#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Sony

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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

It was good finally come to know why Manik is behaving like this.

Please update next part.

Don't take much time.

Please waiting for next update.

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Namrata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#272

NYC update..

Waiting for next one

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aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

Good update no Great update

So much emotions makes the so realistic

I loved it to the core

Will wait for the next chapter for sure.

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Angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Wndrfull updt...fnlly pst reveald but nt cmpltly...
But dere is no cnvo btwn manan... 😭
Ppllzzz post nxt prt sooon...dnt tk sooo mch tym..plzzz...

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yams_ini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

Nyc update

Bit emotional

Excited for next chapters

Cont soon

Wil b waiting

Tanq fr Pm dear

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lovemylyf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#276

nice update... but it hurts to see the devil broken.. finally the reason for his stupid behaviour is out.. i cant even blame him now.. waiting for the next updates.. jaldise clear this sad clouds .. i lov to c the old manan..those crazy moments..stupid fights..missing them..

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nikki.smiley95

@nikki.smiley95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#277

it was too good..manik's pov was very much required here😊

i am waiting eagerly for the leap😊

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aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#278

Nice update... manik's pov ... how much hs he suffered ... i guess kuch to catch h... kuch to hus hoga that's y they were behaving lyk dis... update soon

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bangfarju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#279

so emotional update. u always amazed me with ur natural writing. l think dhruv and alya has an affair and three of them just did fun with each other and manik misunderstood them .ha l think nyonica is not bad person.thanks for pm. stay blessed. update soon. eagerly waiting for ur update

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#280

Dear kyy is ending and ur story too. 😭
It's realy sad news.
Any way manan will be alwYs alive in our heart forever.

I think niyunika is positive.
She just wanted her son out of walls he created around him,
She will help them to bring them together.

Her delivery is dangerous for her and as well for her baby.
What will happen now.
For manik she doesn't want to abort her baby.

Manik's PoV was very touchy.
U described his pain very clearly.
Even a reader can feel that pain.
U r magician. In ur pen there is a megic.
I'm ur biggg fan and i would love to read ur stories in future if u will continue.
Ur point of view is realy a good message.

Yaar I will realy miss manan. 😭
I don't know what to say further. God bless u. 😊

Edited by Sofiafarooq - 9 years ago

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