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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1
Manik came to his room nd started thinking about nandini. "Why do u changed so much nandini. I know tumhare sath kuch hua h in 3 years me. U was so happy when we passed out college. U was not this rude ,arrogant girl. Tum to hmesha sabki khushi ka reason bnana chahti thi. Phir kya ho gya tumhe. "
After sometime there was a knock on his door. He went nd opened the door. It was Cabir. "Hi cabir,andar aa na."
"Vo mujhe pta chala ki nandini ne kisi ladke ki pitai kr di,so i came here. U tell me what happened."Cabir said. "Cabir nandini ko kya ho gya h. Vo kyu itna change ho gyi h. Tere kehne pr m use notice kr rha hu. Pure din vo pta ni kahan rehti h. Ghar vapas aati h to kabhi aadhi rat ko to kabhi subah vo b full drunk. Tu mujhe kyu ni bta rha h uske past k bare m. Tu to uske contact m tha last 3 years se.
"Ha m tha uske contact me or mujhe pta b h mi kya hua h uske sath bt m tujhe ni bta sakta. Maine nandini se promise kiya h ki bina uski permission k m uske past k bare m kisi ko ni bataunga. Bas m yehi kh sakta hu ki uske sath kuch bahut bura hua h jiski vajah se uski family ne use chod diya. Isse zyada m tujhe kuch ni bta sakta. Mujhe pta h ki tu usse pyar karta tha clg m. Isliye m tere pas aaya hu. Mujhe teri help k zarurat h or shayad mujhse zyada nandini ko teri help ki zarurat h."

"Cabir m b uski help karna chahta hu bt jb tk vo ready ni hogi tb tk m b kuch ni kr sakta. Bt tu tension mat le , m mere pyar ko vapas haasil karke rahoonga. Mujhe uske past m koi interest ni h bt m uske past k vajah se ab uska present or future ruin ni hone dunga." manik said in a determined tone.
After that both chit chatted for sometym nd then cabir went to meet nandini.

Here nandini was so much restless after encounter with manik that she decided to take some anti depression pills. She was just taking them bt before that her doorbell ring. She thought that it was manik. "Samajhte kya ho tum apne ap ko, tumhe ek bar m samajh ni aata kya ki stay away from me" she blurted as soon as she opened the door.
"Looks like someone is really very angry." cabir said." I m really srry, vo i thought its manik. Nd agar tu b mujhe us fight k liye lecture dene aaya h to pls yahin se vapas chala ja" nandini said in angry tone.
" Ab koi bhai apni behen se milne b ni aa sakta kya"saying this cabir entered nd settled on couch.M sirf meri sis se milne aaya hu nd no talks abt that fight as i know galti us ladke ki h hogi, cabir said.
" Ha galti us ladke ki h thi vo ek girl ko tease kr rha tha building k neeche, so i just thought to teach him a lesson. Nandini explained.
"Its ok. I know tu kuch galat kr h ni sakti. Bt tu manik se hmesha itna kyu naraz rehti h. Tu to usse pyar karti thi na clg me bt kabhi tune use btaya ni."cabir asked her.
"Yes, i loved him bt u know cabir jab hum kisi se pyar kare or wahi log hamara sath na de or hme cheat kare to life m kuch ni bachta jeene k liyr. Nd m vapas us phase m ni jana chahti. Or na h m manik ko dard dena chahti hu kunki meri life m dard k alava kuch b ni h. M ni chahti ki meri vajah se usmi life b ruin ho jaye."nandini said with tears in her eyes.
"Hey its ok nandini. I undrstamd ur condition thats why i m not forcing u for anything. Bt pls atleast give ur life a new chance. Zaruri ni h ki agar hme life m kisi ne cheat kiya ho to sab log vaise h ho. There r some persons who want to see u happy."cabir said while side hugging nandini.
"I will try cabir bt its not that easy for me as it sounds."nandini said.
With that cabir left nandini's house nd went to his home.

Here both nandini nd manik r thinking abt each other. Bt the difference is that manik is determined to change nandini nd win him back. On the other hand nandini was determined to not including manik in her life. She dont want him to b a part of her prblms.


Phewww
so how was it. I tried my best to write it well bt if there r some mistakes then pls forgive me .
I know there was no manan in ihis update bt it will b in nxt part so no worries.
pls tell
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome..
Nice story..
So manan love each other already..
Nice nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Nice update
Everything is related to nandinis past
They love eachother already that gud
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
very interesting to see to known strangers with opposing intentions.
the story is going to be a blast i guess. hope you continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
its new intresting concept ...

love it ..

cont ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
SEE, IN THE PM YOU WILL INCLUDE LINK LIKE THIS "www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4519199&TPN=5" AFTER TPN= YOU HAVE TO WRITE PAGE NO IN WHICH YOU UPDATED YOUR POST... AND THE UPDATE WAS SO EMOTION... LOVED IT... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... AND PM... LOVE YOU...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Heyyaaa...

It was super awesome...

Nandini ke past mein aisa kya hogya...

Both love each other...bt havent confessed...awww...was the cabini...

Loved it...

Waiting for manan...

Continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome update waiting to know abt nandus past what has happened that she is changed. N its good to know manan loves each other
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Oh lord wat happened to Nandu what is her past..did some1 broke her trust That she is so broken...
Nandu u did a grt job...aise tease karne wale ko chorna nahi...
Both love each other..
Cabir knows everything about her..hope he help Manik to win Nandu trust...
U didn't PM me
:(
Keep smiling n take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Nice.. Different concept i must say 😊
Looking forward to it.. Keep writing !!

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