Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note ) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey i read bth ur stry in 1 go..it ws amazing..plz update bth d stry..plz pm me..
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... read the story in one go. .
really loved it. .
amazing...
great job... beautifully penned...
egarly waiting...
thank you so much for the wonderful writing...
stay blessed n take care
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

... read the story in one go. .

really loved it. .
amazing...
great job... beautifully penned...
egarly waiting...
thank you so much for the wonderful writing...
stay blessed n take care


Thank you
You to take care
Be happy...😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Am here with new part...
I hope you will enjoy...


Part 11

Nandini pov

I was standing in balcony to look for manik as he was no where to be seen...

I was too nervous to face him in this shirt...

Ok...it's not like am wearing this dresses...like short one...first time but still shirt is different thing...

On not finding him i turns and i was like...

Gosh...he is looking so intensly

Y???

Am i looking bad or what???

But when he statts walking towards me...i was damn nervous man...

No
No
No
No
Aaahhh

He came close to me...

And believe me that feeling of having him this much close to me was bliss...

But his next act made me numb

He kissed...goooddd...
He kissed me... My first kiss with him... And it is beautiful... Ok ok i know on chicks but. It is beautiful...


Manik's pov...

I was their standing spell bounded by the beauty in front of me...

She was looking an angel a pure bliss angle... Ya of course hot one

I don't know what got inside me i kissed her...

Damn i kissed her...

No doubt i wanted that... I wanted us to be happen...

But *sigh* it can't happen...

Some people can't have the thing for which they crave...

And am too from that list...



They both were lost in each other

Manik titles his face and looks at her passionately as if drinking her beauty with his eyes...

He caresses her cheek and

M : you are beautiful nandini

She shly looks at another side

Manik takes her in his arms and places her on bed and comes over her...

Leaving nandini shocked she was not able to understand any thing..

Her life was meesed up now..

Manik leans and gives wet kisses on her neck leaving his saliva there...

Both were new to this feeling...

Butterflies were dancing in their stomachs...

Jitters ran down through their spine...

N : ma...maniii...

She speaks with difficulty...

Manik looks into her eyes and their was craving for him in her eyes...

He was about to say something whwn his phone started ringing..

First he was ignoring but when his eyes falls on screen of his mobile he got all his senses back...

It was call of person because of which they are suffering so much

He immediately gets up from her and goes in balcony...

Manii picks up call...

M : what you want now..??

V : ok...angry young man cool down

M : speak up

V : ok...suna hai sab party mein gaye hai...lekin nandini ghar par hai

M : haan tou

V : tou y didn't you gone???

M : none of your business

V : listen it's my buisness...
Manik am warning you agar tum uske paas aane ki koshish Bhi ki tu i will kill her...and you know that i can...

Listening this manik chuckles sarcastically

M : you say that you love her... But you don't HARSHAD... You don't... You always end up telling me that you'll kill her right??
Than how do you love her...

H : listen manik don't cross your limits you know what can i do...

M : ab tumne had par kardi hai harshad... Mai nandini ko aur pain mein nhi dekh sakta...
I...i lov...e her damn it...
I love her...


Tears roll down from his eyes..

H : he he he...jabhi tu keh ra hoon...manik agar pyaar karte ho tu us se door rehna tum..

M : ab nhi harshad...wo meri hai sirf meri... Ab tum use haath bhi nhi laga payoge... Vo meri hai sirf meri... Now I'll fight for us...for her...

He speaks all this greeting his teeths... He was remembring pain , craving in her eyes for him..

H : manik...had mein raho...mai use maar dunga..

M : nhi...ab nhi...tumhein pehle mujhse guzarke jaana hoga...

H : wo tumhare paas nhi aayegi...
Tumne use bola jo sab uske baad nhi...

M : he he he...tum galat ho..vo ab bhi mere paas hai... Lekin ab aur der nhi karunga mai... Uske paas chale jaaunga...tum kuch nhi kar payoge...

With this he cuts the call...

Harshad : no...manik..tumhe kinat chukani padegi iske liye...
Nandini meri hai sirf meri nhu tu kisi ki bhi nhi...yes...kisi ki bhi nhi...



Ok..guys ab aur nhi..

Ye hi kaam chala li..

Ok pls response dena. Pls..😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
M loving this story.. But last time you didn't accept my buddy request but now chuck off.. I'll follow it now..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Update
Now manik is fight for nandini to harshad
It was awesome
like it very much
Update soon
Take care dear😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Manik k hote hue that jerk can't do anything
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Awesome Update
Now manik is fight for nandini to harshad
It was awesome
like it very much
Update soon
Take care dear😊


Thank you dear😊😊
And yes manii will fight but still problems gonna come
Am glad you like
And thanks for commenting
Be happy
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

M loving this story.. But last time you didn't accept my buddy request but now chuck off.. I'll follow it now..


Am glad to know that
You liked it
Thank you
And ya actually not only you many buddy request are pending...

Am sorry
But now i have accepted all
Hope yours too my pending box is empty now
Take care
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update.
I am happy now maink will fight with harshad for nandini.
waiting to know what will happen next.
continue soon.

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