The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60 - Page 23

please do continue this ff...😭
loved the update!! 😆
eagerly waiting 4 the next part!!!

Awsm ...
Means this was seriously entertaining...
Manan scene were superb...
Rofl...
Loved it very much...
Update soon

Lol.. This was so hilarious.. I was laughing like mad..

superb update yaar...manik has feelings for nandu...but nandu still need time...manik stolen assaignment ...and he got kick instead of kiss...waiting for next chapters...u really an awesome write and when U add comedy means it was like a cherry on top of cake type...

Amazing it is. .

Awesome update dear

big claps for nandu...

Hahahahah awesome super duper awesome
Too much funny hilarious
Gandola n rooster awesome names...
Nandu was hilarious like she was loosing it due to his closeness but dint bother to give it back to him
Lovely the way she kicked n UR explanations it jus cracked me like hell
Am rolling still can't stop laughing rofl
Manik kissing some other girl hahahaha
N he winking at nandu hahah superb two timing...
Devils bride is of pain n dis is too funny n bold
Loving dis dnt stop waiting for next part pls update soon

Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi

awesome
amazing update👏
you always manage to make me laugh like crazy🤣

CHOR manik😈 took nandini's assignment
and nandini cursing her mam😆
good to see nandini in tigress mode
manik was expecting a kiss...what he got 'KICK'😆 that too in...🤣
manik is too bold..didn't stopped his work even after seeing nandini 😉
and i think the intensity of kick depended on nandini's irritation level😆
"family jewels" this really cracked me🤣🤣

one results in a baby and the other may result in a lack of babies.🤣🤣
well described manik's pain👍🏼😆😉
thanks for the pm dear

why are you thinking that we are loosing interest ...it's nothing like that ...infact this story is getting interesting day by day
there's no point of loosing interest