#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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parimala94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1101

manik doing situps...🤣🤣

loved this update!!...

very eager to knw abt cabir and mukti's plan!!...

update soon!!

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Sciencebuddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1102

Such a cute chapter ... Oh i am just in love with your story

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thakkarisha2810

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1103

Ohhh Shit now have to wait for next episode... this was super awesome... please please update soonnn... craving for more yaar ...steve ki toh lagne wali hai...

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VarshaPretty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1104

Both Manik & Manini are cuter in this update..hope she will understand him soon...

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Zara Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1105

Now that was something over my expectations!!

Trust me sumana di no one writes these things better than you!! How do u always manage to leave me all in aww!!

I read this chappy around 3 times!!

But still can't get enough of it!!

This was truly amazing!!

Manans reactions!! Gosh*_*!!

Manik is sucha overactor!!

Sahi kiya cabir ne punch mar kar!!

Ek do aur kheench ke lagane chahiye they!!

Par jab usne reason bola toh dil pigal gaya boss!!

He is such over protective!!

Still cares about nandu likes no one!!

Nandini!!

Bechari bikhar jaari!!

She's such a innocent soul!

I guess manik should have been with nandu!!

Lekin phir story mein mazaa nai aaata!!

Wat comes as a shocker is

THE BABY!!

Have manan lost their child!!

Kab?? Kyun?? Kaise??

And why did manik leace nandu in that condition??

I thought ki there divorced bcoz of maniks parents!!

Ab beech main yeh kaunsa naya drama hai??

Manik taking red roses to nandu was wayy too cutee!!

Par nandu bhi kuch kam nahi!!

Ghar par nahi thi!!

The marine drive scene!!

It was the cutest!!

Though it was thoda sad sad in the beginning!!

But eventually it was superb!!

The way manik and manini apologised to nandu!!

Awww it couldn't have been cuter!!

And even those random people played an imp role!!

The way manan was on each other!!

But the concequences were not nicee!!

Nandini was quite rude abd sarcastic!!

But then manik deserved it!!

The office scene make my go aww!!

Manik came to get her job back!!

But he gets a shock!!

Steve with nandu!!

That too snaking around her waist!!

Why do i think that steve will act a villain

Who will tear manan apart??

And eventually they will be back even stronger!!

Yayyyieee!!

P.S- Congratulations for the new thread u truly desrve it!!

Continue soon!!

Will be waiting!!

Lots of love

Zara😛

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aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1106

May be the reason is genuine but the way he did is completely wrong. But on the other hand i really can't believe a strong girl like Nandu can't figure out the dirty intentions of steve only because she wants to demean manik. Why the hell is she so competitive and both of them blame each other for everything.

I loved manini part. Poor girl wants family together. This is really what happens to kids when parents became stubborn heads.

Lastly nandu pagal ho gayee hai jo steve ko kaam ke liye entertain kar rahi hai,

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anya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1107

marvelous update...

loved it sooo much...

though manik had a valid reason 4r his act...

bt his way of dealing it would have been in different way...

nd cabir's part also loved it...

he reacted wen he know abt how manik used nandini's work...

bt aftr knowing abt manik's point of view...

he felt sorry also...

manan's ego...biggest thing...

wen they gona solve it?

aww...my dr cutesa manini baby...

no one can beat u...

u r just awesome,...

manik's manofying session ...loved it...

nd manini nd manik's sit-ups...

oh god...dat was soo lovely...

though nandini felt embarrassed...

i loved dat scene...

finally dat steve part...

aww...now manik will do wat?

overall it's a total combo pack...

loved it 2 d core...

excited 4r d nxt part...

cont soon...

keep smiling!!!!

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Farhin Lamisa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1108

Sorry i am late..

Hehe..khamakha Manik ke boke or jibon ta uddhar kore dilam. Lol..he obviously had a valid reason for doing all this. But still he is a really mota tagra choura idiot without any veja in his matha ! Dunia ta uddhar kore charlo er por he realised he should have thought about Nandini's boss ! Like seriously !

Cabira is too awesome ! Akdom shei level er joss ! Purai ! That was a much needed n well required punch for that idiot !

Uff api ur both the stories have got so many mystries !

Exactly ki jhamela ta hoechilo between Manik's dad n his mother ?! And wat accident..

R Manik er akta kotha shune amar pura Ata Maji Satakli hoe giechilo ! How can he say he almost lost his baby bcz of Nandini ? I mean how dare he ?! Or uchit Impulsive Soulmates abar pora then he will know whose fault was that ! Amar toh pura akdom mukhosto Impulsive Soulmates ! XD

Cabir er flying kiss ta akdom joss chilo..onk funny ! One flying kiss instead of one punch !

Lol..ajaira akta sentence likhlam..😎

I am feeling so bad for Nandini. She cried so much..aww Nandu

Watevr it is or watevr Manik does i have to agree he is really cute ! Like getting loshes for Nandu n practising his apology speech..purai akta idiot ! Aktar por akta khali vul kore r khali regret kore ! Mane aur mathai je akta brain ase r ota je use korar jonno eta shei janei na ! Anyway let bygones be bygones..bcz watevr he did, he did evrythng for his wife. There's no question on that both of them love each other like crazy ! But their ego ! Uff ! Akdom uff !

And now coming to my Manini ! Olle amal Kaddu re ! Ami toh akhn ei cuteness dibba ta ke khaoa chara r kono way dekhchi na ! She is shoo cute ! And total smarty ! The way she was scolding her daddy was priceless ! O akdm thik boleche Manik akdom akta blah ! Though eta r mane ki akmatro Manini r tar writer chara keo bolte parbe na..XD

Amar shobche moja laglo oi scene ta where Manik just scooped Manini in his arms n ran ! R kaddu er moddhe abar koita loshes or pocket nie nilo..i can only imagine the scene ! She must be looking so cute while doing that in hurry !

R Manini ato chalak.kivabe..aur matha r buddi r ak parcent brain o jodi or mommy r daddy r kache thkto na then those idiot would have been more mature by now ! Mukti was right ! Oder duita k uchit oder mukh tape die bondho kore oder hate paper r pen die akta room e lock kore dea. Only then they could solve their problems by writing it. Lol..actually no. Pore dekha jabe oi kagoj die paper ball banai akta arekta k mara start koreche..

The beach scene was beyond hillarious ! Oh God api ! U r a total genious ! Akdom high level r awesome tumi r tomar writings ! MashaAllah ! Tumi jano toh sheta ?!

Though Manik might be an idiot but he just cant do without his Nandu ! The way he literally crushed her bones during the hug for the assurance of her being here was so blissful to read. And when Nandu said the moment she heard his heartbeats she knew who it was ! That line was so beautiful !

R Manini akta bonus ! When u write na ki she was wobbling her lips n.was about to cry..i could just only imagine the scene . She looks so cute when she does that. R jevabe nijer daddy k order korchilo..like pura school er teacher der moto. Kotha na shunlei bete r bari ! That scene was amazing ! "Shay am sholly Nandu " & "Amm i am sorry Nandu "...uff akdom osthir chilo oi scene ta !

U once wrote in that chapter of I.S when they slept off on the park bench ki Manik Malhotra n embarrasment go hand in hand ! Well..he just lived up to ur words again. But that doesnt matter bcz he was actually sorry. R amr toh blv hocche na both daddy n.princess started doing sit ups ! Like seriously..i.can feel Nandu..lol

R Manik ! Chance pe dance ! Pore jaoar sathe sathe bus took that opportunity to make her accept the apology ! This man na ! R manush jon pic click korche n he is posing ! I mean seriously ! Mane film er photoshoot cholchilo r ki ! R Manini she was introducing her mommy n daddy..mone hocchilo they were getting awards ! And i am with Nandu this time ! She shoulnt accept his apology this soon ! Actually i am alwaya on Nandu's side..lol

N i knew Manik would approach that Arora to take Nandu back !

Lastly my Ata maji satakli hapnd again when Steve came ! Sale ka prob kya hai ! Man to kar raha tha mere kaner tole chor die kan lal.kore dei..but i know i dont need to worry ! As i know Manik will do that one day on my behalf for sure !

Thanku api for these lamba update !

All the love for u !

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Rochee1803

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1109

Oh god I sooo loved the chapter n I LOVED MANINI LIKE HELL she is the cutiepie awww love her manik finally found k kha thi nandu hushh MANIK N MANINI DOING SIT UPS HAHAHAHAHA OH GOD IN THIS CHAPPY I FELT THAT MANINI WAS A CUPID FOR MANAN I SO LOVED IT