MANAN FF-STORY OF LOVE - Chapter-8 pg- 39 27/12 - Page 15

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome promo. Waiting for update. Update asap.thanks for pm.

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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome updates read all the parts in one go it was amazing manbir r playing with them jab navni KO pata chalega to kya hoga n manbir to clean bowled ho Gaye navni KO dekh k.
Update soon the next part n promo is amazing

Thanks dear.. n abhi to der hai navni ko pata chalne me...
But navni k reaction ka kuch keh nahi sakte...
N i will try to update soon... 😳

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome promo. Manbir rocked. Waiting for update. Thanks for pm.

Thanks yarrr... n yaa manbir always rock...

loved ur story

Originally posted by: priakachan

Really funny promo yaar..continue soon!😆😛

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Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 oh god, this story is damn fun to read man.. I just can't control my laugh..hehehehehehehehehe.. 😆 peace peace. And manbir are such a dramaqueen.. I'll send you buddy request do pm me for update..

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Originally posted by: love_priya

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Originally posted by: mananneetu

superb promo
ab chapter bhi update fast na
waiting!!

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Originally posted by: nandininiti

manbir r too much
scaring navni
love the promo
update soon waiting for next

Yaa... now navni are scared... manbir r enjoying it...

Sorry for late update. I know kyy is going to end soon. I will miss the show. Ok so tell me should I continue this story or u all want to me to do discontinue this story... so plz... tell me what you all want...

Chapter-6

Recap-manbir in trouble...

Cbr-"yarr... ab kya kare...?"

Mnk-"kuch sochana to padega."

Cbr-"ha..."

Mnk-"idea."

Cbr-"to sale bol na..."

Manik take his phone n call nandini.

Mnk-"hello..."

Na-"hi... aman..."

Mnk-"nandini hum rasta bhool gaye hai aur hum market mese nikal nahi pa rahe hai."

Manik look at cabir n wink.

Na-"ohhh... tum ho kaha...?"

Mnk-"hum xyz shop ke pas hai."

Na-"ok tum ruko hum aate hai vaha."

Manik disconnected the phone.

Na-"navu aman n veer ko rasta nahi mil raha, to hum chate hai aur unhe dhoondh k aate hai."

Nv-"thik hai chalo."

Navni left from there.

Manbir side...

Cbr-"aree... wahhh... manik idea to kamal ka tha."

Mnk-"thanks bro..."

Cbr-"mere sath reh kar bada genius ho gaya hai."

Manik look at cabir in disbelieve.

Cbr-"chal ab..."

Manbir left from there.

Navni side.

Nv-"ajeeb hai na ki aman n veer kho gaye."

Na-"navu wo dono mumbai me naye hai aur market kitana bada hai."

Nv-"haa... me to bhool hi gayi thi ki wo dono yaha k nahi hai. Par hai bahot achche."

Na-"haa... navu dono bahot achche hai."

They both are talking n nandini bump with someone. Navni look n see the burkha girls.

Cbr-"ab tum hamara picha kar rahi ho...?"

Mnk-"ha anarkali mujeh bhi aisa lag raha hai."

Cbr-"kahi tum dono chor to nahi...?"

Mnbir is smiling in burkha. N navni get scared.

Cbr-"mumtaz chalo pocile ko bulate hai."

Mnk-"ya chalo."

Na-"rukiye hum chor nahi hai."

Mnk-"hum kaise man le..."

Cbr-"mumtaz is jamane me kisi ka bharosa nahi karna chahiye. Dono dikhati kitani pyari n bholi bhali hai koi bhi dekh k nahi kahega ki ye dono chor hai."

Mnk-"sahi kaha anarkali tumne."

Nv-"hamara yakin kijiye hum dono chor nahi hai. Hum yaha apane friends ko dhoondh ne aaye the."

Na-"haa... hum aapka picha nahi kar rahe the."

Mnk-"jooth mat bolo tum dono pehle bhi akeli hi thi aur ab bhi akeli ho."

Cbr-"haa... koi nahi hai tumhare sath wo to tum pakdi gayi is liye jooth bol rahi ho..."

Mnk-"anarkali... kahi yeh dono apane dosto ko bulake hamare sath kuch karne nahi vale na. hamari izzat khatare me hai anarkali."

Cbr-"tum dono ko to police me hi dena chahiye."

Mnk-"ha chalo."

Na-"ruliye."

Na-"plz... hamara yakin kijiye. Hum chor nahi hai."

Nv-"hum to apane dosto ko dhoondh ne aaye the."

Mnk-"kaha hai wo tumhare dost...?"

Na-"unhe hi milne ja rahe hai"

Mnk-"anarkali me bag bhool gai abhi leke aati hu."

Cbr-"thik hai."

Manik left from there.

Cbr-"me kaise manlu ye."

Meanwhile, manik call nandini.

Na-"aman ka call aa gaya."

Na-"hello aman."

Mnk-"ha tum dono kaha ho...?"

Na-"hum bas aa hi rahe hai."

Mnk-"thik hai."

Manik disconnect the call.

Nv-"dekha aap ne hamara koi intezar kar raha hai."

Manik come there.

Cbr-"thik hai pehle bol deti ki apane boyfriend se mil ne ja rahi ho to yeh sab hota hi nahi."

Na-"wo hamare friend hi hai boyfriend nahi."

Mnk-"ha...ha... sab samjate hai hum hum bhi tumhari umar k the kabhi."

Cbr-"sorry wo hamane tumhe chor samja."

Nv-"koi bat nahi."

Mnk-"ab hum chalte hai, hamare sohar hamara wait kar rahe honge."

Navni-"thik hai. Bye"

Manbir-"bye aur apne boyfriend ko hamari taraf se hai bolna."

Before navni say anything they left from there.

Na-"navu aaj ka din hi kharab hai."

Nv-"ha nandu tum sahi keh rahi ho."

Manbir side.

After leaving they brust out of laugher.

Mnk-"cabir wo dono ab kisi bhi burkhevali ko dekhegina to apana rasta badal dengi."

Cbr-"ha yar wo dono kitani innocent hai."

Mnk-"but aaj maza bahot aaya."

Cbr-"ha ye to hai."

N again both burst out of laughter. After sometime they reach at car.

Cbr-"manik pehle unhe inform to karde ki hum pohoch gaye hai."

Mnk-"ok"

Manik call nandini.

Na-"ha aman hum aahi rahe hai."

Mnk-"wo hum dono car tak pahoch gaye hai."

Na-"kya...?"

Mnk-"ha wo hum thoda aage chal rahe the taki tum dono raste me mil jav but tum dono nahi mili aur hum dono car tak pahoch gaye."

Na-"it's ok."

Mnk-"tum dono ab vapas aa jav."

Na-"ha hum aate hai."

They disconnect the phone.

Na-"navu wo dono to car ke pas hai."

Nv-"kya...?"

Na-"ha wo pahoch gaye hai."

Na-"sayad jab hum un burkha girls se bat kar rahe the tab wo wahase nikal gaye ho."

Nv-"ho sakta hai."

Na-"khair ab chalo wapas."

Nv-"ok."

At car.

Manbir change that burkha.

Manbir are lost in thought of navni.

Manik's pov

Ohhh... god. Jab nandu darti hai to aur bhi cute lagti hai. Aur uske bal jo uske face pe aate hai aur wo unhe aapne kano k piche rakhti hai. Aur uski aavaz kya kahu... koi bhi mar jay bas uski aawaz sunne k liye...

Manik... stop it... kya soch raha hai ye tu...

Cabir's pov

Navya vaise to bahot bolti hai par aaj to wo kuch bol hi nahi rahi thi. Uski aakhe aur unme wo dar aahai hayy... kya lagti hai wo.

Cabir tu yeh kya soch raha hai. Stop it man.

Manik turn towards cabir.

Mnk-"cabir wo dono nahi janti ki hum kon hai."

Cbr-"ha... yar hum yeh sahi nahi kar rahe."

Mnk-"hume unhe yeh aman n veer vala jooth bolna hi nahi chahiye tha."

Cbr-"ab kya kare...?"

Mnk-"hum unhe bataye ya na bataye un dono ko party me pata to chal hi jayega ki hum kon hai."

Cbr-"ha... aur fir..."

Mnk-"cabir mujeh lagta hai ki hum dono ko unhe sach bata dena chahiye."

Cbr-"but manik hum kaise...? Wo dono hamari sakal bhi nahi dekhegi bad mai."

Mnk-"par ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Hume unhe sach batana hi hoga."

Cbr-"thik hai hum unhe batayenge but party ke kuch vakt pehle."

Mnk-"thik hai."

Cbr-"bcoz agar wo hame maf na kare to hamare pas kuch achchi memory to ban jayegina. Aaj subhah se hamara din kitna achcha gaya hai. So aaj ka din unke sath bitate hai."

Mnk-"tu sahi keh raha hai. But, jab un dono ko pata chalega ki humne unhe dhoka diya..."

Cbr-"uske bad wo humse kabhi bat nahi karegi."

Mnk-"humne pehli bar FAB5 ke alava kisise friendship ki."

Cbr-"aur wo jald hi tut jayengi."

Meanwhile, navni come there.

Na-"hi..."

Manbir-"hi..."

Nv-"tum dono kuch paresan lag rahe ho...?"

Cbr-"nahi kuch nahi. Wo bas ghar ki yad aa rahi hai."

Na-"veer don't worry. Tumhe aapni family ko miss karneki jarurat nahi hai bcoz aajse me aur navu tum dono ki family hai."

Listening to this manbir feel happy.

Manbir-"thank you."

Na-"ab chale."

Cbr-"ha chalo."

They go to car. Nandini open tha door.

Na-"yeh kya hai...?"

Nv-"ha... ye yaha kaise...?"

Navni ne kya dekha ki wo dono itana shock ho gayi?????

Precap-lots of fun... n some fun with dadi...

So chapter-6 is complete...

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