FF-Thirst Of Love With Restless heart [Chapter 4A,B/Pg147&148] - Page 83

Originally posted by: spreaddsmiles

Hey I read all the 3 parts in a go.
It's amazing & different
I loved Manan
They r so cute
But y r dey fighting now
Nd I want to ask Nyonika doesn't like Nandini or is she not her daughter or she only wants money & property?
I m confused abt tha
Please PM me other parts. I saw ur note abt it.
Thank you
Take care

Originally posted by: MyGuitarVina

RES

plz pm me

i will UNRES it after reading next part

Rahul

UNRES

the concept was really good
noynika always evil,
you made druv also evil y? he never fit in that character but your story so i am okay with it, i always have good image of druv so i sai this
do bring cabir soon, can't see broken manan, and open the suspense soon, manik is poor so he can't buy a perfume and what case he is fighting'
everything id so confuing
both love each other
so roma and nyonika and druv are in one team,

i like it
different story
continue soon
its an request don't pm updates in pm, only upload here, if people like it then they do comment you can't force them to do comment, because i saw many other writers also here who got 50 60 page comments so y can't u, don't force anybody, we can think that what is missing in our story that people don't comment, and u will improve your skill u will surly get cooments

i also a writer and i am new on here and this is my openion
plz don't angry i to thnik like this just share with you, and its your with what u do nest

btw thankx for pm

update soon, if u not post do pm me, i will complete my part of giving feedback regurly


rahul