MaNan FF || A Howling Ruse || Chapter 6 on pg 42

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Aditi jain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Very nice update

Thanxx a lot for d pm

I am confused as to. Y manik is doing all this

I hope everything is sorted out soon

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Sukanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

It was fantastic update. Thanks for the pm. Update soon. Waiting for the next part. Tack care of yourself.

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Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Thank u so much for the pm. Its going gud.

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sahasimren

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Loved the update.

Post the next part soon.

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Superb update
Heheheh navya n her talks...
Nandu singing her feelings out and manik regretting cmng there...
What nandu is engaged or manik has sme misconception...
Omg 3million ka check...
Nandu is gonna return it ... And again a MaNan meet..
Thnkz 4 the pm

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wonderstar13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

i am dying here to know what happens next!eagerly awaiting the next update..and its so good to read a book which doesn't have grammar or spelling mistakes..and i really like the way your story is going so far😃keep writing and update soon!

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Arunima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Keen to read the next chapter,
continue soon.

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LoveIsManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

both are two confused souls...
but their egos has to always take over their hearts...
waiting for the next part

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-Nymeria-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Ahh okay... So he's upset because he found out she was getting married? Man, I really want these misunderstandings cleared out. You can't even be upset with either one of them for their behaviour. They're both so hurt. :(

I'm guessing Nandini's family and friends wanted her to move on and so they asked ht to get married...

It was slightly weird to see Manik and Nyonika on good terms... I suppose we'll get to know more about the hows and whys of it later?

Also, haven't heard this song before, but I like how the lyrics could have been written by Nandini herself, especially the lines:

Have you ever hated yourself for staring at the phone?

Your whole life waiting on the ring to prove you're not alone.

So apt for her at the moment.

Overall, I like the way you've written the story. And by giving both their POVs we get to see both sides of the story and feel their hurt.

Loved it. <3

Edited by Nickel8 - 9 years ago