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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow u turned it to ff.awesome. continue soon.super excited
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
congratulation...
waiting 4 update of this ff & the spy in my house...
plz asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 15B :

"yaar im getting bored..." nandini said looking at soha and navya who were sitting beside her. Their class was cancelled and they had nothing to do except wait for others to finish their classes to go home for which nearly 1.5 hours of time was still left.

"hmm..hum bhi... kya karein... humharae hostel chalein..." navya suggested and nandini thumped on her bench.

"marae paas ek idea hai..." soha suddenly spoke excitedly and nandini lifted her head to look at soha's face and the moment soha told her idea nandini dragged soha and navya along with her. On their way out they found mukthi and aliya who were also dragged along asking what and where but nandini didn't bother to answer them and finally they reached their destination.

"bhaiyya marae liyae zyada theeka wala.." nandini said to the gol-gappa vendor

"humhae bhi..." all joined and laughed looking at each other and soon the gol gappa competition began. Everyone ate to their brims when they heard a voice from behind.

"humharae bina party..."

"bhai u scared us..." soha said looking at Aaryaman and Harshad to which he laughed and said " accha aur tum log yahan marae bina pani puri kha rahae ho... very bad.."

"come na join us.." nandini said and the duo joined the girls and all had a great time enjoying the spicy pani puri.

"what the hell is going on..." manik's stern voice brought all out of the gol gappa trance and all looked at him like he was an alien and the same look was carried to abhi dhruv and cabir who accompanied him and were giving the same look like manik.

"bhai.. aap chilla kyu rahae ho...??? and aap sab log humhae aaisae kyu dekh rahae ho" mukthi said with a frown and all nodded in agreement and aaryaman and harshad silently changed the party by standing with the other boys.

"im shouting and what r u people doing... yeh sab junk food... pagal ho sab log.." came manik extra serious warning and nandini rolled her eyes and said in utmost irritating tone

"yaar motu tu na... yeh sadu hona bandh kardae... bas pani puri hi toh hai... iss mai itna hyper honae ki kya baath hai..."

Everyone giggled at her comment but kept quite seeing manik fisting his hands which was not at all a good sign.

"now don't blame me for this.." saying this manik moved towards nandini and picked her up on his shoulder making all others laugh their guts out and nandini opened her mouth in a perfect O and started yelling

"chodo mujhae manik... leave me..." and all her shouts went into deaf ears and manik turned to others and said "mukthi 2 minutes hai tumharae paas... I want u inside the car." And walked out away from there and mukthi ran behind him with her bag.

"manik... chodo... chodo mujhae...!!! Mai dadu ko tumhari complaint kardungi... leave me..." nandini said hitting on manik's back by fisting her hands and manik was no less he to gave a shot on her back and said " ek ek yaad rakhkae badla lunga... stop hitting me...!!!"

Nandini didn't expect to get hit back by him an her back and kept quite as the HIT was quite powerful one and she couldn't even rub her HURT place.

By the time manik reached his car mukthi was already present there panting trying to catch her breath and manik unlocked the car and thumped nandini on the passenger seat closing the door behind immediately and he sat on the driving seat and mukthi rushed to the back seat.

After manan and mukthi left :

"yaar.. yeh toh kuch zyada hi ho gaya..." cabir said looking in the direction in which manan went.

"haan yaad... humhara plan toh bas in logon ko daranae ka tha.. lekin yeh toh hyper ho gaya.." abhi seconded cabir

"job hi ho.. manik toh gaya nandu kae haton.." dhruv said giggling and others too joined him.

"chalo lets go... kal dekh langae..." aaryaman said and all nodded in agreement and moved towards their respective destinations.

In Car :

Nandini crossed her arms on her chest making a hell annoyed face and manik was expressionless and mukthi was a little confused. The drive to home was totally silent. After parking the car in their home's parking manik got down taking his bag which was lying beside mukthi and walked inside. Mukthi and Nandini were still sitting in the car totally annoyed with Manik's behaviour.

"khadus... monster... huhh... tera bhai... kitnaaa... argghhh..." nandini said turning towards mukthi to which mukthi replied " sacchi nandu... khadoos hai ek number ka... aur yeh sab naa kal raath ka badla le raha hai vo... ek do din mai yeh VOLCANO shaanth ho jayaega.. phir hum kuch karangae..."

"hmm... kuch toh karna padaega... aaisae nai chod saktae ussae..." nandini replied in the same tone and both shook their hands dramatically and got down the car laughing at their own acts.

"kya khaogae bacchon..." dj asked coming out of the kitchen as manik mukthi and nandini came down after freshening up and were sitting in the lounge.

"abhi toh kha kae aayae hai.. do din ka khana naa bhi khayae toh bhi chalaega.." manik mocked looking at mukhni who just rolled their eyes and nandini replied "dj.. bohath bhook lagi hai... kuch bhi chalaega..." nandini said caressing her tummy making dj laugh at her kiddish acts.

"hayee mera baccha bhooka hai... ruk mai abhi aati hun..." saying this dj moved into the kitchen to get something for the trio to eat.

"panda kahiki... kitna khayaegi... aaisae hi chalta rahae toh kuch dino mai uss sofa mai fit nai hogi tu..." manik came again with his teasing. Nandini got up from her seat and moved towards manik who was getting ready to run away seeing the chotu MARY COM coming.

"ruk tu.. motu... ruk...warna itnaa marungi itnaa marungi...ki khud bhi apni shakal nai pechan nai payaega... ruko manik..." nandini said running behind manik. He turned around and said "pakad toh sahi pehalae..." and dodged the cushion that nandini threw at him. Mukthi was looking at the duo not sure of whom to support but was enjoying the tom& jerry in live. She took out her phone and started recording it in her cell. Manik was running followed by nandini and manik smartly escaped into dadu's study as he knew nandini will not be able to guess that he would be there since it was totally a restricted area in the house. Nandini searched the whole house the terrace their garden rooms everywhere but on not finding manik anywhere she came back and fell on the sofa beside mukthi.

"tarae bhai ko nai chodungi mai.." nandini said still panting to which mukthi just smiled and said "math chodna... im with u.."

"u better be..." nandini replied catching her breath and just as their saviour dj and nyonika came with bowls of gajar ka halwa... one of those things which were on top on nandini's favourite list. Nandini took the bowl and said after eating the first spoon

"Ummm... dj u r the best... I love u.." and hurriedly ate another spoon. Mukthi was no less she too was enjoying the halwa whole heartily when nyonika asked

"manik kahan hai.." mukhni paid no attention and were busy making sounds enjoying the halwa. Nyonika shook her head in disbelief and called manik loudly but he didn't come. She thought he might be in his room so she asked the servant to call manik.

After 5 minutes the servant came back and said "mam baba room ani nahi hai..."

"accha theek hai tum jao.." nyonika replied and he went to carry on with his work.

"kahan chala gaya yah ladaka..." nyonika said in a low tone but ignored it thinking he might be around and would come soon.

Soon they were done with the halwa and mukhni moved to their room as they had to WORK on their assignments whose submission date was approaching in jet speed.

Finally after 2 long hours of continuous cursing and writing most of their work was done and they lied on the bed to relax for a while

"yaar nandu mera work ho gaya hai... ab abhi ka baki hai.. uff.. bhai aur unkae silly punishments... huhh... dekh lungi mai unko.." mukthi said in a serious tone and nandini added "haan... yeh sab na uss cabir ki wajah sae hua hai... agar uska phone nahi bajtha toh hum nahi pakadae jatae.. aur yeh sab nai karna padtha... huhh.."

"haan yaar..." mukthi was about to say something when they heard dj calling everyone for dinner and the girls moved down.

"yeh manik kahan reh gaya.. sham sae dikhai nai dae raha.." nyonika said looking at dadu and dj and just then mukthi and nandini also arrived and sat on their chairs. Dadu giggled a little and said "shayad abhi tak nahi utha vo... chalo marae saath ill show u where he is.." dadu said getting up and all followed him curiously. Dadu opened the door of his study and all went aww seeing manik sleeping on the couch. Mukthi and Nandini looked at each other and passed a wink and on the count of three both screamed their lungs out making the elders palm their ears and manik roll down the couch and fall down with a THUD...!!!

Everyone present there started laughing looking at his face and manik was blinking his eyes his eyes to register his surroundings and after a few minutes he understood what might have happened and smiled sheepishly getting up and rubbing his bum. Everyone was laughing their guts out seeing him.

"ok fine... ab hasna bandh karo.. aur chalo..." manik tried sounding serious but all his attempts were in vain as they started laughing more and more. Dj came towards manik and said pulling his cheeks "hayeee mera laal.. abhi bhi bilkul baccha hi hai tu,.." and nyonika seconded saying " maa.. agar iskae bacchae bhi aa jayae na... phir bhi yeh aapko baccha hi lagaega..." and dadu dj nyonika and mukthi laughed at her comment where nandini turned red and manik strangely was blushing pink. Mukthi dashed her shoulder with nandini who was looking here and there and nandini ran away from there followed by manik making them laugh more at their red faces.

The dinner was silent with little giggling and glares from manik and finally breaking the silence and to divert the topic manik asked looking at nyonika "mom dad kab aayangae trip sae..."

"may be day after tomorrow... kyu tujhae kuch kaam hai kya.." nyonika asked him and he nodded a no and continued eating.

After dinner in mukthi and nandini's room :

Mukthi was talking to Abhi on skype when nandini entered the room hiding something in her hands when mukthi saw the same and asked "kya chupa rahi hai..??" nandini came and sat beside her and passed a bowl to mukthi and said "yae lanae gayi thi.. tera monster bhai dekhae gat oh ice cream kae saath saath hum dono ko bhi kha jayaega... isiliyae was waiting for him to go into his room aur phir mai yeh lae aayi..." nandini said looking itno the bowl taking a big spoon full of ice cream ready to push it into her mouth when she gasped seeing the MONSTER she was talking about standing at the door with a smirk on his face. Mukthi pushed her bowl under the bed and turned towards abhi who was still there on skype talking something.

Manik walked towards nandini and picked her up in his arms making her gasp once again and said turning towards mukthi "from today she will sleep with me in my room.." nandini opened her mouth in a perfect O so did mukthi and abhi and manik continued "and don't worry about others ill manage them..." and walked towards his room carrying nandini and locked the interconnection door from which he entered the room.

Nandini was still looking at him in surprise and he placed her on the bed and moved into the washroom to change. And just before closing the washroom door he said turning towards her "jaldi kha lo... warna u will have to drink it by the time u regain ur senses.." and moved inside after passing a wink to her.

Manik came out of the washroom and saw nandini sitting on the bed a little lost and he instantly guessed the reason. He moved to the bed and lied down beside her and pulled her holding her wrist making her fall on him. She looked straight into his eyes which were speaking volumes but she couldn't decipher it. Manik held her close and hugged her tightly and to his surprise she too hugged him back making him smile widely. Manik's face was dug in the space between her neck and shoulder and he was placing feather kisses all over her shoulder and neck making her shiver to his touch.

"manik.." nandini called him in a
low tone and he just hummed nuzzling more into her neck. nandini giggled feeling a little ticklish and said moving a little back but not breaking the hug "manik listen na.."
manik made a annoyed face for getting disturbed and said "kya hai nandu bolo na..."

"manik... agr kisi nae hum dono ko aaisae dekh liya toh...???" she said in a matter of fact tone and he again frowned and said pulling nandini more closer by waist and tightening his grip "toh dekhnae do na... whats a big deal in that... now dont disturb me..." saying this he again dug his face in the crook of her neck and started placing wet kisses all along neck shoulder till her ear and nandini gripped his shoulders tightly

"manik..." nandini moaned in a merely audible tone giving into his sweet tortures which made his naughty side enjoy to core

"nanduu..." manik whispered in her ear in the most huskiest tone making her shiver and she could just hmm to his reply and manik continued "kal marae saath bahar chalogi..." and lightly nibbled her earlobe making her hold him more tightly and nandini didnt reply too much lost in his touch as his fingers were busy making patterns on her waist slightly tickling her and making her goosebumps raise all over her body
"bolo naa... chalogi marae saath..hmm..??" he asked again this time kissing her cheeks and again no response
manik kissed her eyes and said "nandu open your eyes first..." and she opened her eyes which were tightly shut and looked straight into his eyes and manik spoke maintaining the eye lock
"chalogi marae saath...??" and all she could do was just nod her head approvingly totally lost in his deeep eyes which casted a spell on her...
Manik leaned towards her face and placed his lips on her's for a long passionate kiss. Breaking the kiss after they were totally out of breath manik said "thanks for agreeing.." nandini just smiled and placed a kiss on his forehead followed by his cheeks and replied looking at his shocking face "pleasure is all mine Mr. Malhotra.." and winked at him. He jerked her more closer and said coming deadly close to her lips " u will definitely not forget tomorrow to be Mrs. Malhotra.. or to be more accurate half Mrs. Malhotra..." and pecked her lips and continued looking at her flushed face "chalo lets sleep now... tomorrow is gonna be a big day.." and palmed her eyes. Nandini hugged him more tightly and both slept in the same position.

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Guys im really sorry im ending this part abruptly here... I don't know what to say... some emergency has come and I have to rush.. and I don't even know when I will be back... so please forgive me for one last time... im totally helpless... and that's the reason im not even sending pm's this time... please do understand... ill try to be back asap... but im sorry... really very much sorry...

Wish u a very happy safe and colourful holi in advance...

keep smiling..

Take care...

Loads of love..

Neeraja...

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Eager to know were Manik is taking Nandini
Update next part soonish...
Tysm for pm

Keep smiling always
N Happy Holi in advance 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved It
Awww manik so cute
We're will manik
take nandu
Waiting for the next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sooo cuteee
Loving the cute Manan
Golgappa scene was awesomeee
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
mukbhi ko 440 volt ka jhatka laga jab manik bola nandu uski saath soyega...
really enjoy this part...
next update plz asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing,superb & awesome update...
Manan's moments were so cute...
Where will manik take nandini???
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg update
Thnx for pm me
So cute mukni...hahahaha panda motu...lovd it...enjoyed a lot...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. . Manan in same room..
Where is manik taking nandu
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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