#2 MaNan FF-Stranger (Part 23/ pg 128/ Link to thread 3/ pg 140) - Page 81

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Awee... meri baby... tujhe pata hai maine Tuesday aur Wednesday ko updates hi ni di as uh were not their... Bol toh abhi ek update dedu tujhe???

PS- N plss jldi se theek ho ja phir hum pehle waali masti karege


Aww tuney meri wajah se update nahi di.. So sweet of u...
Avi toh yeh waali vi nahi padhi hain.. Aglaa kaisey padhungi.. Waisey tujhe denaa hain toh dede.. Res kardungi..😉😉

Ofcourse ab toh rocket ki speed se thik ho jaaungi.. Fir surely pehle waali masti karenge..

Time to rest.. So ab kal baat karungii.. Gud nite sweety... Love u alot...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: myruh


Aww tuney meri wajah se update nahi di.. So sweet of u...
Avi toh yeh waali vi nahi padhi hain.. Aglaa kaisey padhungi.. Waisey tujhe denaa hain toh dede.. Res kardungi..😉😉

Ofcourse ab toh rocket ki speed se thik ho jaaungi.. Fir surely pehle waali masti karenge..

Time to rest.. So ab kal baat karungii.. Gud nite sweety... Love u alot...!!

oaky..then mai update dene ja ri hu
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Posted: 9 years ago
Compensation Part

Sorry for the typing errors if any...


PART 23

Manik : Tumhari tabiyat aab kaisi hain?

Nandini : Much better now, par tumne kaal jo kaha uski waza se mood off hain.


She was complaining like a child,hearing this a smile crept on Manik's face, He thought to tease her & said...


Manik : Nandini close your eyes & think about yourself, your smile, your style, your nature, your face, your looks & now open your eyes.


Nandini opened her eyes & then manik said...


Manik : Free main horror film dikhai na? Chalo aab thanks bolo mujhe.


Saying this he winked at her. Nandini became furious & began to run behind him but he was faster than her. At that time the door bell rang & manik opened the door & found cabir with a boy who seemed to be around 3 or 4. Nandini was always friendly with children. She looked at the boy & said...


Nandini : Hi baby.

Abir : Uncle, uncle who is she? asked Abir to cabir.


"I'm nandini "Saying this Nandini put her hand forward for a handshake.


Abir shook hand with her. Then he jumped onto manik "DAD " he exclaimed.


Nandini's pov :

What The Hell? Is he married? How? What? When? Why? Why he is married? Urgghh!!


Nandini felt like pulling her hair out of her head. She just couldn't believe that Manik Malhotra was married, it was a big shock to her. She remained silent.


Manik : Abir, my boy,I missed you so much.


Saying this he hugged him. Then he turned to Nandini excitedly & said...


Manik : Nandini look, he is my son Abir.


Nandini held back her tears that were threatening to fall any moment & said "Excuse me ".She went upstairs to the washroom locking the door behind her. She leaned against the closed door & trying to calm herself down.


Nandini's pov :

Ayappaa, why he is married? Aab mera kya hoga, I love him so much, usne pehle keu nehi baataya mujhe.


On the other side manik wondering why Nandini left so abruptly.She was fine a minute ago, He brushed his thoughts off & started showing Abir around the house.


After sometime Nandini washed her face & came out of the washroom. She saw that manik was sitting on the couch with Abir on his lap, discussing something with Cabir. Nandini came & walked straight to the kitchen avoiding manik. Manik noticed her coming. She was looking really upset.


"I will be right back Cabir "Saying this he ran after Nandini.


He caught up to her in the kitchen


"Are you alright? "He asked concerned.


Why is he being concerned? Nandini thought angrily.

"Ummm, I'm ok. "Nandini said silently not looking up. Then she turned around & started to walk away.


"Wait you don't look ok, are you sure!! "asked manik.


Nandini : I said I'm fine & why do you care anyway?


This made Manik angry. He was being nice to her thinking that she wasn't feeling good & here she is showing him attitude. Manik gripped her elbow pulling her back angrily & slamming her against his chest.


Nandini raised her eyes angrily. Manik noticed that her eyes were kind of red as if she was crying.


Manik : Nandini, were you crying?

Nandini : No.

Manik : Tell me Nandini what's wrong? Wo shahid kuch kaha kya?

Nandini : Nothing happened.


Saying this she went out from there & the entire scene was seen by The cool cabir.


Manik : What the Hell!!!! Maine kuch kiya kya. Urgghh!!

Cabir : Kuch kuch hota hain Manik tu nehi samjhega.


Saying this he placed his hand on Manik's shoulder.


Manik : Tu firse chalu hogaya. Kya hota hain baata aab.

Cabir : Wo toh tu baatayega,chakker kya hain? Lagta hain kidnap karne ka chakker main tu khud hi kidnap hogaya.

Manik : Shut up cabir,ek toh wo nandu aur aab tu. Uski mood off hain aab kya kare.

Cabir : Tu tension maat le. Main hoo na, halat aisi hain ke wo tujse kisi cheez ke liye naraz hain. Aab uski mood thik karneke ekhi tarika hain, aur wo hain uski samne tera dhajiya udana.

Manik : Cabir tujhe pata hain na,I can kill you.

Cabir : Kaun saala aisa bolta hain.

Manik : Cabirrr!!!!

Cabir : Mera matlab hai ki kaun "sa law "aisa bolta hain ke tu mujhe nehi maar sakta. That's why I'm asking your permission, kya main tera dhajiya udau.

Manik : Hmmm.

Cabir : Oyeee balle balle.


Then both of them began to walk towards drawing room & saw that Nandini was playing with Abir & smiling.


The time when Nandini angrily left from the kitchen she found Abir sitting alone on the couch. She went near him & sat beside him.


Nandini : Tum akele kya kar rahe ho.

Abir : Time pass kar raha hoon.

Nandini : Wahhh great, toh gharpe tumhare kaun kaun hain, I mean mom & baki saab?

Abir : Koi nehi hain, mera toh sirf dad hain, mom nehi hain mara.


Hearing this Nandini was on cloud nine. In excitement she asked...

Nandini : Keu mom ko kya hua? Is she dead?

Abir : Arey, mujhe mom ke zarurat nehi hain, keu ki I think mera birth dad ke pet se hua hoga.


Hearing this Nandini began to laugh like fool. And that time manik & cabir entered into the room.


Manik : Kya baat hain Abir, itni khushi, aur kisine toh thori der pehle attitude dekha rahe the.


Nandini just ignored him after all aab bhau khane ke bari uski thi.


Cabir : Wo toh thik hain par, ye smell kaha se araha hain.


Saying this he came near manik & said...


Cabir : bro,
Rexona =35/
Fa =40/
Safeguard =30/
Lax =40/
Lifeboy =15/
Silk =30/
Inn main se koi bhi lay le par naha le please, aur bardast nehi hoga mujse.


Manik was hell angry. Other side nandini was laughing like manic.


Cabir high fived with Nandini & Abir.


Manik : Aab main kuch bolta hoon,
"Baharo phool barsao
mera "Dost "aya hain
Hoto pe muskan
Gali main mehak laya hain
Barso tak jise tha
Pani se "ELERGY "
Wo aaj
"Lux "se nahaya hain. "


Saying this he burst out laughter.

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Uff... Lo guyss M back with mah daily dose...
Its the compensation part for not giving Tuesday's update...
N next compensation part tomorrow pakka...

Coming to the update...
So guyss who all were missing our Cabir in the show...
So now he is here in the ff...
So kya bolte ho bhailog Cupid ka role ise de du kyaa???
Agar sab yahi kahoge toh pakka cupid ka role Cabira ko dungiii...
N Hamare Abir bhaisaab kise kise pasand ayee???
Haath uthao...
Hope now uh guyss r filled with loads of laughter after reading this update...
Jab hasna band kar do toh comment kar dena...
N like button hit karna may bhoolna...
N yeah I want to give next update in next thread toh jldi se aaj ke aaj yeh thread khatam kardo mere sheero...


Do read another humorous story by Rifa on MaNan...
Desire
N yeah its chapter 1 is up...
Do read...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Hilarious
Like nandu and aber duo
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hzhahahah
nyc

👏👏👏

bt abir manik ka beta nai hgaa

😆😆😆

bna do cabir ko cupid😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update .
Post the next update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
what manik dad ...
when?? why?? how ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
hilarious yup cabirraaa ko cupid ka role abir is nice character loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hilarious update
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tooo good!!!! BT y abir calling Manik dad???? Is he sachi his son or what
Awesome update!!!! As usually loved it!!!

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