#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 6

hi,

Congo for the new thread
Its one of the very rare stories which has a mix of realism,fantasy and comedy
Its so attractive that i dont think anyone cud manage being receptive towards it
Its every ingredient,be it romance,dark,realism,comedy or fantasy is in the right amount and just makes u hungary for the next dish to be offered by the author
In other words,its simply BEAUTIFUL,and that dark touch in the story just adds a cherry on the cake

Congratulations for the new thread

Congratulations for ur New thread. ...update fast...waiting. ...& thanks for the pm. 😊 😛

Congratulations for the new thread...

Hey
Congratulations for the new thread...
;)
Keep smiling
Stay blessed

actualiy i loved this ffs bcz it has comedy romance fun jaleausy possissivness love dark side it has showed lots of things that's why well i hope the dark zoon get to end soon but also i really wont to witness this dark side bcz no life is perfect so it happens even in real life miss understanding and lots of things well i knew manik is going to be really bad in the next few chapters as he has a reason foe it wich we still dont knew :p and maybe hid deeds are going to hurt our baby nandu alot so as expected manik should suffer a bit after he knews the truth as hurting the one you love is hard so it's hard for mani and also hard for nandu so see what's his reaction about it and after knowing also that nandu might be in danger bcz of the baby so i'm eagarly waiting for it to see i hope you will update soon so we can read and give feedbacks

Congrats... 👏 👏

Keep smiling...

Originally posted by: wissam

actualiy i loved this ffs bcz it has comedy romance fun jaleausy possissivness love dark side it has showed lots of things that's why well i hope the dark zoon get to end soon but also i really wont to witness this dark side bcz no life is perfect so it happens even in real life miss understanding and lots of things well i knew manik is going to be really bad in the next few chapters as he has a reason foe it wich we still dont knew :p and maybe hid deeds are going to hurt our baby nandu alot so as expected manik should suffer a bit after he knews the truth as hurting the one you love is hard so it's hard for mani and also hard for nandu so see what's his reaction about it and after knowing also that nandu might be in danger bcz of the baby so i'm eagarly waiting for it to see i hope you will update soon so we can read and give feedbacks

sorry for the long update :(

Awww thnk you so much dear glad u found so much in this story or yes i am going to burn manik in hell so don't worry at last i wanted all of you to adore his character and i will make manik like so no worry enjoy it

Originally posted by: shoana

congratulations ashu for new thread🥳
i just love this story
because
firstly the concept was totally different
and it contains some dark parts and i love reading such stories
then your hilarious tadka to it😆
and most important thing you potrayed nandini's character as a strong girl who wants to save her marriage as well as never let anyone play with her self respect
you never showed her as abla nari
and about manik's character i know when the mystery will be revealed the reason for his behavior would be justified
and i am really addicted to it😊
plzz continue soon

Her character was my first priority i never liked nandu as abla nari or cry baby she is a fighter or she will be till the end the no matter what she is going to fight or at last she will be the ultimate winner or glad u like the story line thanks fr the comment