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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey don't be sorry.. Hota hai kabhi kabhi...m waiting ..4 saber ka mitha fal...hehe now smile :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww lol🤣 dt was really intresting n d girl would b none other dn nandini😛 manik kneeling infront of her😆 plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting concept...fab 5 kneeling in front of a girl...which offcourse I think is Nandini...Waiting for update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part1


Just few hours before the prologue sceen :


Manik was driving the car and Cabir was sitting beside him in the passenger seat. Mukthi and Abhi were sitting behind them and at last were Dhruv and Aliya. They were moving towards their collage which is SPACE institute of Medical sciences, one of the top collages for Medicine in India.


"bhai..!! why don't u get engaged.. I mean kya aapko koi ladki pasand nai aathi..humari collage mai itni saari hot ladikiyan hai.. why don't u even bother to look at them..??" Mukthi asked Manik

"haan yaar Manik..why don't u even look at the girls in our collage.. vo tho mar jaathi hai tarae ek look kae liyae.." Aliya joined

"yaar..tum dono nae mujhae pagal samajh kae rakha hai kya.. why would I get into a relation.. dekha nai hai kya mainae becharae Abhi aur Dhruv ko..kitna pareshan karate ho tum dono... mujhae nai panda baba kisi ladki kae chakkar mai.." Manik said and he and Cabir exchanged a hi-fi

"bhai...!!" Mukthi

"Manikkk...!!"Aliya

All the boys in the car palmed their ears except manik as he was driving and couldn't do so

"see that the reason I stay away from girls"Manik said.. he said all all of them laughed aloud... Mukthi and Aliya made a grumpy face seeing Dhruv and Abhi laughing with Manik and Cabir.. Mukthi started hitting Abhi and the case was not different with Dhruv.. "ahh..Mukthi stop it yaar.. tum aaisae karogi tho Manik sach mai hi ladikiyon sae door bhagnae lagaega.." he said admist laughing..

"haan..buddy mai tho kehatha hun..tu nae sahi decision liya hai.. stay away from girls..tujhae pata hai..having a girlfriend means carrying a time bomb with u in ur pocket all the time.. nobody knows kab blast ho jayaega.."Dhruv said and laughed aloud and everybody joined him..

"manik tu na..sirf meri bath maan.. in dono ko tho koi bacha nai saktha..but hum dono nai..we both will stay away from girls as much as possible.."Cabir said

"true said cabir.."manik replied and continued driving

"tum teeno na marae bhai sae door raho..bigad kae rakh diya hai becharae ko.."Mukthi said showing her finger to the other three..

"haan..haan..humnae hi bigada hai..iss dood peetae bacchae ko.. bahut nadaan hai na.."Cabir said turning back to Mukthi and Abhi had a tough time controlling coz he didn't wanted to get hit by her again while Dhruv was giggiling..

"I have decided..and its final..mai tho iss saal bhai kae liyae perfect bhabhi dhoond lungi..chahae koi meri help karae ya na.." mukthi said and shrugged her shoulders while all others gave her u-r-impossible look..

"I just want to focus on my studies now..yae ladki kae chakkar mai nahi panda hai mujhae..i just want to be like grandpa.." manik said

"haan..tu tho ban jayaega doctor Mr.grandpa ka ladla.." cabir said and manik gave him a glare..cabir simply ignored it and continued "oye..aaisae kya dhek raha hai.. kha jayaega kya mujhae"

"cabir..for once why don't u shut up.."manik said irritatingly

"bhalai ka tho zamana hi na raha.."cabir said dramatically but again..how could he sit quite.. "vaisae manik..uncle tho trustee hai collage kae..so there is no fear of getting punished for ragging.. right guys..?"

"aaisa sochna bhi mat Cabir..dad is mamlae mae bahut strich hai.. balki unhonae khud mujhae aur bhai ko subah aatae samai warn kiya tha..ki agar ragging karate hua pakadae gayae tho sub ko 1 month kae liyae suspend kar dangae.."mukthi said with a sad expression

"aa..mukthi..dont worry..humarae against jaakae..dad ko koi complaint nai karnae wala..im sure about it.. ab dekhtae hai.. what fun is waiting for us in the collage..aaj tho pakka..we r gonna have fun.."Manik said and all immediately agreed.

Meanwhile they reached the collage.. as it was the first day of the collage..there were no classes to be attended only the admission formalities were being handled by the management. Seniors were called for guiding their juniors but the scenario was quite different.. serious raging was going on in the collage.. of course it was none other that Fab5 with Abhi..

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A girl of about 19 years got down from her car and instructed her driver to leave..she was holding her file and other papers which were to be submitted during admission.. she enquired about the admin office and was searching for it when she suddenly bumped into someone..

"im sorry..mainae dekhae nai.."she said immediately..

"arae koi bath nai..galthi humari bhi thi.."the other girl also immediately apologised and continued.. "humara naam Navya hai..Navya Naveli..from patna.."she said and introduced herself

"hi..im Nandini Murthy.."she introduced herself

"kaun si department mai ho nandini.."navya enquired

"MBBS..first year..aaj hi join kiya hai..actually still formalities pending hai..isi liyae Admin office dhund rahi thi.."she said casually..

"chalo bhai..humae tho dost mil gaya pehalae hi din..hum bhi tumharai class mae hi hai.. chalo tumhae office dikha dae datae hai.."navya said and both moved towards the office talking other things about themselves and finally reached there. Nandini submitted her papers and navya was waiting for her outside.

"thodi der baad aakae apna ID card collect kar laena.. uskae bina kal tumhara class mai no entry hai.."the clerk told her and she nodded and left..

"chalo navya.. pura campus dekh kae aatae hai.. bahut suna hai is collage kae barae mai.."nandini said as soon as she came out.

"suna tho hum nae bhi tha nandu..par aanae kae baad pata chala ki yahan bahut ragging hothi hai.."navya said fearfully

"wht..! ragging..! aaisa ho hi nahi saktha.. marae dad kae best friend yahan kae trustee hai.. infact mai khud uncle ko bahut acchi tarah janthi hun..unkae kehanae par hi mainae yae collage join kiya hai.."nandini said

"arae..nai..hum sach keh rahae hai..subha subah hum tho just bach gayae.. humarae senior hai koi Harshad unhonae hi humae bachya..ragging sae.." navya said and again continued "koi Fab5 karkae hai...humarae seniors..unhonae humhae dekh liyae.. hum tho chup chap aapna kaam kar rahae thae.. unhonae humae unkae paas bulaya.. aur phir unmae sae..vo..ek ladka..haan Cabir tha uska naam.. pata hai nandu jab humane usae aapna naam bataya.. usnae tho humae dekh kar bola ki..humhae yae naam suit nahi kartha aur humara naam Madhubala hona chaiyae tha.." she was explaining her experience..and nandini signalled her to continue.. "aur phir..unka leader Manik..usnae bola ki vo humae simple task daega aur phir usko complete karnae kae baad hum jaa sakthae hai..phir pata hai..usnae humae kya bola.." by this time navya was sweating badly and nandini put her hand on her shoulder and asked "kya bola us monster nae..?" nandini asked angrily

"arae nanduu.. dheerae bolo..usko monster kyu bula rahi ho.. koi sun laega tho..musibath aajayaegi.." navya spoke in a horrified tone.. "ok..u continue..kya bola usnae.."nandini asked

"usnae bola ki..sabkae samnae..assmbly hall mai..humhae.. humae.. apnae kisi professor ko propose karna hoga.." navya said and nandini laughed.. "kya tumhae hasi aa rahi hai..humari tho jaan nikal gayi thi.. time par Harshad aa gayae aur himhae bacha liya.. nahi tho.. hey mata rani.. kya impression padtha humara.." navya cleared her point..

"arae navya..chill.. purae collage nae vo kya tha..haan Fab5 ko dekh liya..lekin unhonae Nandini Murthy ko nahi pechan the.. ab aayae ga maza.."nandini said rubbing her hands.. navya could clearly guess the mischief in her eyes and got excited and asked "irada kya hai tumhara.. zara humae bhi tho batao.."

"batathi hun.." saying this nandini pulled navya near and whispered her plan in her ears.. navya's eyes lit up hearing the plan.. and she said expressing her fears "nandu..sab theek hai..lekin agar pakadae gayae na tho un sae bura aur koi nahi hoga.."

"tum na navya darthi bahuth ho.. u just follow me.. jab pakadae jayangae tab socha jayaega.."nandini said and winked at her.. both moved towards canteen to execute their plan..

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In Canteen :

Fab5 were ragging some junior and asked him to do some stupid task.. nandini and navya entered the canteen without any noise as everyone was busy looking what task was being given and what the students were doing.. nandini slowly removed her cell from her bag and started shooting what all was happening in the canteen hiding behind the students very carefully not visible to fab5 that her so called recording was going on. She recorded everything like fab5 calling them giving some stupid task and if they were not doing it some silly punishments..everything.. in short she made a short film on their ragging..

Nandini and navya after that sat silently sat in the canteen to eat something and were waiting for the right time to execute their plan. They ordered sandwitches and some juice and were waiting for their order when Navya's worst fear came true.. fab5 along with Abhi walked into the canteen. Navya gulped her saliva and started looking everywhere. Nandini observed all this and asked her with eyes if they were here and navya gestured that they were right behind her. Actually nandini was facing her back towards them when they entered the canteen.

After entering the canteen Cabir immediately spotted navya and went towards her table.. "arae madhubala ji.. aap yahan canteen mae..?" he mockingly asked her

"dekhiyae..aap humsae aaisae baath nahi kar sakthae..hum..hum na aapki complaint kar dengae.." she said and by this time all others joined cabir..

"acha..! kissae complaint karogi..apnae papa sae.." manik said in a teasing tone and nandini fisted her hands controlling her anger.

"hum..na..hum jaakae principal sae complaint kar dangae agar aapnae humae pareshan kiya tho.." navya said trying her best not to look weak infront of them but was sweating seeing the fab5 surrounding her from all sides.

"acha..chalo..lets go to principal.. chalo.." saying this mukthi and aliya held her hands and were about to drag her when

"stop it..just stop your nonsense.." nandini yelled on the top of her voice

"oh.hello..why the hell r u shouting..?" manik came forward and stood in front of her..

"aur tum log kya kar rahae ho..?" she asked looking straight into his eyes.. he was surprised no one till date dared speaking looking straight into his eyes and this girl in their very first meet did it.

"aur tum kaun hothi ho mujhsae yae sab puchnae wali..?" he asked her and without giving her to speak some thing he continued " apni height dekhi hai..u look like a mouse.." he said and all burst out laughing. Nandini felt humiliated she immediately stood on the table in front of them and said pointing her finger towards him "u Mr.Monster.. how dare u say call me a mouse.. and for ur information tum logon sae darnae kae liyae im not ur junior..haan im a new admission lekin im a 3rd year student so don't u dare scare me.." she said and all became surprised and she again continued.. "let me show u something interesting" saying this she bent to her bag took out her cell and showed the video to Manik. His jaw dropped seeing the video.

"so..i think navya humae principal kae paas chalna chahiyae.. kyu ?" she said looking at navya and she nodded her head approvingly

"noo...!!!" manik almost yelled

"arae kyun..u only were insisting us to go na.. chalo navya.. I think we r wasting time.. c u all in principals office.." saying this nandu got down the table and took her bag. Manik's jaw dropped the consequences he had to face the moment nandini reaches principals office. He started sweating badly. Other members of fab5 and Abhi were shocked seeing manik helpless in front of a girl. Cabir came and stood beside manik and tapped his shoulder and then manik came back to senses.

"bro.. aaisa kya dikhaya usnae ki tarae hosh ud gayae..?" cabir asked

"cabir vo..pehlae us ladki ko rokna hoga.." saying this he rushed to stop nandini who left the canteen and was pretending to go inside towards the principals office. He ran as fast as he could and found them just a few steps away from the office. Mukthi abhi dhruv aliya and cabir also followed them.

"hey..look..!!" manik called nandini

"what..?" she said with a frown..

"listen don't do that..ull regret later..!!" he warned her

"what I shouldn't do..and why would I regret..?" she asked

"arae..i mean.. vo video.. delete it.." he said pointing towards her cell which was in her hand

She crossed her hands across her chest and said "agar nai kiya tho..?"

"listen..enough now..delete it dammit.." he was now frustrated

"Mister.. whoever you are.. listen.. im not gonna delete it.. by the way why am I wasting time talking to u.. we shall meet in principals office.." she said and again turned to leave and that was it for manik.. he held her shoulders and pinned her to the wall

"enough now.. stop testing my patience and delete the video.." he said looking into her eyes which were spitting fire..

"u r hurting me.."she spoke looking at his hands which were on her shoulders.. he then realised what he had done and immediately back offed

"ok.. delete the video.." he was back on the same phase

"I said na ki ill not delete the video.. ab tho pakka ill show it to principal.." she said

Manik leaned forward to her and tried to take the cell from her hand. Both were looking into each others eyes and for a moment manik was lost.. taking this as opportunity nandini ran away and showed him her tongue and said

"mai tho principal kae paas ja rahi hun.." and ran towards his office

But manik was quick enough. He caught her in the correct time and palmed her mouth and dragged her to the near by empty room ignoring all her protests and after entering the room again pinned her to the wall while others followed to understand the situation as they were completely clueless as what was happening. Only navya knew what was cooking and was silently praying for not getting caught

"listen.. ok .. u don't go to principals office.. lets make a deal.." he said and she nodded a yes and he removed his hand from her mouth.

"u all will do as I say.. then ill not go to principal.. don't u dare deny what I say.. warna mai immediately principal kae paas chali jaungi.. and u know what tumharae trustee marae boyfriend hai.." she said and winked at them and fab5 including abhi's jaw dropped to the floor listening that

"what...!!!!" they almost yelled

"ji haan..sahi suna tum logon nae..ur trustee Mr.Malhotra is my boyfriend.. don't u dare mess with me.. suspend karwa dungi.." she said pointing her forefinger towards them. They were too much shocked to react.. "dad.." manik silently whispered.. as the room was too quiet nandini heard it and said "haan..marae dad kae friend aur marae boyfriend hai.."she said proudly. Poor soul didn't knew that her boyfriend's son was the person in front of her to whom she was talking.

"chalo..tum log sab marae sath canteen mai.. ill tell u there what to do.." she said walking towards the door followed by navya and next came fab5 and abhi

"yaar.. yae tho tarae dad kae barae mai baath kar rahi hai.. tu chup kyun hai.." cabir whispered in manik's ear as they were following nandini silently

"haan buddy tu nae kuch bola kyun nahi.." dhruv asked

"aur us video mae aaisa kyat ha..jo tu uski baath maan raha hai.." abhi asked the most wanted question as it was eating him up from a very long time and manik told him what he sae in nandini'ds phone. Everyone froze at their places.

"ab pata chala why was I saying yes to whatever she was saying.. ek baar.. bus ek baar yae video mujhae mil jayae.. tab batatha hun esae ki with whom did she mess .." he said with a naughty smile unaware of the consequences of what nandini had planned for him.

"oh hello I don't have whole day for u.. better walk fast.." nandini shouted as they were far behind her talking to each other.

"cuming cuming.." abhi replied


All the 8 people ( fab5, Abhi , Nandini ,Navya) reached canteen and nandini asked all of them to stand in front of her.she sat on the table and all were facing her and navya was standing beside nandini.

"so now.. as im ur senior.. tum log vo sab cheezen karogae what ill say.." she said and all nodded. Total canteen was stunned seeing fab5& Abhi, the pranksters of collage obeying a girl.

"chalo..all the boys kneel down.." she said and the words fell like bombs on them

"what..!!!" they screamed and nandini palmed her ears.

"kyu..ek simple si baat samjh nahi aati.. kneel down I said.." she said waving her phone in front of them. All of them looked at each other and the crowd that had formed by now around them. Totally helpless they kneeled down in front of her.

"so lets start from you.. tell me whats your name ?" she asked pointing towards the first guy in front of her. He was cute wearing a hat and the dhruv replied

"i..i..im Dhruv..Dhruv vedanth..second year MBBS.."

"ok..chalo next u..tell me whats ur name..?" she asked the next boy..he was cool and quite funky

"hey pretty lady..im Cabir Dhawan..second year MBBS" he replied cheerfully Although they were kneeling down he managed to say those words as polite as possible

"aww..thanks for the compliment..next u tell me your name..?" she asked the boy next to cabir. He was the most handsome one of all. His eyes were spitting fire as if he would set the whole world on fire. He directly looked into the girls eyes, they were big round and doe eyes. For a moment he lost himself in those eyes

"oh..hello..mr.daydreamer I don't have the whole day for u.. stop staring me and tell me your name.." she asked finding him lost..

He composed himself and mentally slapped himself for getting caught in front of everyone and said

"im Manik Malhotra..second year MBBS"

"that's nice..and u" she said pointing towards the last member of the line "do I need to give u a special invitation..common stop wasting my time tell me your name..?"

"hi..im Abhimanyu Thakkar..second year BDS" he replied looking at the Mukthi who beside him who was giving deadly glares to the nandini who sitting if front of them.

As all the people were gathered in the canteen seeing the sight in front of them some froze at their places..some pinched themselves for confirming that they were not dreaming..some ran away from the place in fear..some were enjoying the seen in front of them. One of such people gathered there spoke to the person beside him "yaar kaun hai yae ladki.. collage kae pehalae hi din..Fab5 aur uskae doston ko sabkae samnae keeldown karwaya aur unkae hi style mai unhiko ragging kar rahi hai..manna padaega ..kuch tho hai iss ladki mai.. Manik Malhotra ko bhi iskae samnae jhuka diya..dekhthae hai aaj aur kya kya dekhnae ko milaega.."

Listening all this mukthi's anger rose to seventh sky. As abhi noticed the anger in her eyes he asked her to calm down with his eyes and she shook her head in a NO

"hey girls..introduce yourselves" she asked looking at Aliya and Mukthi

"hi..i m Aliya.. Aliya saxena.. second year bio-technology" she said

"im Mukthi Malhotra... first year BDS" mukthi said calming down a bit..

"ok now all of u stretch your right hand" she said showing them her own hand which she streached

"what..!!" again all in unision

"just do as I say.." she said sternly. Having no other option at that time other than listening to her they all streached their hands..

"now repeat what I say.." she said

Again a loud "what..!!"

Nandini was annoyed this time and irritatingly said"if once again u people say this stupid what' na u ll find me infront of principal's office"

"ok.." they said and nodded.

"that's better..so where were we..haan.. yaad aya.. so what ever ill say u all will repeat it.. common say now.." she said looking at them

"I promise not tease or irritate my juniors..from today onwards" she said looking at them and they looked at her as if she was an alien

"jaldi bolo.. we have a lot to finish.." she said after looking at their confused faces and they repeated

"ok now.. I promise ill not comment anyone basing their looks" she said looking straight into manik's eyes.. and they all repeated

"ok..now u all get up..and u can go.." she said looking at them and all sighed in relief she too got up to leave when manik suddenly stopped her

"oh..hello madam.. video delete karo.." he said

"kaun sa video.." she asked innocently..

"don't act smart..ok now common delete the video.."
he said

"I didn't shoot any video.. if u want u can check my phone.." she said forwarding her phone for him to check.. he immediately grabbed the phone like a hungry lion but found nothing.. her entire gallery was empty.. he sighed in relief but was confused at the same time that where did she keep it..

"Mr.Malhotra u need not worry.. mainae sach mae video delete kar diya hai.." she said coming towards him and took her phone back. he found something fishy but thought to kept quiet as he didn't have any proof to blame her. While he was thinking all this she quickly left the canteen with navya and fab5 and abhi sat on their table and were talking about the recent event that just happened. A peon came with some papers in his hand and he came near manik and asked "sir.. did u see a girl here.. abhi yahin pae the.. she was talking to u.. kahan gayi..?" he asked manik obediently..

"kyu kya kaam hai..?" manik asked totally least interested

"vo apna ID card collect karna bhul gayi.. mainae sari jagah dhunda par kahi nahi mili.." he said and showed him Nandini's ID card. Manik turned his face to look at her card and as soon as he saw it he snatched it from the peons hand

"what the...!!" he said standing up from his chair.

"kya hua..kisi bhooth ko dekh liya kya..?" cabir asked taking the card from him and he too became shocked after seeing it.

"what the hell is wrong with u.. kya hai is card mai..?" mukthi said taking the ID from cabir's hand and said aloud

"yae ladki fresher hai..!!!"

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Screen freezes at everyone's shocked faces.. manik's smirking face.. and NavNi's happy faces..


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Hope u all enjoyed it.. baki ka drama part two mai.. so think whats gonna happen.. ill try to give part two tomorrow...

And haan.. don't forget to hit like and comment..warna part two aanae mai der ho jayaegi..hehe..

Take care..

Keep smiling,..

Loads of love..

Neeraja...

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seriously part 1 is awesome... nandini to fab 5 ki band baaja di... 😆 waiting for part 2 update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update soon its awesome waaahhh!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Bt y was she referring to Mr malhotra as her bf??

Anyways Continue soon

N thnx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Exciting update..
Mr malhotra her boyfriend...hahaha
i think they know each other..as she was saying..her uncle suggested ...that college..
Nandu ne aacha ullu banaya fab 5 ko..hahaha..
Manik ki shakal dekhne layak tah..when he saw the id card...
Hiii..aage kya hone wala hai..Manik will not leave her...
keep smiling n take care..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon

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