#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 96

Amazing
Speechless

Poor manik...I feel pity


First he hurt her so much and nowhe is so guilty


But in a way or other he should make up for his mistake

Just a chotu sa request
Plzzz dont let nandu show her foregivness sooo easily

Im eagerly waiting for manan's scenes
How manik will get her foregivness


Tysm for pm do pm me next part
Happy lohri babes
Vidhi

So sad.. poor manik...

Amazing update dea. ...

Awesome update
finally manik realized his mistake
waiting for the day when manik will get to
know the truth about nandinis pregnancy
continue soon

Awesome update & story!

pls do update soon! 😭😭

liked apology of his...good writer...I m great fan of u

Waiting for the next update..want to know what is nandini's reaction to manik..! The only ff on if that I really look forward t . ! please post the next part soon. ! happy sankranti.

Awesome!!!!

Simply wow... U bring in the emotions nicely ... Loved ur creativity

Wow.. Amazing. . Fabulous. .. ab jakr manik realise all his mistakes.. finally... n usne un kids ki bat ko man liya. . or sbke samne mafi mang raha h.. nicee.. manik hurted her very much.. soo manik ko bhot bhot hardwork krna pdegaa.. manik ki vo line was just superb. ki tum mujhe forgive mat kro. me earn kruga forgiveness. .. to make fall in love wid him.again. just wow.. waiting to know nandini's reaction. but I want ki manik bhot hardwork kre kyuki nandini bhi bhot hurt h.. or manik ko pregnancy complications k bare me kab pat chalega.. I wnat him to know.. but I soo love this ThaT was so amazing. . yar seriously u write so very well... just love to the core. .. u r so expressive writer. . keep updating. . waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. thanks for this update. . thanks for pm. .. enjoy ur timee . have fun... Stay blessed Love Geet