#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

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Apurva

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Posted: 9 years ago

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Awesome update. Loved it to core. Flashback part was mindblowing. The way u scripted thz update was commendable. So much of mixed emotions of present and past.waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.keep writing.

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neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

Awesome

flashback was mindblowing

when are they gonna be normal

now manik has felt his love to her

thnx for pm

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rushagree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#294

nice chapter

plzzz update next soonnn

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Superb update
Nandu was still so concerned abt manik... She didnt lyk seeing him stressed...
His concern also looks lyk fake to him...
The flashbck... Nandu taking care of him...it was cute...
I hope jaldi se dono ke beech sab theek hojaye
Thnkz 4 the pm

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eppie99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

Well what to say about it ????
Actually u have chosen the name of the ff very carefully "ONE MISTAKE"
Well because if that one mistake not only they two but we too are suffering
They both are hurt becuz they are suffering soo much in their lives n we are hurt cuz they have suffered sooo much
I really dont like the differences btw them bt cant help it cuz i luv ur ff
Awesum update
Spsly the flashback oart was really superb
Continue soon

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nandu00sr

@nandu00sr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

Awesome.. Missed lots of updates dear.. Sorry coudnt comment.. And ha coming to the update.. Jst amazing... Their past memories flashing in front of their eyes but Nandini is being so stubborn.. We can't say that coz what what she has gone through is making her behave like this.. Still manik is trying his best.. Hope they both get together soon.. Thanks for pm.. Take care.. Love you..

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Noor

@CROCKOMICHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

So emotional and flashback was so amazing full of love concern and care

Serves him right nandini is really treating him well he deserves it.

Update soon

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#299

loved this update dear...manan were so happy in olden days...and waiting for their old cheerful days again...

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#300

hey apurva
nice update
i read complete in one go
tottaly maza aa gaya
u r great writer
keep updated
manik is at fault but now he will learn from his mistake

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