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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh wowww thst was amazing...

Manan is manan...yaar they are amazing
Can create magic anywhere. .

Thank u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update dear
manan are impossible they can't see each other with someone else n at the same time they can't stay with each other also bcoz of their ego 😛
manik teasing nandu regarding her drunken
state was jst awww bt poor manik whenever he start his mischiefs someone always has to interupt wether it's cabir or navya 😉
manik's acting to sit beside nandu smart move 😉 n cabir he never leave a single chance to irritate manik
manik's touching nandani while eating food without anyone's notice poor nandu she can't say anything bt she is also not less than him she also pinched his hand with her perfectly manicured nails now he also can't say anything equal equal I love their tom n Jerry game
only manan will play on giant wheel bt to their bad luck or say good luck they stuck on top all are worried for them
they were stuck on top n nandu has to click selfies
atlast they kissed bt u stopped there that's not fair par koi nahi u'll complete in other part till then we wait
cont soon
n happy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Maneesa

superb update dear
manan are impossible they can't see each other with someone else n at the same time they can't stay with each other also bcoz of their ego 😛
manik teasing nandu regarding her drunken
state was jst awww bt poor manik whenever he start his mischiefs someone always has to interupt wether it's cabir or navya 😉
manik's acting to sit beside nandu smart move 😉 n cabir he never leave a single chance to irritate manik
manik's touching nandani while eating food without anyone's notice poor nandu she can't say anything bt she is also not less than him she also pinched his hand with her perfectly manicured nails now he also can't say anything equal equal I love their tom n Jerry game
only manan will play on giant wheel bt to their bad luck or say good luck they stuck on top all are worried for them
they were stuck on top n nandu has to click selfies
atlast they kissed bt u stopped there that's not fair par koi nahi u'll complete in other part till then we wait
cont soon
n happy





Tysm! Glad to know that you are liking my story.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome.. manik and fab5 is so mysterious.. Wht dey r upto?? m sure dey r aftr nandini's family fr some kinda revenge.. but I just hope, in completeing dere mission,dey won't end up hurting nandini.. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
manik teasings kab khatam hogi
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read d story in one goo
Itd awsm
Thanks 4 d pm..sorry dat i couldnt read it before..ws stuck smwhr
Bt plss accept by buddy request n do pm me 4m nxt time
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dolly91

Read d story in one goo
Itd awsm
Thanks 4 d pm..sorry dat i couldnt read it before..ws stuck smwhr
Bt plss accept by buddy request n do pm me 4m nxt time





Sure dear! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 11: [SIZE= 5] A Magical Moment. [/SIZE]
"Leave a little mystery to your life ..."



Well, it felt like some magic- his lips on mine! We both were longing for this moment and guess what, we both knew that too. Fortunately, it was pitch dark and we were at a great height to get noticed.

As soon as he landed his lips on mine, he pressed my lower lip which made me part my lips and he thereby using the opportunity enters into my mouth completely as if he waiting for that moment only.

He pressed Me more towards him and was running his hands all over the back of my body as if he wanted to feel me completely in that moment. I was also not less, I was caressing his back from one hand and the other one was busy in his silky hairs.

We both were fighting for dominance over each other while kissing. It was like as if both were on fast from many days and now we have got a feast to have properly.

I don't know what got into him and he pulled me swiftly and I landed upon his lap. My one leg was now around his' and the other one was wrapped around him. Who can pull these kind of stunts at the top of a giant wheel? Well, Manik Malhotra can. Nevertheless, we didn't let our kiss broke even for a second.

When he had made sure that my whole body was over his', he sucked my lips passionately. His hands made his way inside my top caressing my bare flesh. Oh! That's why he pulled me up. So that he could get complete access of me and can easily dominate the kiss.
'A typical male thing!'

But I didn't wanted to ruin that magical moment so I gave in. The kiss grew more passionate as if we both wanted to reach each other's soul.

Finally, I went out of breath so I pulled out otherwise I don't know for how long he must have continued it.

Our breaths were uneven. I rested my forehead upon his. I felt complete. This feeling, I have never felt it before. Nobody ever made me feel like that and I have never thought that anybody could ever make me feel this way. But this Manik Malhotra is something.

"Manik I lo...", I wanted to pour my heart out but that idiot interrupted and put his finger on my lips, "Not now.."
Some creases appear on my forehead showing my confusion, "Ab kya Hua?"
"Nandani I want it to be special.. Very special.. And I don't think so this is a right time when we are stucked here at the top of a giant wheel and with you on top of me and that too in pitch dark when we can't even see each others faces properly..", he said slyly.

My cheeks become red (Thanks to the darkness, he couldn't see it.) as I listened to him because I realised my position. I immediately got off him and sat in my previous position. He can do everything while hanging except sharing his feelings.
'Duh! Such an idiot..'

"So?", He asked breaking the awkward silence.
"So.. what?", I asked.
"What you were about to say.. Do you really mean it?", he asked sincerely. I rolled my eyes, "It's not the right time Manik!", I taunted him sarcastically. He just chuckled.

Don't know when but I drifted to a sweet slumber. I was sleeping comfortably in his embrace with my head on his shoulder.

When my breaths become even and he was convinced that I was fast asleep, he dialled a number. The receiver picked up the call immediately.
"Niche utardo Hume!", he just said these three words and cut the call.

The giant wheel start moving within some seconds and we came down. Manik hopped down then took me in his arms and went towards a car, made me sit on the passenger seat, fastened my seat belts and himself sat on the driver's seat and drove back towards the hotel.

We reached the hotel and he went towards his room with me in his arms. He made me lie on the bed and covered me with the duet. He went inside the washroom, changed himself into a t-shirt and tracks and lie beside me hugging me from my back. A smile crept on my lips as I recognised the familiar warmth even in my sleep. I snuggled more into him and slept peacefully.



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"You! Here? Itnii subah?", Cabir exclaimed looking towards his friend after opening the door while rubbing his eyes.
"Han toh?", Manik replied in a boring tone and invited himself inside his room. Cabir just rolled his poor eyes who were struggling to remain open. He closed the door and sat opposite to Manik on the bed.

"Bol!", Cabir gestured him to start.
"Sher uncle ka phone aya tha.. Remember?", Manik called looking towards his friend. Cabir got alerted, "Ohyah.. Kya baat hui?"
"Mr. Williams padso Mumbai aarhe h..", Manik informed him.
"Umn.. That's great! He's coming according to our plan only.."
"Yah!"
"Toh plan ready hai? Nandani ko rokne ka? Because Vo log bhi padso vapis Mumbai Jane wale h.. And upar se Navya bhi aagyi h..", Cabir reminded his friend.
"I know! Plan ready h.. Don't worry!", Manik assured him, "Aur isiliye tu kal hi vapis Mumbai ja rha h.."
"What? Kyu?", Cabir asked being startled.
"That's part of my plan.. Tu kal hmari jeep leke vapis Mumbai jayega.."
"Aur us se kya hoga?", Cabir asked.
"Do chize! First Ki hum me se Kisi ko vahan Hona chahiye.. You know Agar Sher uncle ko zarurat pdhi toh.. I don't wanna take any risk..", Manik explained.
"Dusra reason?"
"Vo plan shuru hoga tujhe apne ap pta chal jayega..", Manik replied.
"Fine!"
"And me aj pura din bahar rhunga.. M planning something for Nandani.. So just handle everyone!"
"Thike ja phir..", Cabir replied in a distracted tone. He became somewhat upset as soon as he got to know that he had to go back to Mumbai tomorrow only.

"You are forgetting something ..", Manik said sitting more comfortably on the bed. Cabir gave him questioning look, "What?"
"You were about to tell me about your weird behaviour..", Manik made him remember.
"Uske bare me Hume raat ko baat krni thi..", Cabir pointed out.
"Han toh raat ko me late hogya na.. Toh Abhi bta!", Manik demanded.
"Nhi ab raat me hi baat krenge..", Cabir said while getting up and entering into the washroom. Manik got suspicious as Cabir was avoiding the topic so he came in front of him and blocked his path.

"We will talk about it now only..", Manik informed, "Ab chup chap bta kya baat h.."
"Yar Vo..", Cabir tried to frame his words.
"Vo kya?"
"Vo actually.."
"Actually what?"
"Yarr.."
"Yaar kya Cabir?", Manik was frustrated now. He has hardly seen Cabir like this fumbling with words.
"I think am in love with Navya!", Cabir blurted out on one go. Manik didn't said anything so Cabir managed to look towards him and he saw Manik's dumbfounded expressions.

"What? Kya kaha tune? Come again!", Manik unable to believe what he listened asked again. Cabir rolled his eyes and sat on the bed again, "Don't over react yar..!!"
"Over react? Seriously? You are saying that you think that you are 'In love' with Navya.. Navya Deewan!! Abe sale tujhe Puri duniya me Harshad Ki biwi mili thi pyaar krne ke liye?", Manik exclaimed air quoting the words 'In love'.
"Look who's saying.. Jo khud usi Harshad Ki behen ke peeche pdha hua hai!", Cabir said with sarcasm dripping from his mouth.
"There's a difference.. I don't love her.. And me Nandani ke peeche Deewans ko barbaad krne ke liye hi pdha hun.. But you are saying that you love Navya dammit!!", Manik was getting restless. Cabir just lay his head on the headboard of the bed, "I know you don't love her.. Tujhe btane Ki zarurat nhi h..", Cabir again taunted. Manik rolled his eyes and again came back to the topic, "Dekh Cabir.. I will be the happiest to destroy Harshad's marriage life.. But you are saying you love Navya.. So if she's happy with that jerk.. We cant do anything!"
"I know.. You don't worry about it.. just chill!", Cabir said finally getting up from the bed while Manik just sighed because he knew his friend well. He knew that Cabir didn't wanted to take him stress about this.

"Vese Nandani kahan h?", Cabir asked in order to change the topic.
"She is still sleeping in my room..", Manik informed.
"Chal tu ja phir.. I will handle everything.. Don't worry!", Cabir said assuring Manik.
"I know!", Manik smiled and went out.




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I know am damn late. So, extremely sorry for that!! And shayd thoda chota update bhi tha.. Toh just forgive me pls..

Hope you all liked the update.. I have never written intimate scenes. This was my first attempt.. So, Don't forget to comment! And guys the response on last update was seriously very less.. It really left me disheartening.. So pls comment in order to keep me motivated.. M waiting like Anything to read your comments again .. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
You are dam late...

But love the update...

Manik know about his feelings towards nandu but he ignore it for his revenge...

Waiting for next...

What happen nandu got to know about Manik n the story come on real polouge track...

Please don't be late...

We readers are eagerly waiting for update

Please do it fast...

Don't take so much time...dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: samiamalhotra

You are dam late...

But love the update...

Manik know about his feelings towards nandu but he ignore it for his revenge...

Waiting for next...

What happen nandu got to know about Manik n the story come on real polouge track...

Please don't be late...

We readers are eagerly waiting for update

Please do it fast...

Don't take so much time...dear...





Tysm for commenting.. And will try to update on time from next time.. 😊

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