#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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yams_ini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Lovely

Amazing

Super duper update

Loved reading

Cont soon

Waiting

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HTA111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Truly heartfelt speechless epic mindboggling wonderful update

I just felt like crying the way you depicted Nandu pain omg how much she is carrying pain inside her that now her tears dried off even she is hurt badly only her heart is crying but her eyes are dried

Manik will regret every moment of giving pain to her and what if she dies giving birth to the baby will he able to forgive himself for torturing her to such extent that she dint care about living anymore and prefer dying

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Eagerly waiting for next part

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Bijal Shah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Awesome update ... Feel super bad for Nandini ... Can't even imagine the pain she is going thru ... U Hv penned it beautifully... Anxious to know why Manik's is doing all this ... Update the next one soon ...so give a hint please

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anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Shit man
U r scaring me
I mean end m Nandini is not going to die right
Plzzz yrr no Jo krna h kr lena
But Nndu ko alive rkhna plzzz
Nd ya awesome update
Hope mnk Ko jldi smjh aaye
Tht wht he has done
Thnk u for pm
Love you

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nara26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Nice update lovede it
Super duper update
Aa oor nandu fill so bad for het
Waiting for next part
Tnx for pm cont soon

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jashanpreet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Damn I am crying...
And be it little rhymes and stanza poetry ...i loved it...
Your words are mesmerising
And I really wana know manik's p.o.v.

Welll...when she said that she womt be there...it hurt mw...and really vry badly