#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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Anushi

@anushi3012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1081

How I loved Cabir punch!!!!

That's was damn awesome and so funny to read!!!

Manbir always rocked!!! 😃

Thank God Manik had his reasons...

Thanks for having enlighten us on the past...

about the cause of the separation 😭

Found it so cute so cute when Manini was talking to Manik, understanding that he came to apologies!! 😆

And when he found her!!!

Loved the hug- Manan hug!!!

Awaiting for the next chapter- what will be Manik's reaction and his jealousy!!

Keep it up!!

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1082

Like always u killed it.

I just love cabir d way he handled things,he z a jem of a person.

Manik do had a solid reason for wat he did, but it will not be easy for nandini too to forgive him.

So Manik left nandu because of her miscarriage. Wat about his dad, Wat nandini done? Too many questions.

Waiting for the answers in the upcoming updates.

Manini,i love her. She is such a cutie. Poor baby trying her best to bring her parents together.

I loved the update.

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1083

Awesome. Amazing superb fantastic... Continue soon

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aadhya_cute

@aadhya_cute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1084

OMG those situp's scene the cutest😃

haha i'm holding the idea of kiling manik after reading this update

manik and manini both r enough to piss nandini😳 she was hell embaressed 😆

ab y steve placed hand on nandus waist😡

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NiyaJaiswal

@NiyaJaiswal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1085

awsome update...
manini was so cute..
loved it...
continue soon...

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1086

Awesome update

Manini was so cute

And manik was so angry when he saw Steve with nandini

But still what happened between manan that they separated

And Plz clear this misunderstanding between manan

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1087

hey diii...
thnk u so so so mch fr update tht too on week day ...
thts so sweet of u...
lv u fr tht... u r the bst...
amazing update...so awsm...
steve is sch a idiot irritating man ...seriously hw dare he...manik shud hv beaten him like helll...
n manini is so so cute man...damn cute ...awwwlv hr...she is a rockstr... situp wala scene ws amazing i realllyyy lvd it...
akhir hmare manan ki beti h sch a smart grl...
bechari nandu hehe...
beautiful...
n the reason behind their separation ...thts a suspense bt i gt a hint...so lt see wat it is...
n at last nt again tht idiot is bck tht too his hnd on nandu s waist manik will defintly kill him ...nw ...
he is dead...
n thnks fr pm di...
lv u ...
cntinue sooonnn...
tc..

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OhMeriJaan

@OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1088

Firstly, Thanks a ton for this update! I honestly did not expect one during the weekday! But you gave one and a bloody awesome one at that!! Damn it was tooo good!! I seriously wish Manini was real and not fictional! I would have cuddled her to death! She be the rock star of this story! And a big big kudos to you for creating this splendid character!! 👏

Ok so lemme take my words back. I do not want to kill Manik.😆 Instead I would wanna kill Steve😡 Phir bhi Manik gaddha hai, and an impulsive on at that!😆 Why did he have to spoil it all?! Manini be the right one to deal with him😆

Omggg!! The marine drive scene is stuck to my head!! ANd it shall be so for a long time! Esp the sit ups that fathr-daughter duo did and Manini's over excited announcement about her mom and dad to the on-lookers! 🤣 Kid be the BEST!

I am actually excited to know what is Mukti's plan!😉 But srsly these two need to be locked up in a room forever! Srsly?! Nandini srsly had to turn up with that jerk! Perfect couple Manan be- impulsive gaddhas😆 But can you please show Manik smacking and punching the hell out of Steve?😛

Ok now am really really curious to read the next update!!😃😃