MaNanff- I've always loved you! (Part 22) 22/08 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story
Please update
They both love each other
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ky2manan

Awesome story
Please update
They both love each other


Hehyyy!! Thnxx alot!!
Yes, dw. I'll be updating soon.!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear its a nice start. ... do continue..😊 would love to read ahead... update sooonish. .. TC dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunshine_013

Hey dear its a nice start. ... do continue..😊 would love to read ahead... update sooonish. .. TC dear.


Thankyou soo much for the support and love. Will update soo. Real soon!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2(A) - Happy Day or Sad Day?
It was yet another beautiful morning, with birds singing, sun shining and cool winds blowing. But this so called beautiful morning did not give any healthy vibes to the two unknown love birds. Coincidentally both entered the school building at the same time only to collide into each other and fall down. Nandini over Manik. Both stared into each other's eyes intently. Nandini stared into his chocolate brown orbs which only made her to love him even more whereas feelings were no different behind the chocolate brown orbs. Manik couldn't resist but stare and drown into those beautiful hazel eyes. His hand automatically rose to cup her right cheek. The moment their skins touched, a momentarily spark went down their spines. But unfortunately this didn't last for long. Realization struck hard and Nandini backed off. She stood up and ran away as fast as she could while Manik was still on the ground. Luckily there was no one around to notice their lovey - dovey moment, or maybe that's what Manik thought. Manik got up and walked away towards his class leaving the third person completely fuming with anger, who witnessed the whole scene.

Manik entered his class and saw Aryaman sitting on the table.
Manik: aur buddy, kya chal rha hai??

Aryaman: hey Manik! Nothing much yaar. Tu bata, aaj late kaise ho gya?

Manik again went down the memory lane and reminced the few moments shared with Nandini but was disturbed by Soha.

Soha: hi baby! Kaise ho?? Why you look so stressed?

Manik: am fine Soha
Soha went further to hug him but he backed off.

Soha ( a little disappointed): Manik aur kab tak hum aise hi rehne wale hain. Why don't you wanna tell anyone about our relationship??

Aryaman: haan buddy! You guys are in ninth now, its high time you should public about your relationship.

Manik did not wanted this. He was not happy with Soha and his relationship but was still ok with it. Everytime he thought about making this news public, he felt a sudden pang of pain and uneasiness in his heart. He felt as if he's hurting somebody and not doing the right thing by being in this relationship. He felt as if he's destroying his, Soha's and the other person's life. But he was bounded by his friendship.

On the other side, Nandini was too much confused. She loved him to the core. But she decided to move on and not to think about him anymore and she was even succeeding in it. And then whatever happened today in the corridor again left her in a devastating state. She was confused again seeing his reactions she could feel the same feelings coming from him. It again ignited the hope. She told everything to Mukti obviously being a little shy but she couldn't hold back anything. She wanted to share and get a solution to all this.

Mukti: you are crazy girl. Tu pagal ho gyi h uske pyaar mein but seriously tu usse ek baar baat toh karle. Kab tak rokegi apne aap ko. Aisa mat kar apne aap ke saath. False hopes mein jeena band kar. Plzz go and talk to him once.

Nandini: yaa I guess you're right. Main aaj hi recess mein usse baat karlungi. Main iss confusion ko khatam karna chahti hoon. Once and for all.

Mukti: now that's my girl. Chal ab sab wait kar rhe hai.

Nandini: ya ok. (in mind: ab time aa gya h Mukti, I have a tough decision lying in front of me. Mujhe aaj sab khatam krna hoga. Mujhe mom dad ko bhi answer krna hai. I will talk to Manik and then tell all you guys about my final decision.)

Well, well. There you guys!!! The one's who supported and appreciated me. Thanxx alot. Love you guys...!! Well this was a short chapter but I will try to give a longer update further..!!
Also those who want pm plz buddy me!! And I will pm you guys! For sure. ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Manan moment was so amazing and cute
So nandini is finally going to talk to manik
Waiting for next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ky2manan

Awesome update
Manan moment was so amazing and cute
So nandini is finally going to talk to manik
Waiting for next update
Update soon


Awwweeieee!! Thankyou soo much!!. Well all your questions will be answered with the upcoming chapters.
Well thnxx again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2(B) - Happy Day or Sad Day
Nandini reached Mukti's class where all others were sitting and enjoying. A smile crept on her lips to see them happy. She went up to them and then everyone had a heart to heart convo.
All had fun and enjoyed their friendly moment and this gave Nandini immense pleasure as she wanted to store their smiling faces in her heart forever.

Suddenly Abhi spoke - Guys! Aaj recess mein mujhe kuchh confess karna hai. So guys be here in the recess as soon as possible.
Wait for the SURPRISE, people coz its definitely something unexpected.

Everyone was excited but then the bell rang and everyone dispersed to their classes. Bidding each other 'bye' everyone went away pondering over the surprise Abji was talking about.

The bell rang, and now it was finally the recess time. Nandini felt anxiety in her heart. She was nervous bcoz it was also the time to come to terms with Manik about their feelings. Bit before that she rushed to Mukti's class only to receive the biggest shock of her life. Even others entered at the same time and were shocked too.Nandini, Mukti, Cabir, Navya, Dhruv and Alya, everyone's jawed dropped down almost touching the ground.
What they all saw was Abhi holding a little rose made out of paper, sitting on his knees in a total proposing position with a nervous smile playing on his lips ...
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Abhi: Mukti, I know this is very surprising for you but trust me when I say that I've completely fallen for you. FALLEN HEAD OVER HEALS BABY
You're the only one my heart beats for. I LOVE YOU and I always wanna be with you. I knw we've not been on very good terms with each other aur starting se apne common friends ki wajah se ek dusre ko jhel rhe the 'chuckle ' but ab main tumhe jhelna nhi chahta...
Mukti: what??
Abhi: arre arre puri baat toh suno..
Main tumhe jhelna nhi chahta but tumhare saath rehna chahta hun.
I love you aur hamesha karta rahunga.
After this wonderful speech, Abhi looked up once again, to find Mukti with a blank expression on her face.
Abhi: Mukti say something plzz, my knees are hurting
This broke her trance and she let out a littlr chuckle.
Then she immediately flung into his arms.
Seeing this, everyone else smiled too.
There was a happy aura all around and Nandini got another memory to cherish all her life.
Cabir: ooohhhooo!!! Toh yeh tha tera suprise...
Hearing this Mukbhi broke thier hug and looked around to see their friends.
Navya: humein toh abhi bhi yakeen nhi ho rha hai ki jo hamari ankhon ke saamne hai voh sach hai. I mean MUKTI and ABHI are TOGETHER!!!
Koi mujhe is dream se jagao.
Listening to this Alya pinched Navya on her arm to which she shouted loudly and everyone broke into fits of laughter.
Alya: ab yakeen aya?? I am seriously very happy for both of you.
She said turning towards the love duo and taking them in a hug.
Abhi: thanksss guys! I know it came as a shocker for all of you but this was happening to me from quite a ling time. Toh socha why not take it to the next level..!!!
Mukti: and I love you for this. But you know tum kitne rude the...!!huh!!
Abhi: tum konsa kam thi meri jungli billi..!
Mukti: haawww main jungli billi. Main tumse hamesha ache se baat krti thi but tum koi jawab straight forward dete hi nhi the..
Saying this she moved away from him.
Abhi: aur phir tum himesha mujhpe bhadak jaati thi...! yeh bhi koi baat hui bhala!! Huh!! Jungli billi..
Mukti: yyyooouuu...
Dhruv: arre arre bas karo guys hamein yahan modified mahabharat nhi dekhni hai
To this everyone again chuckled. Even Mukti and Abhi too.
Dhruv: now lets enjoy this day to new level of our friendship.
All: yeah
When siddenly Mukti noticed something...
Mukti: guys Nandini kahan hai???
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So guys here you all go with the update... So the teenage life ends here.
Cliffhanger par chod rhi hoon.
Pata hai but ab toh maine itna bada update diya hai thode likes aur achhe achhe comments dedena plzz.
Achhe nhi dene toh bure hi dedena but plzz dedena.
Varna mujhe kaise pata chalega ki aap logon ko story achhi bhi lag rhi h ya nhi.
Proof read nhi h so plzz bear with me
Thankyou guys
Thanks a ton
Aur haan!!!!
Like aur comment karna mat bhulna
Plzzz! Pretty plzz!

shaan... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all d updates in 1 go...
Must say its awesome...
Totally luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaan...

Read all d updates in 1 go...

Must say its awesome...
Totally luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...


Awwweeieee!! Thankss lovely reader.
Take care to you tooo.
Will update soon surely!!

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