#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 41

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolava14

It was a very good one:)

I so luvd it😉
The song hasii...awww😊😳
Nandu is a very brave girl😳👏
Mukti nd baby...awwiiee😳
Always keep writing😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanikagokhale

Superb!

Happy for Mukti!
But intrigued to know whats happening with Nandini!
Awesomely written!👏
Thanks for the pm dear!
Continue soon..
Take care!😃

thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonu137

Thanks for the pm

Amazing update
Starting manan scene was cute!!
And wow mukti have birth ko girl child that was awesome!!
And who's is this doing all this with nandini !!
I now seriously want to know who is behind all this !!
Hope everything will be good for manan
Amazing update
😊

thanx
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear the update was awesome but suspence and mukthi and her baby cute
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayar206

amazing update👏

suspense is killing me
cont soon... thankyou for pm

tthanx
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update .. Yipeee baby girl for Mukti.. Hope MaNan's baccha's too come out safely .. Wondering who is doing all this with Nandu .. Continue soon ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tum Hi Ho

Part : 93

Nandini n nanik sitting at dinning table in garden area having their breakfast n suddenly nandini say "manik something is down the table touching my leg "
Manik bend down n say " let me check " n than he look under the table n fearly stands up on chair n shouts "aa..."
Nandini says "manik kya hua " n dog come outside the table n nandini say " manik puppy hi toh hai " manik says " iss kute ko kisne andr ane diya
Koe isse leke jao" n nandini says " manik... come stop behaving like a small child " manik says " nandini... phle isse yha se bhagho"n servant came n say " kya hua sir "
Manik shouts "how this dog come inside the house isse lekr jao " n servant hold the in hand n about to go but nandini stops him n take the dog from his hand n say " tum jao " manik says " nandini... "
Servant goes nandini moves hand on puppy n say " so cute " n nandini says to manik "manik come down " manik says " nandini... isse niche rkho " n nandini says " manik... relax n jb tk isse drna band nhi karoge i will not leave the dog " manik says " nandini i hate dogs u know na so why u r forcing me " nandini says " manik... dogs " manik says " nandini... i m not coming down jb tk tum iss kute ko niche nhi chodhti "
Nandini leave the him n the puppy ran n manik came down
Nandini " manik... why u afraid from dog so much main jb bhi tumhse puchti u always cut the talk in b/w "manik says in anger "nandini... i plz i don't wanna talk about it " nandini hold his hand n say "k baba.. i m not talking about it ab andr chle "

After sometime they r setting at whole on couch nandini setting resting her head on manik chest manik sitting holding her

Nandini says " manik... why god always do bad thing to good people jo voh chta unhai milta kyo nhi " manik says " nandini wht do u mean i don't understand " nandini say " i m talking about navya n cabir yesterday in party i have seen them talking " manik says " nandini... kya hua sb thik hai na " nandini says "kuch thik nhi hai tum jante toh ho ki navya maa... nhi bn skti
Toh navya is crying yesterday becoz of this n i feel so bad "
Manik says "nandini... tum sbke liye kitna sochti ho but nandini we can't do anything for them we just pray for them " nandini says "manik... kash sb thik ho " manik says holding her face " nandini everything will be f9 don't worry " n than she listen the voice of mukti saying " manik... nandini... " n they see at the door mukti n abhi r standing n nandini says "mukti... " n mukti n abhi come n manik n nandini greet them n nandini take the baby from her hand n manik also sit with nandini n both play with with her n nandini says "mukti she is so cute like u " manik says " she is looking like a pari " nandini says "main toh isse pari hi bulaungi " n nandini says touching her face "pari... my choti si pari "
N nandini says " thank u so much much mukti ki tum mere yha ae " mukti says " nandini... not be so formal oaky " n till evening mukti remain at nandini house n they do lots of talks n masti with pari

Nandini sitting on swing on TERRACE n manik from back moving slowly from back n manik stop moving it n nandini rested her head on swing n manik holding her shoulder bend her face down n kiss on her forehead n than come close her lips peck her lips n than he sit on swing with her n hold her face n sides her hair n come close to her lips n fuses her lip n nandini also response him in same manner the kiss become passinate after some movement than they stopped indeed of oxgyen n manik take nandini in his arm n than they feel some water droplet falls on them n manik broke the hug
Manik get up n holding her hand say " nandini... it's raining come on get up "

Nandini pulling her hand down n say" manik... plz stay here na "

Manik says "nandini... u know yr condition na "

Nandini says " manik... plz for sometime "

Manik says angrily " u r coming down or not "

Nandini say " manik plz na "

Manik says " k f9 "

N manik pic her in his arm n nandini says " manik... " n manik take her down n put her on couch n ask servant to bring the towel n manik give him towel but nandini throws it n manik take it again n try to dry her face but nandini again n again stopping her in anger n manik says holding her arm "nandini..." n nandini stop n manik dry her body by towel n nandini looking into his eyes angry but than he forgot all his anger when he see how manik cares for her n she thinks "why i m getting angry from him
He cares for that's why he bring me down " n than he take the towel from manik hand n she also clean his face n now both r looking into eachother eyes n manik sit with her n hold her face n say " nandini i m sorry main tumhai forcely nice le aya "nandini put her hand on her lips n say " manik... u don't need to be sorry i know why u take me down because u cares for me n our babies n me always get angry wid u n manik i promise i will always take care of myself" n manik is smiling
N nandini says " kya hua "
Manik says " nandini... i love u " nandini blushes n say " i love u so much "
N both smiles n look into eachother eyes n manik says " chlo dinner kre "
Nandini says " yeah "
N they go to dinning table n sit their n servant bring soup for nandini n nandini say " no manik not soup i want to eat something else " manik says " abhi u said u will take care of yourself doc. Says na u will not anything spicy n i also drink this soup with u " nandini says" i drink this only on one condition u will not drink this with me " manik says "why... "
Nandini says " now it's yr choice " manik says " okay " n nandini ask servant to bring manik dinner n nandini take one sip of eat n say " manik... pani pani.. " n start coughing n manik give her water n say "nandini kya hua " n he moves his hand on back n nandini says " manik.. it's so spicy " n manik says " wht ?maine no strickly instruct the servant
Nandini u okay " n nandini says " yeah now better " n manik shouts n call the servants n shouts on them n nandini says " manik relax "
manik says " nandini yeh log itne lahparpha kaise ho skte hai " manik hold nandini face n say " agr tumhai kuch ho jata toh aur agr humhre babies ko kuch ho jata toh "
In last manik says to servant that "algli br se agr kuch aisa hota so i will fire u all of them" n ask them to bring the soup
N than they have the dinner n they came upstair n nandini see manik mood is off n nandini hold manik hand n make her come to upto window n it's raning out n she throw water droplet on manik face n manik says " nandini stop "
N manik hold her body n pull her closer n than he hold her hand n put her hand out of window n he say " my love for u is like rain i couldn't stop it if i wanted to n nandini look at his eyes n smiles

Next mrng
Nandini open her n see manik outside the room n see manik is removing his shirt n nandini thinks " lgta aaj manik wants to swim i will not disturb him " n she wakes up n goes to washroom n sees something written on mirror with blood that manik.. end has come tum manik ko chodh kr nhi ja rhi na today manik will die n nandini get shocked to see this n than he heart the voice saying " nandini jao bachlo apne manik ko bacha skti ho toh " n nandini shout " kon ho tum wht do u want " n she listen the voice again save yr manik nandini if u can n than he come outside closing her ear n see manik... about to go inside the swing poll n he see some wire are falling in the water n he rans n shouts n say " manik..." n manik stop n nandini hold her him from back n take the breath of relief

So here is next part N surely in next part will be revealed who is behind all this.. jb tk keep thinking.. n don't forgot do leave yr.. comments
Stay blessed
Love Mehak


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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...hope everything will be f9
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update👏. Mukti's baby part was so cute.wow finally suspense is gng to unwrapped. Eagerly waiting for next update. Update asap.thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update👏. Mukti's baby part was so cute.wow finally suspense is gng to unwrapped. Eagerly waiting for next update. Update asap.thanks for the pm.


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