Travesty of Mr Malhotra - Manan SS Chapter 18 Page 64

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Hey everyone 😊

I am probably the youngest member here..I have read certain fan fictions even written some sweet romantic ones ...it's my first attempt here with a dark story...Hope you will like and give it a chance..😃

NOTE : It's a dark fan fiction not that dark though ..main character is grey shaded ..I love greys more than black or white

A brief Plot

It's about how the lead girl..Nandini who finds out that the man she is married to is not some jolly kind she thought..in fact he is much gruesome and has variety of shades ..he always has this mask on him..no one can tell what he is thinking ..every person tell her a different story..intrigued by him she searches for the clues in his past and finds out that she doesn't belong here ..unaware of the devil who is present everywhere..she can't leave him even if she wanted to..


Though the story has mysterious vibes..it has certain twists and tales to unfold and will show the path to love isn't always a bed of roses..it can have thorns and you might have to pick them ..no matter how hurt you are and toss them out of your life to conquer evil..

Please show your support and leave feedback if you want me to continue 😊

I know it sounds a bit cliche but it will help me to see if you are interested or not..sorry if it sounds rude or offensive ...i didn't meant to at all 😳



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Very nice..plz continue soon :)
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Thank you..will do 😊
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Originally posted by: sonia1000

Very nice..plz continue soon :)


Thank you so much..will do 😊
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Sounds interesting
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Chapter 1 - Their first night


And they lived happily Ever After ..

Or well is it that their story just started..?


Gazing at the stars standing in one corner by the window a girl was feeling a bit nervous..she looked upon her reflection in the mirror..indeed decked in florescent red bridal attire she was looking every bit of a man's fantasy..

And suddenly she heard the door unlocking and there she saw a dark tall figure treading as fast as possible and in a second it covered the huge leap and stood near her..

Their raging breaths mingled as he clutched her waist tightly and hopped on her .."Nandini..Today..you are mine.."-he said nibbling her ears and in an instant he tore her front dress apart..

"Manik"- she shivered like a leaf ..

With in a swish he took her pouty pinkish lips for a brutal passionate kiss..he licked her, savoured her and bit her harshly..and as she gasped he barged his tongue inside her with a force and tasted every nook and corner of her mouth fondling her curves at the appropriate places..soon she felt herself breathless..she tried to move away but his hold on her became more tighter .. he squeezed her harshly and she moaned the loudest..


Her brown orbitals flicked wide and before she could know anything he pushed her on the bed and in a flash came on top of her.. he cupped her br***ts and puckered them tight..he sucked her cleavage hard ..giving wet kisses on her stomach , shoulder he bit near her neck and her collarbone..she wriggled under him and held him more tightly..he carefully removed her lower clothes and massaged her lower area in between her thighs ..soon she was all wet and was breathing heavily..it was the time he understood ..he stood straight to devoid himself of any clothes and covered themselves with a velvety duvet..

Without wasting any time he pounced on her and entered inside her with a jerk..and as she shrieked under the pain he placed soothing warm kisses on her forehead , eyes and drank her tears trailing her supple cheeks..

"I love you.."-he whispered in her ears..and cocooned her safely in his arms for the rest of the night..





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I know it wasn't much longer but for the time being I though it was okay for the starters

Indeed there are many more twists awaiting

Please give it a thumbs up or comment if you want to see more 😊

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Awesomeee just loved it mann you are so nice writr and do pm me :D
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Awesomeee just loved it mann you are so nice writer and do pm me :D
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Originally posted by: LIFEMANAN

Interesting continue soon


Thank you ..will do soon 😃
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Originally posted by: MaNanholapeople

Awesomeee just loved it mann you are so nice writr and do pm me :D


Thank you so Much..😃
Will do PM you from the next !

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