Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note ) - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazingg update
Aawww so cute mannu puppy
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.
Too cute..
Manan with manna was a complete happy family..
Really loved it
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its awesome honey.

Superb written.

Cabir is as always awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very lovely..cutest update continue waiting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u updated..!
Thanks for the update..!

It was so cute.!
Aww puppy's love..for manik..it was awesome!
N their selfie..!
Cabir comment..he wud never leave a chance to tease manik...lolzz

Loved the update.!
Plz update soon.!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear
Update was very good
Sweet moments
I have a question is Manik and Nandini married again
I mean unki shady gone wali thi na so Kia wo hogai
I couldn't get it isiliye just asked
Continue soon
Thanxxx
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Posted: 9 years ago
mannu malhothra that was cute


fab 4 s comments were awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
😊

Malhotra Mansion

8'pm...


Manik was sitting in hall with his laptop and coffew he was working... When he hear loud shouts of his friends ... He looks at door and found his all friend grinning...


All : hello manik...

Manik raises his eyebrows and hesitatingly

M : umm...he..llo...you here??

All settles while cabir hitting his head from back side and picking his coffee speaks

C : kyun aa nhi sakte...

M : aah...cabirr...wo meri coffee hai...aur tum aa saktw ho...but you all ek saath kuch plan hai kya..

He speaks frowning...

Abhi : haan plan tu hai... Aur plan yeh hai ki.. As mom dad ghar pe nhi...hai... Tu hum tum teeno ko yahan akele nhi chod sakte tu... Tumhara dhyaan rakhne ke liye...


Manii chuckles and speaks sarcastically...

M : tumhara pata nhi but... Meri nandu ko hi tumhara dhyaan rakhna padega...


Listening this all shout together


All : TUMHARI nhi HUMARI nanduuu...

Manik rubs his ears and irritatedly

M : ab..vo meri bhi hai... Just shut your mouth...


Al : huh...whatever... By the way doll hai kahan..

M : ya...she is in hospital... Some emergency.. So she was called...

Mu : oh...aur where is my mannuu... Bhaii..

She speak mannu... Deliberately long... Making manik pissed...

M : mukktiii...

Mu : are...yahi tu poocha ki mannu... Kahan hai...

M : vo...yahi tha abhi khel rua tha wait I'll call...
Umm...Mannu...Mannu...where are you??

As soos as manik shouts his name... He comes running from garden... He comes and jumps on manik while he immediately holds him... And kisses his forehead... Mannu... Looks him... Smilingly little... Taking his tounge out... All were staring at him...

As soon as mannu turn and look at new faces staring at him... He startled and dugs his face in maniks chest... Making manik chuckle...

M : guys ise aise mat dekho... Vo dar raha hai...

All immediately change their expression.. And

C : haan...papa..ko bura lag raha hai na

Manik smiles and

M : yes... I love my baby... And i can't tolerate anyone harming... Him... He is our family member now... With Full MALHOTRA RIGHTS...

Mu : yes...and he'll be my bodyguard... Now... Bua's champ...

Abhi side hugs her and

A : no need of that baby... Ab mai hi hoon tumhara sab kuch...

Mukti blushes and all teases them...

Mu : umm...Mannu... Champ come to me...

M : mukti you tu scared from dog... Na

Mu : haan but now am big girl bhai... And i love puppy's...

Manik smiles

Mu : mannu...


Listening his new but familier name with so much love... Encouraged him to look back... With puppy eyes...and looks at all of them...looking whose voice was that ...


Mu : mannu...

Listening again he immediately looks at the owner and hesitatingly go towards her as her new MUMMA told that if any family wala member calls him with love...he have to behave good and go to that person...although whatever nandini was bilberrind in kitchen when she ewas boiling milk for him and he was giving her his company... Was really alien for him... But wo thoda thoda samajh gaya...


He goes near mukti and before climbing pn her he looks in her eyes ... When he sees her smiling he sits on her lap innocently and burried her face in her tummy...

There was silence as they all were noticing this little one each and every step...and were amazed to see his antics... He was totally... Like nandini
It was like he is nandini's puppy wala roop...
He was naive , mesmerizing , cute , naughty , adorable , beautiful...and this all was present in nandini...


All goes aww at him...and were blessed to have this little one...

Manik was smiling like an idiot looking at him...

Mukti holds him tight and kisses him...




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N : manik...manik...

She shouts from hall as she comes back from hospital...


All were playing in garden with mannu... And were relly jelled up well with him...

C : jaa...be ... Tujhe bula ri hai...

Manik nods and goes in hall... Leaving all of them behind and giving warning not to come their... And disturb them...




Manik goes and back hugged her making her startled but knowing the touch she smiles and turns and hugs...him... He too hugs her back...


N : missed you ..

M : i too...missed you doll ...

Nandini titles her head and manik kisses her forehead... He than kisses her cheeks and chin...
He bends little down and kisses her neck making her moan...which turned him on... Manik dugs his face in her cleavage while she arcs to give him more access... Manik... Kisses their leaving his saliva while she moans... Manik was enjoying her moan... He titles his head and kisses corner of her lips... Making her red... She blushes and turns... And manik immediately hold her...

N : manii...chodo na...

M : no...

He speaks huskily coming closer to her and back hugging her...

N : mannii...please sab hai... Yahan...

M : tunhe kaise pata...

N : mukti told...me...

M : hmm...

He speaks moving her hair in front and kissing her back as she was wearing backless umbrella cut...

N : kya..hm...manik... Leave na...

She tries to free herself but than who can... Save from... Manik Malhotra...

Manik make her turn and again attacks her neck ignoring her pleads...


But she immediately pushes him back when she heards mannu's barking ... Mannu was standing behind them looking at them confused that what his parents were doing😉😉😉


Manik frowns...tries to pull her back but she hold mannu in her arms and blushes...

N : manii...ni mannu hai...

M : nandini tu kya hua yaar... Kam na

N : manik...mannu ke saamne ni... Bad.. Effect parega

Manik frowns...

M : seriously nandini...aaahhb god... Saare paaglo ka paala mujhse hi pada hai...

He speaks irritatedly...

C : tu...sahi keh ri hai... Vo...


M : bas tum logo ki kami thi...

He speaks and all laughs...


Seeing all laughing a peaceful smile too appears on his face...




...

Screen freezes on all laughing face...







Stay happy

Love


Divya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...m the 1st one to comment...

Awsome update...soo cute...

Manik nd mannu bond...
Mannu is totally like nandu..sweet..naive.. innocent..loving...
He jelled wid othrs really well...

Manan romance...
Ek aur agaya in b/w their romance..their mannu...

Manik's irretation fr breaking his romance...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Good one
Cont soon

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