#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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Priya980

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Awesome part ...please post the next asap...

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

Woah woah woah! Manik needs to be screwed right in his head! He needs to be kicked and slapped and done everything that can get his brains to think sensibly!! I so dint expect him to turn out to be such an idiot! Well idiot would be an understatement I guess! :P But I can understand that this is how he is! And I find it really great that you maintained this idiotic character trait of his intact since the previous FF😆 Why on earth wouldn't he realise that he is screwing things up and that too majorly! Lol!

But but but! This was a great update! I totally loved the morning scenes and esp the way Manik had kissed her forehead before leaving! Beautiful that was!! And its coz of this that am even more pissed with Manik! Abhi toh sab kuch normal ho raha tha but no this gaddha had to ruin it all! Lol!

But honestly the morning scene was absolutely beautiful! I loved how Manda Tai was happy seeing Manik and also how she spoke in English😆 And I absolutely adore Manini! Even if she was there for just a few moments but that kiddo is absolute love and the way you had described it is total love! ❤️ Now I srsly hope Manini kicks some brains into her gaddha father😆

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Namrata

@saradanamrata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

I'm new here... I read ur story in one go n I really really love it... Plzzz pm me from next time... Plz plz plzzz...

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

Woh!!
Awsm update Di !!
Or han I don't want to kill maniks ..
Nah!!

Because I know nandu will definitely do the honours 🤣

Mein tou bas uski lash thikane laga doongi 🤣

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

awesome update

loved it

amazing

good one

wonderful

cont soon

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

It indeed was a long update.. Reading the morning romance n talk with manik's mom i really thought they would get bck together soon... But Manik being a jerk tht he is ruined it all over again.. This time he crushed her self respect, her identity jst for a stupid reason tht he dnt like the guy shez wrkg with. He didn't thought abt the consequences n now he really has dig his own grave.. Breaking her trust n faith into pieces n showing no sign of guilt he really has to work hard to get her bck.

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tweetie_06

@tweetie_06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#727

No i dont hv any gussa on manik...coz tht banda did all these out of his jealousy na...n waisibhi everything is fair in love n war... bt nandu's gussa n hatred is completely justified...n she should forgive him easily...btw i love ur writing girl.
..i hv become a fan of urs...

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Jolly28

@Jolly28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#728

Ahha loved it, loved it like always.. That morning scene, Nandini loosing herself in Manik. But she stopped him why? Why? N when she was thinking to give second chance to their relationship Manik did a blunder..ok I agree that the way he stole Nandini's presentation was very wrong but he did that for Nandini. N Nandini is misunderstanding him that Manik taking care of her n kissing her was for a reason.. Ab kya hoga, is Nandini again gonna work for AURA?? N in prolouge u said that they will come across at a common friend's wedding! Woh kab hoga? Okk enough of my sawaal n applying brains!! I am desperately waiting for the next part, please update jaldi 😭

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Farhin Lamisa

@FarhinLamisa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: sujal1fan

Lol i first made her talk in hindi but then changed it to english😆😆 Farhu u din comm on MaNan romance n der morning together😭😭 everyone z busy killing Manik🤣

Lol..😎

Olle amar api..i was so furious on Manik that i totally forgot about MaNan romance..sorry..😃

Areee api..u toh always rock when it comes to MaNan !

What can i say ...my battisi was totally chamaking like u during their romance n the morning cute wala family time..n i was so happy when Nandu was thinking of giving their relationship a second chance..but then ! Uff ! Uff ! Oi goru ta brainless ta dilo shob kichu te pani dhele ! Ata maji satakli !

Anyway...basically these r the reasons na that they r called the hatke wala MaNan n impulsive souls !

Now api ..jaldi jaldi pilize sort out the mess between them m get them back together !

I wonder how my Kaddu is doing between this..😭

Update soon !