You make me happy, you truly do. And I'm so grateful to be reading something amazing from you... I say it each and every time because it's still feels surreal. It's taking ages to sink in. I could possibly call you my personal writer haha #cheesinessoverload
It's impeccable the way you articulate both of the characters, the way you describe both of their POVs. An eloquent writer you are with some freaking awesome set of writing skills. The journey of your writing has been incredible you as a writer have improved immensely, I mean it. I really do. And I cannot be any happier, it gives me joy to see you coming such a long way. You deserve this.
Both of them are suffering, Nandini needs Manik just as much as he needs her. Beautiful choice of words- the array choices of words you use makes the chapter much more interesting. It's written sophisticatedly.
"When she had been worried sick, he was gloating. When she had cried herself to sleep, he had busy making an empire."
^A missing word I think? But I'll ignore that because THIS is pure bliss... It's heart-wrenching, yet again anyone would feel for Nandini. And this makes me wonder how come Nandini isn't suffering from depression?
Manik's struggle and his pain/emotion you have depicted it to perfection. If not Nandini then he needs Cabir, seriously... I want him to share his sorrows, his feelings with someone. And after that bomb blast I would've thought that he would be suffering from PTSD (Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder)? Maybe I'm just expecting either one of them to be suffering from a psychological condition. Haha I guess the psychology in me is speaking.
Coming to his nightmare, OMG I loved it... it almost felt like I was reading Hunger games where Peeta got nightmare. You really did a great job with the description. Vivid imagery everywhere, the use of metaphors. Uff its incredible.
"It will not be an easy game for her, he will make sure."^Hahahaah, okay I'm EXCITED. Bring on the game... Let the love hate story begin, lets see how long it will take the angry monster to soften up again.
Alright his convo with Nyonika, firstly I cannot digest the fact that she is POSITIVE hahaha. Seriously, its really hard to imagine this. However, I'm glad that at least Manik has someone who cares for him and the fact that he hasn't been alone.
Chachi is a legend so I'm glad that you brought her in this FF... It truly was a pleasure reading her scene with Nandini. I've always seen Chachi has a mother figure for Nandini. I'm actually looking forward to Chachi and Manik scenes because that's something S2 lacks. Their scenes in S1 were just amazing. Ahh reminiscing...
"Sometimes, she wondered if Nandani had been this strong all along. Perhaps the death of her own parents had hardened her core or was it the demise of Manik that made her stoic. She had seemed to distance herself from majority of the people, music had been the only solace in her life to keep her going."^You SLAY me with your words...
Nandini is getting married, I wonder to who though... Actually I know the wedding won't happen ahaha, Manik will never let his shinning star be with someone else. Though, I think a wedding track will bring jealousy. #AlreadyExcited
^Phew, I finally reviewed it. This is me anxiously waiting for the next one... #CuteMaNan #TheyAreAdorable
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Edited by Samilicious.. - 9 years ago
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