Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note ) - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..
So the person is none other than harshad...
Happy with maniks decision
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update!!


i like your story! 😊😊😊

but last time i knew manik loved veebha

did i miss out on something?

anyway, update soon

will be going thru the previous chappies again 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm eagerly waiting for harsad n manik face off

Don't separate manan


Now only manan
Please update soon n long if you can
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Now manik will fight for her
Manan romance was beautiful
That harshad is a jerk
Update soon
More
Lamba wala
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update continue soon waiting very eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update ohh all this is doing harshad read all parts in one go its superb conept thanks for pm continue soon waiting for next part keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago


Here is new one...

Enjoy...

Part 11 B

After cutting call manik comes inside and found nandini no where...

He looks for her in washroom but she was not there...

He comes out of room and start walking down wards...

He sees everywhere but she was no where to be seen...

He goes out in garden

And there she was admiring stars

He smile seeing her and goes inside..

Nandini pov

Life has become a mystery...
Don't know what to solve??

I don't know manik that whether you will love me ever or not...but i promise..you that I'll be always there for you...I'll never leave you never..

I was gazing stars when i feel something on my shoulders ...
I lokk up and founds manik with blanket and pillow...

I smiles at him he too smiles back

Than he indicates me to hold that pillow i too follow him...

Than he places that blanket down
And pillows and other blanket...too

...

M : come...

N : me...

M : yes...you come will lie here...

She goes and sits beside him but he pulls her and she fall on his chest...

They both were lost in each other eyes
Manik titles his hand and places her strand behind her ear...

She smiles...

He smiles back...

Than she lies on his shoulder...

M : what you were doing here...??

N : i was gazing at stars..

She says looking at stars...

M : but you tu never liked them right

N : ya but now i love them...

M : and reason is me right

N : hmm...you are the only reason that am alive...

She got tears in her eyes...

Listening to this manik immediately comes over her...

He wipes her tear and nods in no

M : itna pyaar karti ho..

N : is se bhi jyada...

Manik smiles brightly and leans down and kiss her forehead...

M : thank you for being there for me nandini...

N : I'll be humesha...

Listening to this tears welled up in his eyes he immediately hugs her tightly.

Nandini too hugs him back...

M self talk : aww...god...she loves me so much and what i did??
I hurt her...always...
But not now nandu...
I love you...very much...and soon I'll tell you but pehle mujhe us jerkshad se apna hisab lena hai...

With this he changes their position now nandini was on top of him...

He was caressing her back and she waa just lying there breathing heavily

Manik covers themselves with blanket

M : nandu...

N : hmmm...

M : i hurt you very much na

N : umm...may be...but now you'll not leave me right

She says titling her head..to look in his eyes..

And he immediately innocently nods vertically...

Nandini chuckles...

And kisses his cheeks but soo she realizes what she did she blushes hard and hide her face in his chest...

Manik chuckles on her cute antics and hold her more tight...

Both were leaving that moment happily...

Soon it was time for every one to come but manan were still lost in each other giggling , teasing , fighting uselessly just like before they used to do...

All comes back...

After parking cars every one was going inside...

Nyo raj already went inside for their room...

But younger were going slowly today all were staying here only as per nyo's order...

Cabir : guys...aaj tu maja aa gya haina

Abhi : ya but agar babu doll hoti tu maja aata...

Mu : ya aur...

But she stops in middle as they all here giggling sounds coming from garden side


Alya : whose there...

C : mujhe nandini ki awaz lagi..

Abhi : ya lets see...

They all headed towards garden and get shock as well as happy seeing scene in front of them...

Nandini was lying under manik and he was tickling her and she was laughing whole heartily...

All were happy to see manik nandini together like before...

Manik was tickling her when his eyes fall on all standing there he stops tickling...

M : hey...come...you came back..
So enjoyed..

He says while sitting nandu too sits back and looks at all still laughingly

Manik looks at her smiles...

N : elllooo...

She speaks wavingly cutely

All smile on her cute antics...

All goes and sits beside them...

Nandini moves little back to give them all space means now she was sitting close to manik...

Manik too takes her in side hug while all looks at them happily..

Navya : you look amazing together...

Alya : yup...

Muktu : be like this only

Dhruv : humesha...

Listening to this manan looks at each other smilingly...

But cabir and abhi were quite as for them to believe they need time but no doubt they were happy too...

Mu : vaise nandini...you wore bhai ki shirt...

Nandini starts blushing..

Now she was wearing shorts too when she came down...

M : mukti don't tease her yaar..

Alya : awww...biwi ki side haan...

Manan blushes

Navya : guys agar hum saath hai so y don't we play something??

Mu : ya let's play...

Cabir : what about DARE..

Muku : ok...as we know every thing about each other so ya dare...

Ok so first is abhi...

Abhi : are me...

Ca : hann...let's not spin bottle just one by one give dare to each other cool..

Dhruv : so abhi...you have to do an item no.

Listening this all starts laughing...

C : and NO is not allowed

Alya : yes...do it abhi...

Not having any chance abhi danced on munni badnam...

All the while nandini was whistling and jumping and manik was stopping her due to her problem...

But nandini was busy...

At last manik holds her places her on his lap and holds her tight while nandu pouts...

And manik quickly pecks it leaving nandu shocked...

All were seeing them too and laughs

For which manik glares at them..

Soon abhi comes and sits beside mukti

Mu : aew...my baby...

She kisses him on cheeks and he pouts

Soon all do dares and nandu's dare was to shout loudly that too..

I am cute but not your you bloddy jute

And she shouts so loudly that they all holds there ears...

All the while in game..

Nandu was enjoying was running from manik's lap but he quickly holds her scolds to which she pouts...


Girls were aware of nandu's periods and were going all aww in manik's carung and were also shocked to know that he knew...

Last was the turn of manik...

He was given to kiss nandini on 6 places and that should not. Be reapeated...

He too quickly agrees but nandini's all hosh get vanished listening dare..

He smirks and make nandini stand

He kisses her forhead
Than her eyes
Than cheeks
Than neck
Than hands
Than he bends down lifts her shirt and kisses on her belly button..

Jitters ran down through her spine...

She shly hide her self in abhi's arms and all laugh on her antics...

And after lots of teasing and masti all heads towards there room with bright smile as after so long they all enjoyed so much together like before 5 yrs...



All sleep with bright smiles...

To welcome new morning...



Ok guys ye lamba tha now i want
Comments bharke..😆😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
I loved it cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bestest chapter of this story! Hope the ones coming are even better! :D

loved the dare of 6 kisses! Damn creative!

Waiting eagerly! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww too cute...
Nandu is too adorable. .
Hope everything will be alright soon.
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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