Firstly, a hearty welcome to KYY forum... I'm sure you will be shinning with your writing here.
It feels surreal that you've written something on MaNan, I never thought you would actually fulfil my wish. I'm ever so thankful to you for doing so.
Someone who says they don't know much about the characters yet they've nailed it. I never believed you before and neither do I believe you now that you weren't ever able to connect with these characters. You've portrayed Nandini's as an independent woman, no matter what's she been through; she still hasn't given up. I'm so glad that you didn't make her into an emotional fool just because Manik hasn't been with her... She's coping and living her life without him yet he is still with her in every step of her life- in her memories. You've depicted her each and every emotion so beautifully... Living one day without the guy you love is freaking hard, yet she's been living for more than three years without him. I can't help but, actually feel sorry for her.
We got a short glimpse of Manik... Eeeks I'm reminiscing the beginning of S1. Nandini's brooding angry beast, who she shall tame very soon haha. I'm literally intrigued by his character, I want to know more and more about him. What caught my eye was the way you described his love for stars... OMG it legit gave me the feels, and I haven't come across a MaNan FF that has given me those same feels that I get whilst watching them. But, you managed it #extremelyoverthemoon
"Each night, she looked at the hundreds of stars and wondered if he was one of them. That he liked them so much that he became one."
^ I cannot fathom a coherent sentence to describe how beautiful you've written this. I just can't!
"The twinkling lights of the tall buildings and vehicles at distance made everything seem so small, he had wondered."^This so reminded me of Papertowns, again the emphasis on JG... I could imagine this visually, seriously. If only I could get something like this in the show!
I'm very well aware of you and your writing, cliched or cheesiness is several miles away from your writing. Therefore, Manik suffering from a memory loss is out of the question. I know you will present us with something logical and sensible, it's not me hoping... Because I already know you are. Period! :)
I'm ever so curious to know what happens in the further chapters, as always you've managed to start the story with a bang. It's keeping me on the edge of my seat... This is going to be one heck of an impeccable journey, I shan't be going into what I want however, I would and I'm sure many others would also love it if Cabir was in this FF. He is the ultimate MaNan shipper, a love guru to Manik, who I absolutely miss in the show.
What more can I say, your incredibly amazing and I just can't thank you enough for writing this! I forever will remember this... God knows how many times I've read the first chapter already. I'm anxiously waiting for the next time and I can't wait to see what incredible surprises you have in store.
Adios until next time!
xoxo
Edited by Samilicious.. - 9 years ago
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