A Fan-Fiction//OurLoveWillHealUs\\Chapter 13(b)! SENT via PM - Page 46

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Posted: 9 years ago
You're too late nikku...
Update was good and lengthy too...par not like as always of yours...
Uff... Kiss was too good...par heart wrenching is it's not natural it's just part of his so called plan 😭😭
Poor nandu... Dad and bhaai ki ghunaa ki sazaa inko mil rahi hai... She would have confessed agar he didn't stopped.. It's really sad.. 🥺🥺
And Cabir is in love with deewan family bahu... Interesting...
Hope he too doesn't break already broken heart of her...
Nandu ka kya hoga... She should backfire his plan by making him fall for her...
Uff...Manik is not entirely wrong either... 😡 😡

Continue soon
Excited for next update

Take care 😛
Edited by Snehasn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.. manik is such a monster.. nandu ke life spoil kar rha h.. cauz of her family jiske bare mei she don't even noe.. hope he realizes soon ke kittee bade mistake kar rha h.. btw when we will get the present update.. prologue se continue kab hoga?? Waiting to noe ke nandu kya karege wid manik.. update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
the kiss was amazing😳
though it was fake 4 manik 💔
nandu almost confessed
but manik stopped her💔
poor nandu
she was being played by him🥺
cabir is in love with navya
plz cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
story is getting more n more interesting day by da



awesome update

waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovedd the updatee!
Cant wait to read the rest of the storyy.
Update sooon:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Nikku
Thks for the PM

U R SUPER SUPER LATE...
Esse gayab hojaye ho yaar tum sabh...

BUT WE HAVE NO CHOICE RATHER THAN WAIT, BCOZ U WRITERS R ALL SO AWESOME
ANYWAYS THE UPDATE WAS SUPERB.
MANAN KISS WAS FABULOUS
U SHOWED IT TOO WELL
THOUGH IT WAS NOT A REAL ONE FOR MANIK BUT HE DIDN'T LET NANDINI FEEL IN THAT WAY
INFACT HE WAS KISSING HER WITH ALL LOVE.
FEEL BAD FOR NANDU, SHE DOESN'T EVEN KNOW THAT ANYTHING ABOUT HER FAMILY BEING SMUGGLERS..

NANDU ALMOST CONFESSED HER LOVE TO MANIK, WHICH MANIK KNEW WOULD BE COMING.
WHY DID HE STOP HER ???
HE HAS SOME OTHER PLAN TOO FOR IT ????

WANT TO KNOW WHATS HIS NEXT MOVE ..
WAITING ..
PLZ UPDATE THE NX PART VERY SOON AND COMPENSATE FOR BEING LATE.
TAKE CARE
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow this was sooo good...
so this was your first attempt writing intimate scene...awww
but u hv written pretty well...

this was manikz plan to stop the giant wheel on top...n kiss her...heheee

nandini had started loving him n so as manik but he isn't ready to accept the fact...

in the end he said he don't love her... right now he hasn't realized that or if he had realized then also he isn't ready to accept the fact...huhhh

a/c manik he is doing all this according to his plan so that he can execute his plan...but when nandini will come to know about this reality... she would be heartbroken...and when he will realize his mistake then it will b very late...

n cabir started loving navya...awww

if possible please b regular... pleaseee
N THANKS FOR THE PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehasn

You're too late nikku...
Update was good and lengthy too...par not like as always of yours...
Uff... Kiss was too good...par heart wrenching is it's not natural it's just part of his so called plan 😭😭
Poor nandu... Dad and bhaai ki ghunaa ki sazaa inko mil rahi hai... She would have confessed agar he didn't stopped.. It's really sad.. 🥺🥺
And Cabir is in love with deewan family bahu... Interesting...
Hope he too doesn't break already broken heart of her...
Nandu ka kya hoga... She should backfire his plan by making him fall for her...
Uff...Manik is not entirely wrong either... 😡 😡

Continue soon
Excited for next update

Take care 😛





Hehe.. I think you are too confused between who's right and who's wrong.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hey Nikku

Thks for the PM

U R SUPER SUPER LATE...
Esse gayab hojaye ho yaar tum sabh...

BUT WE HAVE NO CHOICE RATHER THAN WAIT, BCOZ U WRITERS R ALL SO AWESOME
ANYWAYS THE UPDATE WAS SUPERB.
MANAN KISS WAS FABULOUS
U SHOWED IT TOO WELL
THOUGH IT WAS NOT A REAL ONE FOR MANIK BUT HE DIDN'T LET NANDINI FEEL IN THAT WAY
INFACT HE WAS KISSING HER WITH ALL LOVE.
FEEL BAD FOR NANDU, SHE DOESN'T EVEN KNOW THAT ANYTHING ABOUT HER FAMILY BEING SMUGGLERS..

NANDU ALMOST CONFESSED HER LOVE TO MANIK, WHICH MANIK KNEW WOULD BE COMING.
WHY DID HE STOP HER ???
HE HAS SOME OTHER PLAN TOO FOR IT ????

WANT TO KNOW WHATS HIS NEXT MOVE ..
WAITING ..
PLZ UPDATE THE NX PART VERY SOON AND COMPENSATE FOR BEING LATE.
TAKE CARE





Tysm dear! Hope I will update on time from next time.. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg
Manik ne purposely rukwaya tha giant wheel damm
The kiss was hottt
What's happening? Y is manik going back? Who's this sher uncle?
Ooo cabir loves navya
Thodi mystery reveal kr do
Thnkz 4 the pm

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