MaNan Two Shot:Heat Lightening..! Final ChapA,B/PG42/21st-11

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saakshiii

@saakshiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Awesome...
Super dooper update...
Hehehe naughty commissionor...
Loved the story...
Totally killed it...
Update soon

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puzzz

@puzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Reading this story the word came from my mouth is wow...awesome...it's interesting totally cool...yaar... thank you for the pm..continue soon.

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Fati.crisp
I haven't read yettt
But I know the story... Mere book mein thy is title ki 😉🤣

Yeah...it was a one act play...

book three o english first year...

but story is different...100% different

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Manya

@manya_189

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Oh it was different and interesting plot!
Good job :D

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Nice concept. .. it is a harsh reality. . Sometimes person whom we trust aur our parents trusted back stabbed us ... There are many girls which face such situations like domestic violence aur being sold for money ... how bloody creep are such people. .. Nandini goes through the same ... ot is very difficult to trust someone so easily and sometimes we want to say something else but we say the other thing ... same thing happened with manan... but I hope everything gets well ...

U seriously amaze me with ur writings

Grt job 😊

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly