#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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angel_emmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#251

awesome update
totally loved it
keep writing dear

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sayumanik

@sayumanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

wanna read the next chapter... plzzz dnt kill me for this bt plz try to update the next part asap... plzzz its e request.. addicted to ur story...

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Ahh finaly that day which changedt it is out. .god impulsiveness leads to much trouble. .
I lyked ur's pov. .
U r right. .
If ur loved ones wants to go let them go, if he or she comes back than u r meant to be together

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Res

Phew !!! Finished reading

Now I can comment

Hey Aashna

Thks for the PM

What to say , kya bolu kya NahiNahi😒

Finally the hidden part is here.

What actually happened

What Manik saw is clear.

I knew he must haven flown early back from his trip to be with her

And also that Manik must have seen Nandu with Dhruv

And he got everything wrong.

But Manik apni Jagah galt Nahi hai

Koi bhi husband essa Khich Dekhe ga aur woh baayenge sunega toh esse hi react Karegi

Putting all the things in their places, it was bound he misunderstood all of it.

But he was so sad n broken

He remembering everything from the start, sitting at the children orphanage .

He is ready to let her go, that easily. hmmm !!!

But inside I think he still must be having some hope that everything will be ok

That all was a bad dream

And off course it's a bad dream

I don't think Neyonica character is negative

But when u r the writer Aashna one cannot predict.😉

So taking a leap of six months, mmm,

No yaar , esse toh Nandu healthy baby ko birth Nahi dege

She will remain sad always, so it will affect baby too.

Sooch le Aashna

Take a leap but may be of three months or may be till they go for their first ultrasound songraghy.

Seeing their baby for the first time , hearing heart beat for the first time .

This can bring them a little closer or they may speak out.

But it's ur story u can decide what ever

I just suggested it to u

Is it true Kyy is getting over😭

Upon that u also going to wrap up this devil 😭

Edited by Vandyandy - 9 years ago

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

Amazing

Superb

Finally the mystery us out..so this is the reason..
I can only say that from manik's pov what he have heard or seen is actually seem like betrayal..

But he is also at fault..
As hurting the person whom u loved the most for his/her betrayal is not the way to have a peace..

Woww..finally soon manik is gonna aware about the truth..
Super excited..
About my opinion about nyonika i think she is a positive character as till know i didnt feel a black feeling from her..

And please dont end ur story so soon..atleast not bcoz kyy is gonna end..
Let it be in a flow..
Just to end it soon dont make a hurry and break the flow...as know i m deeply connected..
Cont soon...cant wait.

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Superb amazing update dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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analaxmi23

@analaxmi23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Awesome work dear

u r amazing

continu soon

take care

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nikinidhi

@nikinidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

Awesome dear..emotional update...

Wait was worth..can't wait to see manan together...

High time n still misunderstanding is not cleared...hoping to get all well by next few chappy...

U r Fab writer...

Awesome work..

Thanks for pm..

Update soon..if possible..

Stay blessed

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manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#259

awesome update...
finally mystery is revealed ..
wanna know actual scenario why nandu dhruv n alya were talking like that,teasing each other...
loved d update...
cont soon