MANAN SS [ I will be waiting for u ] { Chp 2- pg 30} - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey myrah...

Warm welcome with warm hugs...
Congratulations for new story...

Loved the prologue...
Reading first of manik...am totally confussed...
Nandini loves him so truly...
Lovely concept..
Continue soon

LOVE
SANJANA

P.S..I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOU
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kimnana

update soon ...loving it

ty for pm ..manik must be hurt


Wat had happened wif manik will reveal soon..
Thnx for liking..😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagupur



Thanks for pm.dear

It amazing and very very interesting.

Please continue soon.




Thanks.






M glad u liked it..
Thnx jyoti di...
Love u alot..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavigarla

nice prologue
waiting for the update
cont soon


Thnx..
N wilo update asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Myru

Yaar Teri prblm kya hai




U always give me such update I can't stop crying



I think raining season mavi ittni rain nahi hotti jitna tune marko ruliya



Pherasy emotional FF😳


Meri problem naa yeh if ki sad stories aur sad songd hain..
Arrey yeh savi itney inspiring hotey hain ki i can't stop myself..

Haha raining season sey jada baarish aap savi k aankhon sey hoti hain.. Arrey avu toh aur rulaanaa baaki hain... Don't worry...
Anyways yeh story starting mey sad nahi hain at end it will be...

Love u alot dear..
Take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sws2

Nice prologue.

Thanks for pm.
😊


Thnx😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

Hey myrah...

Warm welcome with warm hugs...
Congratulations for new story...

Loved the prologue...
Reading first of manik...am totally confussed...
Nandini loves him so truly...
Lovely concept..
Continue soon

LOVE
SANJANA

P.S..I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOU


Thnkew so much sanju( i hope i can call u that)..
I knw its quite confusing.. Bt don't worry updates k saath ur confusion will be reduced..

Love u alot..
Myrah..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Awesome concept

loved it

Thnx..😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly a big sorry for being so late.. Actually i was not feeling well so issilye late hogaya... Aur waisey vi ghar baithey baithey m feeling damn bore( As m not well so clz se leave li hain) so issilye i updated😉😉
So prologue sey kuch samajh aayaa ki y did manik say those words to her.. Nahi naa samajh vi kaisey aayegaa till u don't knw how it all started... So chalo sab saath milkar padhte hain wat happened n did all this began..??

So m here wid the very first chp of I WILL BE WAITING FOR U...


Enjoy reading...


Chapter- 1

It was a dark night wid no stars n moon in the sky...
Only street lights were giving some lights,..
There was a small house of one bed room..a kitchen wid dinning area n a chotu saa hall beside a big apartment...

A girl was in washroom brushing her teeth..
Raat ko naa humesa teeth brushy karna chaahiye warna mere itne pyaare se daat kharaab hojaayenge.. Nandini was saying all this to herself looking the mirror while brushing..

Soon she heard a knock on the door...
Arrey iss waqt kaun ho saktaa hain.. Mere frnds toh kavi mere ghar nahi aatey than who is it.. ?? Chalo jo vi ho first let me finish brushing my teeths...Thought nandu..


The bell was continuously being ringing n ringing..
She then completed brushing her teeth n came out of washroom n headed toward the door..

Arrey aa rahi hu baba.. Ab kyaa bell hi kharaab karnekaa iraadaa hain kya..??

She then finally reached n opened the door..

A tall boy wearing a black hoddie..was standing at the door..

Aisey koi bell bajaa taa hain kya.. Agar kharaab hojaataa naah toh tumse hi paisey leti.. Samjhe naah..said nandini wid a angry look on her face

Par kharaab hua toh nahi naah..?? Asked the boy..

Aur agar hojaata toh,. ?? Asked nandini in a loud voice

Toh i would hv paid it for u..said the boy..

Accha tab toh thik hain...
Waisey accha hi hotaa agar kharaab hojhaata toh bohot time se bell nahi change kiya.. Tum kardete naah.. She said this line under her breathe..

Boy:Kuch kaha tumney..??

Nan: Nahi... Waisey who r u..?? I don't think ki u r my frnd yaa relative so y r u here..??

Boy: Yeah u r right .. I m not ur frnd..


Nan: Nandini Murthy kavi wrong nahi hoti... She said wid a proud feeling

Boy: So ur name is nandini murty..?? Hmm

Nan: Haa bt how did u knw..?? She asked wid a confused expression

Boy; Arrey avi avi toh tumney bataya..

Nan: Oh haa,.. Mujhe pata thaa ki mainey avi avi kaha..?? Woh toh main bas dekh rahi thi ki wat will u answer me .. I mean kahi flirt karna toh suru nahi kardogey.. Like hotey hain naa koi koi jo maukey oe chaukaa maartey hain..

Boy: Wat pe wat maarte hain..

Nan: Kuch nahi.. Wait a minute yeh baat kaha sey kaha le jaa rahe ho..?? I was asking ki who r u..??

Boy: Oh plz don't say ki u don't knw me..!!

Nan: Arrey kaun ho tum.. I really don't knw u..

Boy: Oh common stop pretending..

Nan: Why will i pretend..?? N how would i knw u..?? Kaun ho tum India ke president ho yaa fir koi minister ho..?? Wait wait kahi tum woh toh nahi..??

Boy: Woh kaun..??

Nan: Arrey a thief...Kahi tum mere ghar chori karney toh nahi aaye..?? Plz plz waisey hi mere ghar mey jaadaa kuch nahi hain.. Aur utney paisey vi nahi hain aur agar tumney chori karli toh i will be a begger.,. Plz aisaa mat karo..

Boy: Stop it yeh kya boley jaa rahi ho..,??

Nan: Exactly yeh main kyaa boley jaa rahi hu.. Agar tum chor hotey toh bell bajaakar aisey darwaaze pe thodi naa hotey... Kahi tum murder toh nahi..?? Kisi ne tumhe mujhe maarney k liye toh nahi veejaa naa..??
Bt mujhe kaun maarnaa chaahegaa main toh itni cute hu,, waisey vi tumhaari look vi gundo waali nahi hain...?? U knw goons joh hotey hain naa unkey looks by god...

Bt she was cut off in btn..,"Shut up... Kabse bakwaas pe bakwaas kiye jaa rahi ho.. Filmy insaan.. Apna yeh dialogues naa apne pass hi rakho.,

Nan: Oh hello mere ghar ke door par khadey hokar tum mujhe par hi shout kar rahe ho..?? Not done haa..

Boy: Exactly not done.. Tumhaare ghar k door par khadey ho kar i shouldn't shout at u right..??

Nan: Ofcourse

Manik: Thik hain toh fir main andar aajaataa hu.. Saying this he pushed her aside b enter inside..

Nan: Arrey yaar kaun ho tum aur aisey kaisey mere ghar k andar ghussey jaa rahe ho..??

Boy: Oh common nandu MANIK MALHOTRA ko puri duniyaa jaanti hain..

Nan: Nandu..?? Tumhe kisney haq diyaa mujhe nandu bulaane kaa haa..??

Manik: Woh kya hain naa ..nandini its too long name so issile nandu chotu saa bilkul tumhaare jaisaa..

Nan: Tumney chotu kisko kaha.. Tum hogey chotu u stupid lambu..

Manik: Haha.. Kavi chotu kavi lambu pehle decide karlonaa phir kehnaa..!!

Nan: Yeh chotu lambu chodo aur tell me u said u r manik malhotra n saari duniyaa tumhe jaanti hain bt i toh don't knw u n infct tumhaara jo yeh idiotic face hain m seeing it for the first time...

Oh hello tumne kiski face ko idiotic kaha haa..?? Tell ne

Nan: Tumhaari face ko kaha koi problem... ??She said in loud tone


Manik: How dare u.. Tumhaari himmat vi kaisey hui.. Aaj tak kisi ney vi mujhse aisey baat nahi kiyaa n u..??

Nan: Issilye aap itne badtameez ho...

Manik: Wat did u say...?? Badtameez... Actually u knw wat u were right... M a murderer aur tumhe toh pata hi hogaa ki ek murderer kya kya kar saktaa hain right.. I can dig ur grave right here.. right now..aur kisiko pataa vi nahi chalegaa samjhi naa...

Nan: Haww kya line maaraa yaar.. Ek dam villian types hero waali.. M impressed.. Waisey kahi tum actor toh nahi...as u said ki puri duniyaa tumhe jaanti hai toh sayad u must be actor right..??

Manik: No m not actor...

Nan: Main vi kyaa bewakoofo waali question puch rahi hu.. Agar tum actor hotey toh i would hv knwn u... Sacchi sacchi bataao who r u..??

Manik: R u serious..?? U really don't knw me..

Nandini nodded her head in yes cutely..

Manik: So much of insult yaar.. Meri itni insult aaj tak kahi nahi hua.. Arrey m manik malhotra the famous singer jiskey koi vi gaaney aaj tak flop nahi gaye hain.. Puri music company mere aagey pichey ghumti hain ti sign mr for their album...

Nan: Accha toh tum manik malhotra the famous singer ho..

Manik: Hmm..

Nan: Thik hain fir toh main jhaasi ki rani hu..

Manik: Wat nonsense..?!

Nan: Exactly what nonsense.. Mere sar pe kya bewaakoof likhaa hai..
Aap ko kya lagtaa hain aap kuch vi bologey main maan lungi.. Agar aap koi manik malhotraa the famous singer ho toh aap mere ghar pe kyaa kar rahey ho..??

Manik: Tumhaari baaton sey toh tum mujhe kaafi filmy lag rahi thi so tum tv toh jaroor dekhti hogi naa so hvnt seen me..??


Nan: No main tv nahi dekhti.. M a medical student n m in last week of my internship.. So merey paas waqt nahi rehtaa tv dekhne k liye songs sunney k liye n tumhaari sadu face dekhne k liye... Samjhe naa..

Man: Arrey firsey meri sakal pe jaa rahi ho.. Don't u knw iss face par saari girls marti hain..

Nan: M sure they must be blind then... Chalo yeh sab chodo n tell me wat r u doing here..??

Man: Woh main..actually...
He was feeling dizzy n abt to fall bt nandu caught him..

Oh mr.singer r u fine...??

Bt he didn't answer..

Soon she noticed blood on floor n was shocked..

Khoon...!! Then she noticed his left side of hoddie was fully drenched in blood..

Mr.Singer aapkaa toh khoon beh raha hain.. Kya hua hain..

He was not able to stand n fell on the ground bt didn't fainted

Hua kys hain..?? Show me koi chot lagi hain... So u came here to get help n first aid..

Woh..woh., its a gun sh...shot.. He said stammering..

Nan: Kya gun shot..?? Then toh we need to rush to hospital..
Saying this she was abt to stand bt manik hold her hand
Man: No we can't...

Nan: Dekho Mr. Singer we don't hv time for this okay.. Its serious n we need to go to hospital.. Samajh rahe ho naa meri baat.. It can be dangerous if we don't go.. U may die..

Man: Aur agar main bahar niklaa toh it will be more dangerous n i will definitely die then...

Nan: Yeh kyaa boley jaa rahe ho y will it be more dangerous if i take u to hospital..N yeh sab hua kaisey..??

Manik: Actually i was kidnapped.. Bohot muskil se apni jaan bachaakar vagaa hu n issi chakkar mey i got shot.. N we can't go to hospital coz woh goons they must be roaming around n searching me... Agar hum bahar nikle toh merey saath u r also gone..

Nan: Haa toh...??

Man: Haa toh they will catch u also...

Nan: Haa toh..??

Man: Haa toh u will be dead..

Nan: Haa toh..??

Man: Haa toh haa toh kyaa lagaa rakhaa hain.. Do u knw the meaning of dying.. Samajhti ho..??

Nan: Mujhse behtar kaun jaantaa hogaa..??

Man: Wat..??

Nan: Kuch vi nahi... So thik hain toh i will call the police..

Man: No.. U can't... Woh...woh.. Police vi unke saath..saath miley hue hain..

Nan:Wat police unke saath mili hue hain.. Bt how's that possible..

Man: Arrey wog goons ney police ko paisey diye hain...

Nan: Haa toh we will go to upper authorities..

Man: Arrey that will take long process n we don't hv time for that..

Nan: Thik hain fir lets call ur family..

Man: M alone.. I don't hv anyone..

Nan: So lets do one thing tum mujhe apne kisi frnd kaa number do i will call him/her here..

Man: I don't hv anu frnd...

Nan: Wat.. Toh ab..?? We can't let this bullet be in ur body warna u r gonna die..

Man: U said u r in end of ur medical internship right..??

Nan: Hmm

Man: Toh u do it here only..

Nan: Do wat..??? She asked wid a confused expression..

Man: Arrey take this bullet out of my body...

Nan: Kaun main..??

Man: Nahi Barak Obama...
Arrey ofcourse u yaar...

Nan: Nahi mujhse nahi hogaa...

Man: Wat do u mean tumse nahi hogaa.. U r in last phase of ur internship n u can't take out a bullet toh fir how will i be a doctor...

Nan: Bt...

Manik was feeling more n more dizzy.. His eyes were almost getting closed...!!!!

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Character sketch:


Nandini Murthy: A 21 yrs old studying medical n in last week of her internship completion.. She lives alone n hv no family.. She is little bit poor n studying in scholarship...she is hard working fun loving girl... Tries to keep everyone around her happy... She is little naive type... She herself also always keep smiling n laughing all the time bt is this smile real..?? Is she really happy frm inside..??

Manik Malhotra: A famous singer of B-town of 22 yrs old.. He is charm his hotness can make any girl go gaga over him... Any girl would fall for him... He hv no family n lives alone.. Much more hidden side.. Will be revealed when story proceeds...

More characters will also be revealed soon as chp proceeds...



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So guyz here it was.. I knw it was little confusing... Wat is happening..?? Y was manik kidnapped.. So much of question right.. Bt u will find all ur answer when the story proceed more...
Its little mysterious story... I hope u liked it.. Kaisaa laga plz plz plz comment n hit the like button too..!!
Plz shower ur love on this ss too...
I knw this time it was chotu update par nxt time it will be a long one pakka...
Nxt update kab dungi i hv no idea as m not that well.. Bt will give as soon as i completely get well...

Loads of love
_____Myrah_______




Edited by myruh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yesss..I am first...
N I must sae dear...yur update was awesome. ..mindblowing...
Ohh god...nandu soo hilarious n cute she is...
Loved manan's convo...soo funny...
The update was also vry mysterious. ...!!
Eagerly waiting fr the mysteries to open up...
Grt wrk..keep it up...
Continue soon
Take care. ..!!

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