IF YOU HOLD MY HAND -A Manan FF chapter 7 Pg 36 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ChocolatePie14

SEE, IN THE PM YOU WILL INCLUDE LINK LIKE THIS "www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4519199&TPN=5" AFTER TPN= YOU HAVE TO WRITE PAGE NO IN WHICH YOU UPDATED YOUR POST... AND THE UPDATE WAS SO EMOTION... LOVED IT... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... AND PM... LOVE YOU...


Thanxxx a lot for telling me hw to add link
and again thanxx for the cmmnt
glad that u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyccc update
Thnks for pm me
Lovd cabini bond
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Interesting concept
And she beat a guy with hockey stick hahaha
Manan love each other
And uske past mien kya hua jo bubbly nandu aisi ho gayi
Love cabir and nandini bond
Pm me plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Palchinn

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Nice.. Different concept i must say 😊
Looking forward to it.. Keep writing !! </font>


thanxxx a lot for ur feedback
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...great start...nandini is hurt...
I hope manik takes away her worries...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jesse93

Awesome one dear,
continue soon.


thanxxx a lot fr ur feedback
hope u like nxt chapters too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovePANI

Oh lord wat happened to Nandu what is her past..did some1 broke her trust That she is so broken...
Nandu u did a grt job...aise tease karne wale ko chorna nahi...
Both love each other..
Cabir knows everything about her..hope he help Manik to win Nandu trust...
U didn't PM me
:(
Keep smiling n take care...


i know u all want to know tht wht hppnd with nandu
bt u hv to wait a little for that
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey aditi ...thanks for the pm...actually i couldnt find ur atory link thats y late hogayi comment dene mein... plz try to add link in the pm so that it would be easy to find ur story

story line is very nice...different concept...loved it...character sketch very intresting... ur first chapter was really very nice...omg nandu aur dhulai kar rahi hain ek ladka ka wo bhi hockey stick ke sath yeh kya tha ???...loved the convo between manbir...wow manan loved each other from college but never expressed their love to each other...sth happened with nandu which has effected her badly...i know manik will bring her back...awesomestory line ...i just love ur story title...update soon...love u...tc...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update and thanks for pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2


A new day started with new hope. Manik was determined to change nandini. Nd nandini just dont know whay she should do.



Nandini was just leaving for her office when she saw that manik was standing at his flat's door with a guitar. As soon as she locked her flat manik started singing
Ajab leher h meri padosi, ajab se cheete ajab ishare
H zindagi k ajab se rang dhang, ajab si dhun ne mujhe pukara re
Ajab leher h meri padosi, ajab se cheete ajab ishare

Good mrng -manik said
"what the hell r u doing here" nandini said."The corridor is the property of all the flat owners miss nandini murthy, nt only urs." manik said.

Nd ur song, what u will abt that. Listen mr monkey malhotra just stay away from me. Nandini said glaring at manik.

How much away nandini. Manik asked while taking steps towards nandini. Now nandini started taking steps backwards. Finally nandini got trapped btw wall nd manik.

Manik what r u doing. Nandini tried to speak showing that she doesnt get affected to the proximity.

First of all it is manik malhotra nt monkey malhotra. Bt agar tum chaho to pyar se monkey malhotra b bol sakti ho, lekin sirf pyar se nt in ur angry tone. Nd secondly i was just singing that song randomly, that was not for u. Bt in case u want k i should sing for u then i can sing bt i can ding only romantic song for u. Manik saud softly nd seductively near her ear. After that he suddenly kissed on her cheek nd went from there winking at her.

Nandini was just stunned by this act of manik. After gaining her senses back she left for her office. Nandini works in MM Industries as CFO . After reaching office she directly went to her cabin nd tried to engross herself in files. It was the reason of her success at a small age. She always use to work to divert her mind. This reason of her non stop work was known to only two persons - cabir nd her boss who is the owner of mm industries.

After sometym she succeded in engrossing herself in work. She was so lost that she didnt noticed when her boss came to her cabin. She called her name twice bt she dudnt reacted. Then she tapped her shoulder breaking her trance.

Gm maam. Why u came here, ap mujhe bula lete m aa jati. Nandini said to her boss.
Its ok nandini. U r like my daughter nd i can come to meet my daughter. Her boss said affectionately to her. Yaa maam , u can come to meet me. Nandini said.
Beta pls dont call me maam. U know u can call me aunty. Btw i m here to talk to u abt our new project. Nandini , this project is very special for me as my son is gonna assist in this project. Basically its a tieup project with a music company. We will produce a music album under our joint label. So the music company which we gonna work with is of the famous band super six. Nd i want u to work with my son for this project. U can discusss with him abt the details regarding finance nd all to him. He l b here anytym soon.

After listening that she hv to work with super six nd manik nandini was all lost. She was thinking abt tht only when she heard hr cabins door opening. Nd sbe was shocked to core, manik was standing there with his famous attitude nd smirk . Hii mom. He said while entering the cabin.



So guys finally i hv updated it. I know i m very late bt kal meri dadi ka operation hua h nd i was hell busy in my clg nd home. So plsss forgive me. So u guys liked the surprise or not . Neyonika is nandini's boss. Plsss leave ur feedback or atleast hit a like

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