Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note )

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pooja71

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Update soon really a nice story . Eagerly waiting for it

Pls update asap

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sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Lovely concept
Awesome updates
Just read it
Pls pm me if u can when u update!!

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Urvi Saini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

OMG!

That jerkshad!

Bloody moron Galat jagah par galat time pe pahunch gaya

I so hate him !

Because of him my live birds were hurt

Loved it

Continue soon

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Part 4

Cabir : manik tere jaane ke baad...sab badal gaya tha...

Tune kaha ki tu us se shaadi ni karna chahta tha right par ek baar bhi tune socha ki vo kya chahti hai...

Manik looks towards him...

Cabir : manik you know tere jaane ke baad bhi use hope thi ki tu aayega jarur aayega...lekin tu ni aays...

Jab muktu ki engagemeny hui tu bhi tu ni aaya...

But you know what tu haar gaya aaj uski HOPE jeet gayi...

Manik starts looking down...

He was just listening to him...

Cabir : manik tu us se pyaar ni karta right...

Manik nods...

And this came as a shock for cabir he thought that after knowing everything manik woll became before one...

Cabir : manik tu...

But manik cut him b/w...

Manik : cabir yaar...vo..vo mai pehle use like karta tha...tab bhi vo pyaar ni tha...it was a mere like...yaar..mai ni karta...mai...mai...mujhe ni pata yaar...sab itni jaldi mein ho gaya...

Cabir was shocked to hear all this from his mouth...now he was angry , pity on him...as he knew that ignoring nandini his true love is his biggest mistake... And he will never be able to be happy...

Cabir : bas manik...thik hai...you are right

Mai jaa raha hoon nandu ki dawayi lene...

He gets up and start walking but stops...and

Cabir : manik don't worry...mai tujhe jaldi freedom dula doonga is unwanted relationship...se...

And he walks away leaving confused manik but he shooed away his all thoughts and gets up...

Meanwhile...nandini gets up and when she opens her eyes she saw pair of eyes staring at her...she smiles seeing him and says...

Nandu : aryaman tum mujhe aise kyun dekh re ho...

Arya smiles and : kush nhi...bas watching the most beautiful face...in front of my eyes...

Listening this nandini smiles and says tum pagal ho...

Manik also reaches their and listenes arya's complement for nandini...and give not so intrested look and walks away...

Nandini : hmmm...aryaman i wanna change...actuallu m not comfortable with this...

Arya gets up from chair and handover the changes to nandini and smiles and says : you change m giing...waise bhi have to go on round...you take rest and if you need any help call me hmmm...

Nandini smiles and nods and aryaman goes from their...

Nandini knew that arya have feelings for her bit she never felt awkward with him... Their bond was special...most of her time goes with aryaman only...as they works together...

Ok guys i know No MaNan but its needed...this parts are also important...i wanna show all bonds in my story...and manan will come with bang...so no worry...

And please comment...and if you want to give any suggestion your most welcome...

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Amazing update
Manik ko fir bhi sb sach pta chl gea fir bhi wo khta hai wo pyar nhi krta nandu se...
Lovd it

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Sony

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

I like this story.

Some things different.

But want more.

Why r u giving small update.

Want more.

Waiting for next update

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sanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

nice part divya...

manik is so dumb...he didnt understood his own feelings...

liked arya and nandu

waiting for manan to come with a bang...'

continue soon

LOVE

SANJANA

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Part 4

B part...

Manik was going towards reception when he saw cabir who was searching someone...so he goes to him...

Manik : kya hua cabir????

Cabir looks towards him and says

C : yaar vo ye medicine deni thi nandu ko par koi mil ni ra...mujhe jaana hai umergency hai...

M : haaann...tu thik hai na la mujhe de de...

Cabir looks towards him and than looks away...

Cabir : hmm...no tu kyun taklif kar rha hai...mai khud de aata hoon...

Manik : cabir tu...

He was about continue but...

Nyo : what's up bacho...

Cabir : oh...maa...acha hua aap aa gaye...actually ye medicine deni thi nandu ko aur abhi mujhe jaana hai aap de dogi please...

Nyo : ya ya...i will...tum jao...

He say thanks and hug her and runs...

Nyo turns and was about leave...when

Mrs seigal : are nyonika...

Nyo : oh hii...how r u ???

Mrs s : tum yahan...

Nyo : haan vo ek min...

She turns towards manik and ...

Nyo : manik ye dawayi dedogi tum...please...

Manik : mom please kyun...ya i will give...

He takes them and goes...

In nandini room...

Manik enters and get shocked as his wife was standing their only in black bra and skirt...

Seeing it his eyes popped out after coming out from his shock he turn on his possessive nature...

Manik : our you out of your mind..

He says in high due to which nandini jumps on her place she turns and sees manik...she quickly takes her sarree and hide herself in it...

Manik : can't you lock while changing or you want everyone to come and see you in this state haan...

He comes and lock the door and put medicine...on table...he was speaking furiously but nandu was in her own dreamland... As it was for the first time manik was speaking to her by his own...even if he is shouting...

Seeing her lost manik clicks finger in front of her...

Manik : what happen nandini...???

Nandini comes out of her trance and...

Nandu : vo...ma..i..man...ii..k...vo..

Manik : kya vo..

He literally shouts due which nandini shivers...and he understands that he is being rude...so he calms down

Manik : nandu you should have locked your door while changi g na angel...

Listening this tears wells up in her eyes she instantly hugs him...manik himself was surprised by listening angel from his mouth that too after...5 damn years...

He was taken aback but as soon as she places her tiny arms around her waist...

He was not able to control the warmth which he was craving and he himself was unaware of that...he also hugs her back...as soon as nandini feels his hand on her hair's and on her waist...she tightens the hug and cried out loud...due to this her saree falls down...but manik throw her saree and again take hold of her waist which was now without fabric...tears also welled in manik's both were crying for seperation for bloody five years...

Manik patted her head and rubs her hand on her back...

Manik : nandu...ba...bas bacha..

But nandini was crying only crying...

Nandini : ma...n..ii

And that was it for manik he tightens the hug and starts crying...the word...for which he was craving.Maniii...today he heard that...her maannii...only for her...when they became friends they used to call each other manii...and angel...

They both were crying for rachother...

But still they were not together.

Manik was still saying that this is not love...and he hug her for their friendship which was pure..

Will manik be able to realizhis true love ????

To know stay tuned...

Guys promo wala i have changed...so sorry for it...but it will be more better trust me...

Enjoy and please comment...