#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 112

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apy1608 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
ohhh god... cant explain this one yr...just out of words...
fab yr ! ...
hehehe aaj cabir ka bhi punch dekhkiyaaa... hehe :P
but seriously yrrr ... manik really had vakid point... but the way he choose was definitely wrong :( ... ahhh tht is y we cll him impulsive... do as nandu ... really manik was ryt... agr wo usse pehle btata abt steve... she would hsve reacted the same wsy !!!

n about tht past thing... i reallly wnt to knw... is this regarding their second child ??? how bcoz of nandu ... manik's dad was in danger.. ???? kya zidd ki nandu ne... ??? how manik's mother is invovle in this ,??? :/ n manik left ...:/ !!!

n then fther daughter ... duo...god damn amazing... hehehehe ...situps .. 🤣 🤣 ...seriously ...rofl!!! 🤣 ...just in love with the whole scene of marine drive...n pic was damn beautiful... :D
n awww manini...her unwanted bye to daddy :( :*

n the end... seriously ...now its nandu turn tobe impulsive n stupid !!!!



"perfect couple"
ek dum ram milaiii jodiii


do updte soon 😛
Edited by apy1608 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
the way manik choose to protect nandu was pretty bad ...
because she cried like hell ...
and I feel bad like hell ...
😭 😭

but the reason behind all this manik done took my heart ... he didn't thought at once that nandu would hate him and their relationship will ruin ... he just want to protect his love ... Aaawww it feels like heaven to see lots of love ... but both have lots of ego to be together ...

the way he freak out when nandu wasn't @ home ... was super cute ...

Manini is such a sweetheart ... her ideas are awesome like always ...

manik's conditions to Mr. Arora was superb ...
but when nandu comes with that jerk Steve ... my heart tore into pieces ...
Steve's hand on her waist ... I was wishing manik pls... pretty pls ... pls punch that jerk Steve ... pls punch that BAST**D ...

you are a awesome writer dear ... I must say ...
I read a lot of novels ... fan fictions ...
but your work is just incredible ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent , mindblowing story...read in one go...
manini is too cute n smart...
Proloung was nice...she wants to bring her parents together...manik n nandini stayg separate...OMG..Manik loves his princess...their bonding is so sweet...
manik n nandini fight was nice...manik is so possessive towards nandini...
they love each other lots but still they are mad...u potraited them amazingly...cute family...
Rewa is so irritating...
loved manini n rewa scene...where manini playg with her earing...little one irritated her papa while talking to rewa...
nandini is jealous seeing manik n rewa together... n manik too jealous n want to punch steve for touching nandini...love to c them like tht...
washroom scene was superb...with F*Ly...they all drenched ...n she is so embress while going out...
they look cute together...
like nandini n rewa scene where nandini shouted on rewa n manik handle her...n cabir laughing seeing them fighting...
manini is too cute ...she is cryg when her tooth fell off...cutie pie...n manik worried for his princess...n nandini make her understand...manik tld manini thatnandini hit him bcz of tht he got OOOUUU...nandini is so embress in whole office...
loved the scene where manini order nandini to kiss manik on his ooouuu "Mommy give two kisshy to daddy on his oouuu"...hahahha
Lift scene awsum...
"How on earth is our daughter so comfortablewith cockroaches when we are hell scared of it" manan are too scared of coclroaches ...hahhah...n cute manini take this advantage n demanded nandini to kiss his dad oouuu...she is prank manster...manan romance was too sweet nlift...manini having lots of fun in lift...loved it...
Nandini got hurt on her leg n manik is worried n taking care...manik took her home n stayed ther only to help her...loved family time...he is cooking for F*Ly ..so sweet...
manan romance was toogud...
manik steal nandini design how can he do this...she is very angry...she hv to listen frm his boss n loose herjob...
she lost her temper n shouted on manik n tld tht she wanted togive one more chance for their relation but all bcm worse...n manik tld tht he is insecure...
cabir punched him bcz he steal her design...n manik tldhimy he did tht...omgtht steve is womenizer ..manik want to keep nandini away for steve...manik is gulit on his deed...n gone home tosay sorry but he didnot find hern got panic...manini is so smart she came to knw tht manik did wrong sumthg n cm to say sorry...
manik came to knw wer she is gone...n he rush to meet her along with his princess...
beach scene was mindblowing...
situp both dad n daughter...hahah...couples r watching them ...manini supporting her dad..n wantsto forgive him...manik never leave chance ...
manik gone to nandini offc to talk her boss...to take her bck...
OMG ...nandini with steve...n manik is so much angry...
i dont want their divorce...i hope soon their misundertanding clear ho jaye...
keep smiling...

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
as usual
plz continue soon
khadupam thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahahahahah
That was hilarious awesome
I totally enjoyed
It's superb
Wow
I love manini
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear nice update and thanks fr pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMGGG😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

When was this updated??? and why i did nt get any pm yaaarr..

Meri galti to bataooo..



Love the chapter.. can manini be more cuterrr.. and Manik... gosh will he ever listen.. and act rationally.. he has been acting so impulsive..


But if he found out abt the asshole steve.. he should have thought about exposing him different way.

OHHH GODD. waiting for next one... 😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
waooo loved this thread...
manini is damm cute n she is trying her best to get back her parents...

loved it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Damn he was sooo jealous..and steve left no stone unturned to make him jealous..and what an observation on height..and wah so happy that nandini would not go with steve to the party so happy that it was visible in the dialogue haye rabba kya hoga..and manik's mom said that so that she can make manik stay there not with her own reasons and cooking done by manik..and ya awsm family who don't live together but get hurt together..the way manik was worried was awsm shows he cares for her a lot but their egos huh..
And the bedeoom scene..hayee
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was awsm..mtlb manik really knows how to tease her..and no sense what to say in front of her small princess..manda tai ko toh heart attack aa jayega kitchen dekhk but finally they made the dinner..and nice place to sleep and a peaceful sleep after a long time..it was beautiful..

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