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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

Amazing!! I loved manik calling nandini as kishmish... Confession was cute... Looks like nandini also had fallen for him... Pls continue soon... Thanks for pm ... 😊 😊

True dear😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

woowww...that was awesomee yrr...ssooo cutteee...😳

bas ab nandu jldi se answer dedo yrrr...tumhara aashiq pagal ho rha hai😉😆

...hehe ...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tas456

Wow...super awesome update

Loved it completely
Can't wait for the next update
Tq so much for this beautiful update
Please update soon
Tqvm for the pm dear
Take care and always keep smiling:-)

Am glad you like it😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radhikar3

So cute...

Nandu bhi maan gayi..
Manik ki kishmish..😆😆😆
Amazing update..
Thanks for update
Waiting for next update 👏

Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: navla

superb update...

manik is smiling all d time ...
nandini angry on manik n cursing him...
manik confess everythg to her n she is happy ...manik again kiss her n this time she is also responding lovingly...
loved the update...
waiting for next part...
take cr.

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaya94

oh shitshit shit.,this is uch a beautiful update
i so loved it
the way they talkd to bhagwan hahahadamn cute
and when manik said usse ishq ho gaya hai aww that was such a beautiful moment
the way he called her kishmish
aww dil jeet liya tumne behna
so beautiful
i have a content and peaceful smile while reading tis chapter
it was fun hahaha
and the best part they kisss Oh! They kissed again i m so excited for mnext part
i lllooovvveee this chapter
god bless u dear
lots of love

Thanks dear
Love you too😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya

Firstly sorry diya for my late reply... dear busy thi isliye late ho gayi...

Awesome... amazing... superb... update dear...
Aww namuna waah manik ka naya name...hehe..
Their mind talks was very good...
Manik ka confession part was amazing.. lovely...
Finally nandini bhi maan gyi...
Aree 2 nd meeting m 2 kiss...😳... bahut naughty ho rhi ho dear...
but seriously i love this update...
very amazingly describe...too good...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm...
keep it up... keep smiling...
stay blessed...
lots of love...

Thanks inaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ..okay I wanna ask u something do you guys want me to make this one FF or end it in three parts ... bata dena ...so without any delay ...here is ur update ...hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛

PART-2 (A)

Manik reached malhotra mansion ... .he was smilingly like an idiot...the thought of Nandani ISHQ with him makes him more happy ...he entered his room and saw cabir and druv who was waiting for him ...he looked at them and raise his eye brows as asking what ...

Manik : Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho

Cabir and druv looked at him and cabir winked at druv and teasingly said

Cabir : Aa gaya be saale...accha yeh bata ab konsa kaand karke aaya ha bee...

Manik confusingly said : kya? Kya keh raha ha tu... mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha...subha subha pe li ha kya

Cabir teasingly said: Arre waah ab aapko yeh bhi nahi pata ki main kis barre main baat kar rahe ha...waah haa sahi ha ...

Druv comes towards manik and teasingly said

Druv : Arre tu chod yeh bata pichli baar mila tha toh paapi ke saath thapad mila tha ...aab yeh bata iss baar kya mila ...😉

Cabir : vaise druv main toh haran hu ...matlab yeh sahi salamat aa gaya ...suna nahi tha isski lela ne kya kaha tha ...ki agar agli baar mere saamne aaya toh hadiya tod degi ...😉

Druv : haa bhai bata naa kya hua aaj matlab jyada jor se toh nahi pada naa thapad😉

Manik looked at druv and give a angry glare to which he chuckled

Cabir : arre bache ko kya dara raha he ...sahi toh bol raha ha naa yeh ...bol kitne thapad pade aaj...😉

Manik gives a angry glare to both of them and punch there stomach lightly

Manik : ab pata chala kitne pade ... matlab sach main tum logo kaa kuch nahi ho sakta ...yaha main itne acche mood main tha ...saare mood ki esi ki tessi kar di ...matlab sach main...aur ek aur baat ...ek word bhi mat bolna meri kishmish ke liye ...otherwise this time toh light punch diya tha ...next time itna hard dunga ki yaad rakhoge tum log ...bhabhi ha voh tumhari

Cabir : voh toh tab naa ...jab voh haa karegi ...😉

Druv to came and make a saddy face and said

Druv : haa yaar matlab jo impression diya ha tune ...uske baad toh lagta ki voh hamari bhabhi banegi ...par sirf tere sapno main ...matlab hadd ha thoda control nahi kar sakta tha ...

Cabir : Aur nahi toh kya agar thoda control karta toh aaj voh shaadi ke liye haa kar deti ...

After listening shaadi ...manik horrifiedly said

Manik horrifiedly said : What ? Matlab usne naa kar di ...

Cabir : arre abhi kaha ...par naa hi karegi jo impression dala ha uske baad voh toh kya koi ladki bhi haa nahi karegi...

Manik angrily stares at cabir and said : shut up cabir ...kuch bhi mat bol ...varna aaj tu samajh le tera raam naam satye ...

Cabir fakingly cry and said: oye pagal ha kya ...agar main mer gaya toh teri behen ka kya hoga ...

Manik was about to say something but navya came and hugged him tightly ...

Navya : Manik ...Manik ...am so happy ...I couldn't describe my feelings ...how much happy am I ...

Manik too hugged her back and smile to see his sister happy ...after sometime navya broke the hug and looked at manik ...

Cabir : arre hame bhi toh batao ki kya baat ha ...jisse meri jaan itni khush ha ...

Navya : Arre khushi ki hi toh baat ha ...nandani ne haa kardi ha ...

Cabir and druv unison said : what?
.
Navya looked at them ...and said : haa ...haa kardi ha par tum log itna kyu shock ho rahe ho ...

Cabir composed himself and said

Cabir : Nahi ...nahi kuch ...bhi toh nahi ...bas ese hi ...haina druv ...

But druv mouth is like oO shape due to shock ...cabir saw this and patted his shoulder to bring him out of the trance ...

Druv : haa ... haaa ...

Navya looked both of them confusingly but chuckled and turn towards manik and said

Navya : Manik do u like nandini?

Cabir mumbled : esse kya puch rahi ho ...eske maan main toh laddoo phut rahe honge khushi ke maare ...

Navya raised her eye brows and said

Navya : kuch kaha tumne

Cabir smiled and said : No no jaan nothing ...

Navya : okay ...toh Manik batao phir ...kaisi lagi nandani

Cabir and druv looked at him and manik gives them a smirk and immediately makes a innocent face and said

Manik innocently said : dii ...aapko jo thik lage...am fine with it ...

Cabir and druv makes oO shape mouth by listening this

Druv Pov :

Arre waah kya acting kar raha ha ...matlab ...waah haa ... sahi ha ...kya yaar bagwan ji ...isko iski lela de dii ...ab mujhe bhi meri lela de do ...

Cabir Pov :
Saala kitni achi acting jarta ha ...matlab ...main toh soch raha hu ...isse toh acting karni chahiye ...kaha business men ha ...maanana padega ...

His trance were broken by navya eho hugged manik

Navya hugged manik and said : I knew and believe me u will not regret ...

To which manik smiled and navya went from there...Manik smirks looking at druv and cabir face and said

Manik smirkingly said : kya hua ab kuch nahi kehna...

Cabir curiously said: Mujhe kehna ha ...matlab navya ko patane ke liye mujhe 2 mahine lag gaye the ... jisme main usse sattar baar mila ...aur tu toh sirf 2 baar mila ...jisme ki tera impression bhi kharab tha ...phir voh maani kaise

MANIK SMIRKINGLY LOOKED AT CABIR AND SAID

Manik Lovingly said : ISHQ JAB HOTA HA NAA ...TOH YEH NAHI DEKHA JAATA KI HUM KITNI BAAR MILE ...DEKHA JAATA HA TOH DIL ...AUR AAPKI SACCHAI ...MAINE SACH BOLA AUR FAISLA USS PAR CHOD DIYA ...MAIN JAANTA THA KI AGAR ...ISHQ SACCHA HA MERA ...TOH MERI KISHMISH KO BHI ISHQ HO HI JAAYEGA...SHAYAD HO BHI GAYA ...BAS EHSAAS HONA BAAKI HA ...JAB HOGA ...TOH MERA ISHQ HAMARA ISHQ HO JAAYEGA ...

Cabir and druv came towards him and hugged him tightly...he too smiled and hugged them back ...

Cabir : am happy for you ...

Druv : haa bhai Scriously am very happy For u ...

Manik smiled by listening this

Manik Pov :

So miss KISHMISH ups soon to be Mrs. KISHMISH Malhotra ...kaha tha maine u are not going to leave me in fact now u r the one who hold me ...now I will shower my whole love to u ...u trusted me and I will make sure this trust ...this faith ...Always remain the same...KYUNKI PYAR DOBARA KIYA JAA SAKTA HA ...PAR ISHQ TOH SIRF EK HI BAAR HOTA HA ...


MURTHY MENSION -

Nandani was sitting on her bed and smiled remember the kiss ...she was blushing ...her cheeks were red ...suddenly she saw someone is coming to her room and the person who came ...makes her angry but she controls herself ...

Girl : hey baby ...

She hugged her tightly and nandani to smiled faintly and said : hey suhani ...

Suhani :kaisi ha ...chal chod ...Yaar I must say u r very lucky ...ur would be is very hot yaar..vaise agar tum naa kehti naa toh main haa kar deti ...😉

Nandani Pov :

What the hell ...kitni kamini ha yeh ...sacchi god aapne isko yaha bejha hi kyu ...beja toh bejha manik ki pic kisne dikhayi ...sachi how can she say that ...mera would be ha voh aur I will make sure ki iss chudel ka saaya bhi naa pade ...I wonder mom ki best friend ki beti ha bhi yaa nahi ...voh angle ha toh yeh bitch ...Scriously ek no. Ki kutti kamini ha yeh ...bloody bitch ...

Suhani:arre nandani kaha kho gayi ...haa toh main yeh keh rahi thi Manik toh bahot hot ha yaar ...

Nandani angrily said: suhani it's better if u stay away from him ...u knew he is my would be ...so it's better if u stay in ur limits ...otherwise I have my own ways sweetheart

Suhani : possessive haa ...😉

Nandani : bahot jyada ...

Suhani laughed a little and said:Chill yaar am just kidding

Nandani greeted her teeth and said: but am not sweetheart ...it would be better to u ...to stay away from my manik ...

Suhani:okay ...accha yeh bata voh jissne tujhe kiss kiya tha ...kya tujhe uska no. Pata ha kya

Nandani raised her eye brows and said : kyu?

Suhani : arre yaar agar pata ha toh de de naa ...voh bhi bahot hot tha ...main uski girl friend banjaaungi ...

Nandani angrily said : teri toh...nikal yaha se ...aur aaj ke baad aaiyo bhi mat ...badi aayi girlfriend banane waali

Suhani : Arre itna gussa kyu kar rahi ha ...main toh uss club waale ladke ki baat kar rahi hu ...tere would be ki nayi ...

Nandani frustratingly said : Mera would be voh club waala hi ha ...aur agar aaj ke baad tune kuch bhi kaha naa ...Yaa usse dekha ...toh ...Teri aakhe noch dungi ...

Suhani smiled and said : ISHQ KARTI HA TU USSE ...PATA THA MUJHE BAS DEKHNA THA ...KI ISHQ HA YAA NAHI ...ISHQ HA NANDANI ...ISHQ HA ...😉


She left from there and nandani smiled

Nandani : YEH KYA THA GOD..vaise ek min. Did I say my manik ...afcourse yaar now he my future husband toh voto nera hi naa ...vaise voh gakat nahi keh raha tha ...SHAYAD ISHQ HO GAYA GA MUJHE USSE ...



So how's it ...
I hope accha laga ho ...
Chalo jii main toh chali
Aur haa comments aur likes
Dijiye taki main update jaldi kar paaun ...
Aur haa please long long comment
No chotu comment
...hehe ...
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update nandu ne haa kar di n manik was so happy but y u have to bring that chudail yaar I hope uska koi role nhi hai is part k baad I can't even tolerate her name. When navya said nandu me ha kardi to cabir n druv shocked ho Gaye now manan k wedding functions hinge n their awesome romance will be there waiting for next part so pls update soon I can't get enough of ur this story cabir is amazing as always . Waiting for more manan romance n their wedding functions
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update ...
Finally both r getting married...

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