#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

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Priya.T

@Priya.T

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

It was an emotional one ! Wat Manik did is very big, but Nandini's words are too harsh !! But she is right in her point.. but I really feel pity for Manik :( Waiting for the next part !

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

That was awesome!!!!!!!

Loved it yaar

Each a d every emotion. ...

Well written!

Loved their small fight...

Manik taking care of nandu s feet...was like he was trying to sooth the pain on her bruised heart. ...

It was again a small baby step taken by him

But he has to run a marathon...

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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neetamandaliya

@neetamandaliya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Awesome. ...
Update soon.. . 😆

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Loved the update.

Manik z trying his best to get back her.

Loved the way he takes care of her.

Nandini, she z hurt it will take time for her to forget everything.

Nice update.

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millie

@millie17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#225

U r bck aftr a lot of tim...but d chp ws awsm dr...
Nandu wl sury nt let go manik so easily n ge completly deserves it too...
Lukng frwrd to whr dis 8 mnths wl lead their relatn to..
U penned dwn d entire chp v butifully...
Keep up ur gud wrk dr...

Mnv hpy dat u r nt gonna end d LIFE CHNGNG BET soon...I really lik dat story bcz it shows us d strong side of nandu.
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Revenge seekng nandu is v rare to see n so I like it a lt.
There r v few ff s of dis kind n most of yhem r stopd in d midl...
So m glad dat u dcided to gv dis story a propr endng...
Wl b waitng fr d updt...

Continue soon dr...

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Superb update
Manik got the first aid box coz she was hurt...
Bt yahan toh nandu shout kar rahi thi uspe... Manik ko kounsa asar ho raha tha voh toh nandu mei hi lost tha...
Manik bhi na usse kiss karne ki bajaye cushion utha liya...
Aww itne pyaar se uski injury ko tend kar raha tha...
Nandu in pain... Again pushed him away
Thnkz 4 the pm

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Heart wrenching update. .. Both are in so much pain and they are solace of each other...

Hope everything will be fine soon

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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smartgirls

@smartgirls

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

R u kidding me...u say this is crap...lolz...its not...its simply amazing...loved they way u hav potrayed it...

How can manik leave nandu for that soha...well i so want to see an angry nandu to punish manik for his deed...though at the end i want them to be together but manik need to learn his less beforehand...

Well amazing update...thanks for the pm...

N hmm continue soon...