MANAN FS:OUR WEDDING NIGHT (NEW THREAD LINK ON PAGE 148)

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Coming with a new story guys ...I hope you guys like it ...it's quite different love story ...I hope u guys give ur love ...like my another stories ...

PROLOGUE-

A guy is sitting on the pub ...his friends were talking to him ...but he didn't paid any attention to them ...he was doing something on his mobile...suddenly his eyes fell on a girl ...who was dancing with her friends ...she was smiling on something ...she wore a black short mid thai dress
...she was looking hot and cute ...every guy was ogling over her ...but she didn't care about them a bit ...

Guy pov :

God she is so hot ...her big eyes ...cute small nose ...her chuby cheeks ...her pink lips ...I just wanted to kiss them so hard ...no ...no control dude ...but how can I control ...she is so irresistible...

He slowly walk towards her ...his friends were looking at him ...as if they are trying to understand ...what he is upto ...he stops in front of her ...a girl looks at him ...she is about to say something but guy captured his lips with her ...girl was so shocked ...by sudden kiss ...she didn't knew how to react ...guy was kissing her slowly ...after a minute ...he broke the kiss and looked towards the girl ...who was still in shock ...he smiled looking at her reaction ...

Guy smirkingly said : U taste really good ...

That's it ...his words broke her trance ...she realized what happened in a minute...she looked at him ...he was smirking ...she slapped him hardly ...

Girl shoutedly said : how dare u ...haa ...how dare you to kiss me ...u knew what ...all the guys are same ...they just need one thing ...bloody moron ...how dare u to touch me ...am not ...a s**** ...whom u can do what you want ...I will not leave u...

Guy lovingly said : I don't want u to leave me ...

She is just looking at him ...trying to register him words...but these words is like to add fuel on fire

Girl : bloody hell ...such a jerk u r ...ek toh galati karte ho aur upar se ...u knew what just forget it ...u morons can't be change...and don't u dare to come in front of me ...is baar toh sirf thapad pada ha...next time I will break ur bones...chalo girls

She left from there ...but that guy was just looking at her ...his friends came towards him and control his laughter and said

Friend teasingly said:Manik voh gayi

Manik was still looking at her going away

Friend2 teasingly said:Manik tu thik ha naa ...matlab tune aaj tak kissi ladki ko hug nahi kiya ...aur aaj sidha kiss ...kya baat ha...kyu druv😉

He winks at druv ...and druv winks back

Druv :am sure she must be special ...varna THE MANIK MALHOTRA ko koi thapad mare aur voh bas usse dekhta rahe that too smilingly ...that's rare ...😉

All are saying but manik didn't said anything

Cabir : kya baat ha manik ...tu kuch bol kyu nahi raha...kiss ka effect ha yaa thapad ka...😉

But still he didn't said anything ...Druv came in front of him and said

Druv : hua kya ha

Manik smilingly said : ISHQ ...

Cabir druv unison said : what?


Toh bolo kaisa laga
Do u want me to continue it
Or not ...
Tell me ur views
Ur views are important
And it's a FS ...so
It's end in three parts ...
I hope you guys like it
And this is just prologue
U guys are going to love it...
If u guys like it
Hit the like button
And
Comment on it Too
Till then
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya


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MaNan_Angel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very good start..
Keep it up dear... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Nice prologue yaar...
Seems to b quite interesting...
Do continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar...plz update soonn


Kiss at first sight... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story start...
It's actually suspense..what will girl do now??
Continue soon...

Thank you..
Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept superb start
interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc strt...
liked it..do continue.. plz pm me the nxt update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start... would love to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice start...
Manik really kissed her...
He fell in love...
Luved it...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start... would love to read more...

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