IF YOU HOLD MY HAND -A Manan FF chapter 7 Pg 36

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys, My name is Aditi. A silent reader of all the stories of this forum. I was thinking to write a story bt didn't got the courage.Bt now, finally i am doing it. Hope u all like it.
PROLOUGE

A girl of age 23 was beating a boy with a hockey stick in the corridor of a building. He was telling her to stop bt she was not listening to him at all.
Just then a boy of age 24 came and tried to stop her.
"Why the hell r u doing this . How can u beat someone lyk this. Don't u have any emotions. Think about him. He can die if u will nt stop. Please atleast now think about someone else other than than u.
"Why should i think about others. There is no use of thinking about others. In this world no one cares for u other than urself. And yes i don't hav any emotions. U just mind ur own business Manik Malhotra otherwise u will b in the place of this guy. So just don't interfare in my matters."
With that she stormed inside her apartment which was on that floor. "Why r u doing this Nandini. I know u since college . U r not like this" thought Manik. After helping that guy who was lying there , he went inside his flat which was in front of nandini's.



character sketch pg 2
chapter 1 Pg 5[B
R]
chapter 2= Pg 9
chapter3= pg13
chaptr 4 Pg 18
chapter5 Pg23
chapter6 Pg 30
chapter 7 pg 36
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey aditi
congratulations for new story...

nice prologue...

wat happened bw manan...

why is she behaving like this..

many ques bt ans only u have

so continue soon


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SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahah. Hockey se pittai :p Nice nice. :')
Continue soon! I'm sure it'll be amazing :)

Do PM!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yess
u r right
i hv thought something intersting nd a littke bit different
hope u like it
i think u l enjoy it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice n interesting prologue waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...dear..
Congrats for ur story..
Wat happened to nandu...???
Hockey sai pitai kaar Di bichara...
Manan r neighbours...
Will love to read further update..
Keep smiling n take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanxx guys
i really didnt expectef that someone will comment on my story
i l try to update part1 tmrw or day after tmrw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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EAGERLY LOOKING FORWARD TO IT...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice proto log
Interesting concept
Loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanxxx
u guys liked it
i l try to make it more interesting

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