#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

Sabahfatima14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Nice...next part jaldi plz...

Keep doing d amazing work

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Addrita Islam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Awesome update..
Liked the flashback part most..
Sometime wo do that mistake, which snatchs the most beautiful part of our life..that part which could have made life more beautiful..sometime we dont admit our mistake and so we had to repent..
But Manik..he realised, admitted and ready to do anything to correct that mistake..
All the best to him..
Update soon
Take care

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Lia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Flashback was supb... Waiting to see how manik monofy nanduuu

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azwa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

this was really good

update soon

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Boomchelesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I liked the update..!! Do continue soonn...!!
Loved thier bonding... Bt dont u think its tume nandu shows some chanes unaffection towards him... Everyone gets second chance in thrir life.. Everyone dors mistakes.. Realizing ur mistake its highly big acheiving thing... Coz many ppl dont even realise it... Coz of their so called ego... BUT here manik realized... So its high tym... Nandini shld show her affection.. Instead of being a tough nut to crack... No guy does so much for repenting his mistake forca girl.. As manik is doing...!
God bless u

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Addrita Islam

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update..
Liked the flashback part most..
Sometime wo do that mistake, which snatchs the most beautiful part of our life..that part which could have made life more beautiful..sometime we dont admit our mistake and so we had to repent..
But Manik..he realised, admitted and ready to do anything to correct that mistake..
All the best to him..
Update soon
Take care

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asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Now I am confused. Where do I comment? Here or Wattpad?

Anyway...!!

Hhaaayyyeee kiite pyaare the dono saathnmei. Bas na Apoorva. Ab Nandu ko thoda toh melt hota hua dikhaaao please!

The update was very lovely! Flashback was obviously th best. Angry and bossy Nandu is the cutest! Thanks for pm!

Sent the buddy request to the other id also! Of course i ned pm ;)

aur nahi mila toh Wattpad hai na :D

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devilkhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Lovely update so manik n nandini fight with their own ego

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Yathignna Arhitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#319

It was nice and emotional
And flashback is beautiful and lovely
Pls na make them together early
I know it's not easy but he realised his mistake right
So pls and ha what about that 2nd one mistake story
U haven't updated it for a long time
Continue Soon please
Thanks for PM

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shruti_gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#320

Amazing update...
Nandini recalling her good time with manik...
Flashback was mind blowing...nandini was so concernered for manik's health and when he refused to sleep... she just shouted and dragged him to the room...she is cute, caring and adorable...
U really nicely penned nandini's emotion...
I just loved the update...
Update soon...

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