*NEW* MaNan FF || Destiny || (prologue and CS updated) ||

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue

There was huge mansion decorated with flowers light and a log or hustle bustle in house when suddenly somebody started shouting that "ladke wale aagye" and soon everyone was gathered at the entrance
A lady applied tika on his forehead and made him seat in the mandap.

Outside the mansion a car arrived two ppl were sitting indide once girls in her 20s and another women in her 40s.
women: lagta hai baarat aagai hai ... aise mein kadhai lene kaise jau itz so embarissing

Girl: Isme embarrassing wale konse baat hair mumma agar apko aisa lagta hai toh main jake k aate hi... hmm

Women: nai tu ruk main jake aate hu tu dekh gadi aage peeche karne hai kya

She got out from there car

Inside the mansion the pandit was chanting the mantras and the boy was sitting smilingly
Boys pov
Baas kuch der aur ki baat hai soha aur hum agne ko sakshi maankar ek saath rehne ki kasme khaenge aur hum ek hojayenge.
Pov over

A old women dressed in saree with nice jewelry saw the women and asked her "aap yaha"

Women: vo mere kadhai reh gaye thi voh lene aaye thi.

Old women: suno...! Inhe inke kadhai de do

She said this to them servant and left... while a women in her 40s was hiding from her.. she was wearing a sexy designer saree when she gone she sighed and gone towards the mandap

Pandit: kanya ko bulaiye

The women gone towards bride's room and entered her room And found a letter kept on her wedding dress

Sorry manik main tumse shadi nahi kar sakte
Mujhe dhoondne ki koshish mat karna leave me alone.
-soha

Women: sry soha par tumhara yeh letter manik take nahi pochega yaha se mera maksat shuru hota hai (evil smile)

Outside the mansion the girl was waiting for her mom when soha came Inside the car then that girl's mom

Soha: old mujhe airport tak lift dijeye... I have to reach there ASAP.

"Umm yeah"

inside the mansion
She gone down and started shouting balbeer soha apne room mein nahi hai!!pandit ji aap shadi rok dijiye.

Manik immediately got up and rushed towards soha's room shouting her name...but he got her wedding dress kept on her bed while others reached there

The women in her 40s came forward and sat infront of him on the bed

Women: manik maine soha ko samjhane ki bohot koshish ki voh iss rishte to na tode.. lekin..iss rishte se woh khush nahi thi manik.. try n understand uss din usne aise hi drink nahi kiya tha she was upset... the likes u but only as a frnd..as a boyfriend... woh iss shadi ko accept nahi kar pa rahe this manik

Manik gets up with teary eyes: do have any idea what u are saying...! Aap ko pata bhi hai aap kya bol rahe ho anu aunty soha mujhse pyaar karte thi! Karte hai usne khud mujhse kaha tha... maine khud uske aakho mein dekha tha... kya voh sab jhuth tha

Anu:.manik shayad tum dono ne attraction ko hi pyaar samaj liya...pichle kuch dino se jo situation hai shayad usse ...its not my upbringing.. soha is grown up now she has got her mind of her own... she can make her own choices.

Manik: situation.. !what situation are u talking about yahe ki hamars business mein kuch loss hua..! Anu aunty soha mujhe se pyaar karte hai mere bussiness se nahi !

Anu: sachaye yahe hai ki now this wedding is over...

Manik: over! Yeh shaadi hai koi mazak nahi ki jab mann kara haa bol diya aur jab mann kiya na bola!!aise kaise kar sakte hai woh!

Mr chopra: jyada dur tak nahi gaye hoge main dhundta hu.

Inside the car

Soha: aunty aur kitne der..actually may new here mujhe yaha k raasto is kuch nahi pata I just hope ki ham airport time we pohouch jaye

"Bass 15 min more"

Girl: lagta hai tum Mumbai mein new ho.

Soha: Mumbai.. main toh India first time aaye hu aur shayad last time bhi.

Girl: lagta hai tum kisi shaadi attend karke aaye ho

Soha: par tumhe kaise pata

Women: beta tumne jo yeh hato mein chuda pehna hai yeh dulhan pehente hai..

Soha: haa isse maine utar ne ki koshish ki...par... OK I admit mein apne shaadi sent bhaag kar aaye hu...aur India chodkar jaa rahe hu.. waise aur kitne der..

Women: nandini woh mein soch rahe thi ki highway se lunge toh traffic hoge so link road se lete hu

Nandini: ha mumma main bhi vohe bolne wale thi...

Soha: are u guys sure coz this roads seems familiar... idk mujhe sab same dikhte hair its so confusing

On other hand anu becomes happy but balbeer stops her from going outside

Balbeer: anushka kya soha k bhaagne mein tumne uske help ki

Anu: kaise baate kar rahe ho balbeer tum aise kaise mujhe blame kar rahe hi

Balbeer: saare planning hi tumne ki hai...!ik u so well tum apne maksat I liye soha ko use kar rahe ho !

Anu: have maine hi usse bhagaya cuz main usse woh sab dena chahate hu jo kabhi mujhe nahi mila

Suddenly a lady comes and says soha aagaye hai!


Lots of questions right... don't worry slowly slowing u will get ur answers... so manik n soha were getting married but soha the ran away right...toh how did she reached there??? Will she marry manik???what will begin manik's next step ??y anushka wanted her own daughter to run away from her own wedding??ufff too many questions...and find the answer stay hooked to this ff...do u want character sketch ??then cmt below...and also do share ur reviews...till then
stay blessesd
Keep smiling
Keep shining!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice dear ...

Hope rhe boy is nt maik...bt hoga toh wohi jo hum sochengey ki na ho...hehe ...

Awesome one bt bit confusing...

Continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eeeks.. Soha n Manik.xcont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sketch
Manik malhotra: son of one of the biggest businessman in Australia. He looks will make any girl weak on her knees but his heart beats only for soha from childhood he loved her only to get his heart broken. He knows how to smile in darkest situation a guy with gold, humble heart he is a sweet heart.

Nandini singh: A selfless girl but she is reserved girl she is a journalist her family esp her mumma means everything to her. Everyone in her office calls her as 'gabru' she is damm strict arrogant girl but no one knows or ever tried to know the reason. No body tried to see the nandini behind the mask of rude girl if u take out that mask u will see a beautiful bubbly girl who is full of life but she doesn't want to become like before now she's hardly smiles rather I should fake smile she has now forgot how to smile.. he past made her lyk that. she never trusts any guy. She thinks all men are same.

Alya Singh: younger sis of nandini she is a fashionsta. She knows how to make boys head over heals fall for her. She is full of lyf and chirpy girl. Even she gone through what nandini did but she was too small to kno what happened. She loves her mumma a lot

Nyonika singh: mother of alya and nandini. A selfless woman even if u will insult her and second day u are in trouble she will come forward to help u not matter what. That selfless women nyonika is but Also if u said anything wrong bout her family then no body will save u from her... her only weekness is her daughters. She was cheated by her husband but still she never gave up on life she runs her own restaurant.

Jatin Chopra: uncle of manik along with that they both share bff relation owner if kcc news he is still handsome even be is in his 40s he is every close to Singh family along with that a great man. (Imagine suyyash)

Soha khurana: step sister if nandini (but both are not aware of it) she is a total diva. She is damm humble and nice but her mom anushka never lets her to be good she is going to marry manik she doesn't feel same for manik.she lived in orphanage for 7yrs after that her mom met her and uses her for her own selfish reasons but still she loves her not knowing her real face.

Anushka khurana: mother of soha she is money minded greedy women she always uses soha for her own dirty reasons her only aim of life is to ruin nyonika's life coz she thinks coz of nyonika she had to go to jail for 7yrs and now is is back to take her revenge.

So how was it ??yaar least like button hit kardo if not cmt...pls tell me how was it..???and whats the reason behind this hatred???to kno stay tuned... if u want pm buddy me or cmt below.
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