...

Are I forgot ... Kya apartment tha yaar ... Matlb seriously ... Aisa ghar mile toh I'll toh b on cloud 9 ... Kisi k saath bhi reh lu ... 😛😛

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Prashi26

@Prashi26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

The update was truly awesome!

I really love the verbal fights and that too super sarcastic ones!

They are amazing fun to read!

Pandit was the silent watcher! Hehe

The story is really shaping good!

Do continue soon!

Thanks for the update and pm too!

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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

hola...

cool...humorous...laughter stock...haha...loved it...

inna acha...inna zyada acha update...👏

sir its pandit, pandit trilok chaurasiya". Manik looked at him with an eyebrow crooked flashing weird expression at what he just heard.
(Which parent with straight set of heads will give such names to their child) manik thought while looking at pandit contently.

(haha...😆😆😆...seriously...)

they were fighting like...tom and jerry...war of words and sarcasm...

hehe...they dont even want to stay together...and cant leave the flat too...ab kahan jayenge bachke...

"same here manik !! its just that i need this flat..so i am agreeing ... And don't worry! There aren't men helpline centres but women helpline centre... You decide where u gonna call... And yes, tu mere type ka nahi hai!" Nandini said with a smirk and such bold statement by Ms Murthy was quiet a shock for manik's soft heart. Just then pandit entered the room searching for them, jumping like a hungry ox.

(hahahahahaah...ROFL...yeh toh female vesion of cabir nikli...)

But suddenly manik screamed out loud.."hey pandit !! Wait WE ARE MARRIED "

(manik...really he said that...sachhi mein...ab kya hoga...)

update toh jaldi de diya...very very happy...bt nail biting ending dene ki kya zaroorat thi...

ab jaldi se nxt update bhi chahiya...

lazy heads...there...just like me...plz.request...jaldi update de dena...plz...

akku...thoda au nag ka mishu ko...so dat we can get nxt update too.jaldi jaldi...

continue soon with are laughing dose...and the awesome writing of u both...

LOVE

SANJANA