MaNan FF || A Howling Ruse || Chapter 6 on pg 42 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rimsha01

U should try writing some novel. I am sure it will break all records once its published.

U are too damn Awesome.










"Writing a novel is like driving a car at night. You can only see as far as your headlights, but you can make the whole trip that way." 😛
- E. L. Doctorow


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Posted: 9 years ago
And this was yet another amazing piece of work! I totally loved how you started off the chapter with alternating Manik and Nandini's state of living. And Nyonika's current equation with Manik was also great! God my heart went out to Chachi and Nandini too. Nandu is sure a strong lady! And woah! Marriage is it!? Super exciting! I am too curious to know why Manik is like how he is now! And what is MaNan's fate!😃


Fabulous job Aaminah!! Keep them coming!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
good both of them have understanding mom n chachi
he still dream abt bomb blast ...nandani is incomplete without her hero
manik ...what u have stored for our manan ...waiting
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amaziing update. ..superb. ..
so nyonika is positive. ..thats good...
also Chachi. ..its good atleast both hve each other wid them...
Grt wrk. ..keep it up. .
Bye tc. .!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Manik lost his memory...
Wat happened after that blast..??? where he was gone????.
Wat a beautiful mother both of them got..
Nandu..she is so much in pain..
U penned it down so beautifully...

When she had been worried sick, he was gloating. When she had cried herself to sleep, he had busy making an empire... aaahhh...this line was so aching..
Hope both of them Will got to know about the truth...Soon...
Keep smiling n take care


Er.. He hasn't lost his memory. Not yet at least.

Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sahasimren

Nandini can't get married

Please no.
But anyway loved the chapter.
Post the next part soon.


I'm glad you did! Let's see with who and when she gets married!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

Y is manik behaving like dis...

He has left music...bt she finds hdr solace in it only...

Nyo is positive...

Liked chachi's entry...and tht way she has described her life...

Is nandini gonna get married...would love it to see manik cmng back on track by this...hehe...

Awesome is ur writing and so are ur thoughts...

Continue soon


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SANJANA


I glad you liked the changes I made. What brings them back on track has yet to come out, I hope you like it too.

Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Amnah! Another beautiful update...loved the way you went between their two POVs and the similar struggles because of their love and determination to move on...the two 'mothers' and their words, quite interesting as well...a red dress this time huh? Wonder what that's about... best part was Chachi for me, because i love her.. and a wedding..whose is it I wonder? And how and when will the mysteries get out...including Nyonika's truths...can't wait to find out... great job!


Thank you so much for the lovely comments Anu! For me their perspective was the highlight too and I'm glad you noticed the contrast between their thoughts.

But why can't Nyonika be positive? 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: wonderstar13

another awesome update..will be eagerly waiting for the next one now😃


Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Mindblowing update

loved it


Thank you so much!

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