The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60 - Page 25

superb n a very funny update

It was hilarious..
She kicked him!!!!!
Of course she would do that!!
He was just crossing his limits & increasing her problems...
Wants to know what he will do now..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts...

God this indeed is the funniest, craziest

Haha awesome update
nandu the kick was good...

O my god
I am laughing like hell
They are the real tom and jerry
I am waiting for next part...


So good it was...
Please give the update of devil bride also.
Eagerly waiting
God bless uhh

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

OK that was really funny...
Manik is such a jerk..
I hope its not a dark ff.. Pls

Not at all dear its a totally funny or entertaining one

Originally posted by: chinnichitti

OMG..., writer r u medical student? haha.. very funny i love nandu's character nd manan fighting u shown nandu's character is very strong in ur both ff's i really liked it. Dats y ur ff is different from others i love ur comic zone dear really nice u very well handled ur both ff's different way. Very nice update keep going..

Well yeah i am from science but not from biology or i don't like nandu as a cry baby glad you liked my humour or my gutter mind comedy 😆

Originally posted by: Pravallika69

Hahahahah awesome super duper awesome
Too much funny hilarious
Gandola n rooster awesome names...
Nandu was hilarious like she was loosing it due to his closeness but dint bother to give it back to him
Lovely the way she kicked n UR explanations it jus cracked me like hell
Am rolling still can't stop laughing rofl
Manik kissing some other girl hahahaha
N he winking at nandu hahah superb two timing...
Devils bride is of pain n dis is too funny n bold
Loving dis dnt stop waiting for next part pls update soon

Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi

Yeah this one is funny in this you are going to laugh so loud it will be a enjoying one for everyone well i will update soon and devils will be there on Sunday

Originally posted by: shoana

awesome
amazing update👏
you always manage to make me laugh like crazy🤣

CHOR manik😈 took nandini's assignment
and nandini cursing her mam😆
good to see nandini in tigress mode
manik was expecting a kiss...what he got 'KICK'😆 that too in...🤣
manik is too bold..didn't stopped his work even after seeing nandini 😉
and i think the intensity of kick depended on nandini's irritation level😆
"family jewels" this really cracked me🤣🤣

one results in a baby and the other may result in a lack of babies.🤣🤣
well described manik's pain👍🏼😆😉
thanks for the pm dear

why are you thinking that we are loosing interest ...it's nothing like that ...infact this story is getting interesting day by day
there's no point of loosing interest

The think is i didn't got much response for this one the way i used to get from devils well anyways the ff is still continue i can wait for the good response its just a start or i love comedy stories so won't discontinue this one

Originally posted by: neetimehta

Hehehehe

u r amazing

kese kar leti ho??

one doubt how u able to explain about kick so nicely???😃

thnx for.pm

tc

Pdha pdhaya gyan h google baba zindabad you know what that's why i love writing comedy stories your comments always crack me badly 😆