#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sadiya51

@sadiya51

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#241

It wasn't bad yaar but again I have the same complain from you...
I want u to make them fight more like hell and I want nandini to make him suffer and shout in him for every single thing

Buy the update was good
And I like when nandini taunts him and don't let him touch her

But I so loved that manik is trying to make everything right so good luck for manik

And pls involve their talk about their baby also pls...bhale hi fight karke ho ya normally

Thank for a good update bye

Quote

sameeksha

@mini_manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Kya yaar surf rulati hi rahoge kya..
Thoda romance or comedy le aao na..
Ab to ro rokar bhi thak gye..
But still loved it alot.
Chal know prepare nxt part and cont soon.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Thanks for pm

u have written it beuatifully again

can really feel both their pains

nandu still loves him a lot but its hard to forget how he has broken he she gave him everything but he decided to go for soha

n now he wanher back its gonna be really really hard for him

Quote

cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

amazing update dea...

continue soonnn

tnx fr d pm

Quote

Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Nw manik malhotra shud work hard to woo nandini

Want som romance to mk stry more intresting

Love the way manik tease nandini

But she is hurt so its definetly not going to work

Pl updt next part soon

Tanx for pm

Quote

Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

well. you know i am not your silent reader i am your new reader thanks for updating this one i was waiting for it i kinda liked it the way story is going on little slow can't redeem everything so early that's i liked the most let him suffer let him try so story is on good track keep it up girl hope you will get good response in.this because you deserve the best

Quote

Arunima

@abhutani0311

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Hey this was a well written chapter...it really hurts to see manan so hurt yaar! Seriously it does! I felt like crying throughout this update but unfortunately i myself dont know on whose side i am...nandini is obviously right in her place but being a manan fan, its tough to see manik getting hurt too and the both of them being apart and in pain...please continue soon! And do send me a PM!
Love,
Arunima

Quote

epicangel

@epicangel

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Really amazing!!
Both of them r in such a pain..
Seriously one mistake can ruin ur life..
I live this ff the most..
Waiting for nxt update eagerly!!

Quote

Apurva

@apps33

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla
well. you know i am not your silent reader i am your new reader thanks for updating this one i was waiting for it i kinda liked it the way story is going on little slow can't redeem everything so early that's i liked the most let him suffer let him try so story is on good track keep it up girl hope you will get good response in.this because you deserve the best

i guess you took me a little too seriously😆😆😆

if i remove you from my buddy list toh meko devil's bride ka pms kaun dega😕😉

and yeah

thank you so very much for the comment dear😳😳

i will try to keep up to your expectations... 😊😃