The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

LOL!! A chappy full of Fart.. Hilarious. I was laughing like mad.. Poor Manik still doesn't hv any idea who did this to him..

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Khushbu

@gudda_k

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Interesting update dear
Truly loved it to the core
That hickey incident was really a hilarious one ...
U r awesome writer dear
Continue soon

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Gosh...hahahaahhaa...
Pr nandu hamesha jiada krti h yr ...
She trouble him 3 folds...
Agle part me Manik ko jiada krna chahiye... 😆

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#384

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Shiiittt !!!!!!! What esse kese kar leti ho tum.

Hume hassa ke maarna chahta ho kya. 🤣

For sure no one can predict u.

That's Aashna aur koi toh ho Nahi sakta.

But srsly ROOSTER GANDOLA bahut hassa rahe hai.

Nandu dressed up to kill someone in the party for sure.

Manik ke toh hosh hi dug aye the.

Nandani was getting goosebumps by his touch.😳

Aur Manik he had to give her bite marks n hickey.

It could have been a sensual night

But Nandu very intelligent , kya pills lekar humtu hai.

For self defence Heheheee.

Shit Bechara Manik kitni buri haalat hogaye thi Uski. 😆

Upar se all toilets were occupied . All Thks to Rooster.

Cabir guards ko bula ne ki dhamki de raha tha Manik ko, hmmm Uski haalat bhi samjh sakte hai. 🤣

God save Nandu from that GANDOLA,

Manik ko Jabh pata chalega toh Uski khair Nahi.

Bachke rehana re baba bachke rehana re.

Thks for the PM Aashna.

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

ha ha ha...hillarious update ever yaar...i can't stop laughing after reading this update...especially after alya and manik encounter... Poor manik had to face nandinis plans...ha ha ha...ever charming and hot banda is running for his dignity and life to toilet and to his dismay rooster is already reserved 3 toilets...ha ha ha...nandini got 10 out of 10 for thus act...and how to cover hickey part was Gud...waiting doe their forcefull kiss yaar...

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#386

🤗 😆

Hahahaha..

that was lolz funny 😃

Oh god I can't stop laughing. .

my stomach is aching.

oh god tears hi aa gye 😭

but that was hilarious ..

super duper funny..

Manik Gave hickey.
opps Love Bitee..

ThaT was Hot 😳

Because Gondola..
rooster ko mark krna chahta h..
he was mesmerized by her .

wow..

n nandu ki search hickey pr.

wid her super awesome reasons. ...

hehehe..

sach me she is damm awesome. .

pr phir kya revange liyaa nandu ne..

to made manik FART..

hehebe...

poor manik..

ko party hi chodni pdi.

or upar se cabir k statement se to use or embarrasse honaa pdaa..

this is getting so so interesting. ...

oppss I totally loved it..

Will Wait for next update eagerly impatiently. .

thanks for pm. .

Love Geet

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#387

hey thanks for d pm...

indeed it ws very long update... n quite funny too...

i wonder whn u hv enemy like manik thn u hv to always b prepared with back fire plan like everywhere... u hv to keep urself prepared with ol d necessary stuffs which cn help u in ur revenge...
like those pills...

poor manik... sooo stingy...

nandu nervousness mein sab bol diya jo bolna bhi ni tha...

lovd her dress...poor aliya ...

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#388

woww...awesome update👏
that was very hilarious🤣
manik was ogling shamelessly to his rooster😉
the wink part was nice..amnik ke toh hosh hi udd gaye😆
manan dance
manik was unable to control himself😉😆
he gave her hickey😳
nandini and her ways to hide it😆
google search answers were hilarious🤣and on that nandini's comments🤣
apple on neck🤣road attacker🤣
nandini also gave tit for tat...but manik k liye woh bahut bada explosive bomb baangaya🤣
manik and his farts🤣🤣🤣🤣
his situation was perfectly defined🤢
nandini ne bahut bura kiya manik k saath🤣
cabir also isolated him...tch tch tch...😆
i'm laughing like hell...don't know what i'm commenting🤣
one of the most hilarious update this was

thanks for pm dear
continue soon

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shaffukhan011

@shaffukhan011

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#389

hahaha ...I WS holding my stomach while reading...d farting n hickey part was superb...n answers on Google were awsm...u really make me laugh dear..Thankuss..n plzz update both stories devil n one night stand too pleaseee...!!!!