MANAN SS [ I will be waiting for u ] { Chp 2- pg 30}

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: shubhshash
Yesss..I am first...
N I must sae dear...yur update was awesome. ..mindblowing...
Ohh god...nandu soo hilarious n cute she is...
Loved manan's convo...soo funny...
The update was also vry mysterious. ...!!
Eagerly waiting fr the mysteries to open up...
Grt wrk..keep it up...
Continue soon
Take care. ..!!

So first commenter.. Thnkew so much ( waisey may i get ur name plz)

M glad u like it..

Actually i hd tried to make it little funny at first as sab boltey hain ur updates r emotional bt slowly its also gonna be emotional n ..its mysterious rather than emotional n funny..

U too take care...

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Shivanya Malik / Jia Malik

@jiamalik12

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Res

Will unres tmrww..

Waisey i hv read bt m feeling sleep toh agar avi comment diyaa toh it will be small so kal lambaa wala dungi chalegaa naa..??

Anyways gudnite doll.. Sweet dreams..

unres

waah meri doll mysterious story n all haa...
its damn awesome...
hmm so manik's identity is a mystery haa.. bt plz mujhe bata donaa on pm main pakka kisiko nahi bataaugi... yaar this suspense.. its killing me.. aisey toh mujhe nind nahi aanaa hain...

waisey manan convo was funny baccha..especially the one in which nandini asked kahi tum mujhe maarne toh nahi aaye r u a murderer fir she told ki main toh itni cute hu mujhe kaun marnaa chaahegaa.. hehe it was really a cute one like u only...

oh fish..!! manik was shot.. bt was he really kidnapped..?? mujhe naah kyu kuch gadbad lag raha hain...

haa toh haa toh game was too awesome bccha...

now nandu will operate manik.. kya hogaa..??

so much to knw more...
plz continue soonish n yaa apnaa khyaal rakhnaa.. don't stress urself much warnaa...

dida loved u alot...

Edited by jiamalik12 - 9 years ago

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: myruh

So first commenter.. Thnkew so much ( waisey may i get ur name plz)
M glad u like it..
Actually i hd tried to make it little funny at first as sab boltey hain ur updates r emotional bt slowly its also gonna be emotional n ..its mysterious rather than emotional n funny..
U too take care...

heyaa...my name is shubhangi...

Yaa I knw...yur updates r emotional...I am reading yur ff it hurts a lot...

But seriously u r good in writing funny stuff too...

I really enjoyed it...

N no problem dear...I love mysterious n emotional stuffs...

So I will eagerly wait fr yur updates...

I honestly love both yur ff...😊

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Thanks for the pm loved it!

loving nandu what a attitude ahah n her fun side is too good!

wwonder who shot manik..not that it comes out that he is a gangster but unknown to the world lol caus according to prologue they cant be together hmm...

n nandus smile is dfinately not real..she said she knows death better than anyone why...did she survive an accident where she lost her family aybe

looking forward to more!

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millie

@millie17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Nice strtng...
Wl surely lv to read more of it...

I don't kno why but I felt dat manik wasn't kidnpd...it is smthng else...
He seems to b a mystry man...wth mny things hidn inside...

But frm d intro ifslf it seems dat both manan r alone...they need sm1...

D convo ws funny...
Lvd it...

Continue soon...
N thnx fr d pm..