#2 MaNan FF-Stranger (Part 23/ pg 128/ Link to thread 3/ pg 140) - Page 53

wow...ROFL update dear...angoor,langoor and chicken tandoor...this was my personal best dialogue...and branded pen wala dialogue was hilarious...how do U mnage to write each update with this much comic dose????

Originally posted by: sammy1920

<font size="4">It was lovely update . Thanks for the pm. Continue soon . keep smiling😊.
ps-I have send you pm . please do check it .
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Thanks...
PS - I have repied uh back the PM

Originally posted by: sri_valli

wow...ROFL update dear...angoor,langoor and chicken tandoor...this was my personal best dialogue...and branded pen wala dialogue was hilarious...how do U mnage to write each update with this much comic dose????

Thanks...
N I will definiately ask Rifa that how does she manage to write this mch comedy...

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

ha ha nice update😉
thanks for pm🤗

Thanks dida...

Originally posted by: twinkle265

Awesome update
Real like nandinis behaviour different from the shy nandu on screen.
I think manik is falling for her slowly
Continue soon. And buddy me 😛

Thanks...

Originally posted by: Sabahfatima14

Hi..i just now started reading ur story...n..its awesome...!!

Plz update d next part soon.😊...

Nandu is amazing...!!!👏👏

Thanks

baby when are you going to update next part

Originally posted by: edward_twilight

Hi Garima,

I joined forum 2 days back and was finding good stories to read and came across this story of urs and I must say its absolutely amazing.
I read all chapters in one go and I was like 🤣

Nandini is to full on nautanki...her talli avtaar and shaadi rant was just awesome
and bechara manik, aisa lagta hi nahi ke usne nandini ko kidnap kiya hai... feels like nandini has kidnapped him..😛


He must be thinking kaun se muhurat mein nandini ko kidnap karne ka socha... hahahah
😉

Manan romantic moments were very cute. Both can't seem to resist each others charm. They have somewhat realized their feelings for each other and hope they confess soon.

Eagerly awaiting your next update to get my dose of laughter

Keep up the good work

Take Care and keep smiling
😊

SJ

Hello dear... May I get your name???
Thank uh so mch...